The Beginning of the Conferred Gods Transforms into a Turtle

It feels like the novel from 20 years ago, so silly, and the force value is too low. It feels almost like Zhongwu.

I'm a bit new to the characters, and the system could use more functions. Becoming a god is not about fighting and killing, but about being human and worldly.

Xiao Baiwen, there is no point in looking like a fool.

Let's start a new book. This book is absolutely cool.

It doesn't matter, just start a new book. At least make an outline and create a group. You can invite some book friends to discuss the outline. After you write it, you can show it to people you trust and make sure there are no too poisonous points before publishing it. There are not many good-looking novels in the Fengshen series. It is best to have a general outline of Fengshen. The direction remains unchanged (after all, the protagonist cannot change the ending from the beginning), but some changes in the tragedy will teach most people that they are actually unfair. There are also characters like Nezha and Tu Xingsun at the beginning who are naughty children and steal other people's daughters. It is best to teach them a lesson. It was too uncomfortable to watch at the beginning. If you are afraid of being scolded in Bilibili and chapter reviews, please add 🐶 first. I read that the author's attitude is quite good, unlike other authors who directly criticize I hope my opinions can be helpful to the author, and it is best to surpass the senior brother (the senior brother was too lazy to read it later, and felt that he no longer felt like a god) Finally, some tragedies must be changed, not necessarily all, but at least don't make them worse than death.

No one will scold you if you read this book. Reorganize your thoughts and start again.

I didn't want to comment at first, but I might as well say a few words! The two religious figures alone are incompatible.

The protagonist's brain seems to be flooded and he throws himself into the street. Needless to say about this book.

With this name, you know that you are in high school and don't waste your time.

I can't bear to accept a person like the protagonist who is afraid of death and betraying his teammates.

Why not join the Western Sect? All the prehistoric novels are about joining the Jie Sect.

The protagonist is mentally retarded, there is no golden finger, and the Jiejiao religion has become an "ordinary" religion. You, the author, are indeed very poisonous.

Master Tongtian is not afraid of the other two sects at all~_~, especially the Jie sect is very united and its power is no worse than the other two sects. The human race also has three emperors and five emperors, and human luck. Emperor Xin is also the emperor of the human race, and must be protected by the luck of the human race. Even the saints cannot directly attack him. As a result, a weakling who doesn't know where he came from can take action against the human race. Your modification is really stronger than yours even the weakest martial arts power system. The author's book is useless. He should study more and write a new one!

What do you think? I don't even read similar dogs like Long-eared Dingguangxian.

You need to think deeply when opening a book, and you need to be cautious when walking. Being old and miserable, be careful of death.

Books written like this can be put on shelves and collected for money😵😵😵

Falling in Chapter 5, come on

There is no logic at all, the plot is so bloody, this kind of novel should not exist in the world.

Use jokes in moderation, and use the pain of the protagonist to force certain jokes or classic plots. It can only be said to be nondescript. For example, in a comedy movie, a knife cannot kill anyone, but it is completely different in reality.

Is this the author's first time writing a novel? ? ?