Bald Style God

It's too rubbish, but I have the nerve to take it out. What I wrote in front of it is too rubbish. It's unclear what the priority is. What the hell is it? This rubbish book of yours can make me famous. I write my name backwards.

What is this written? I was confused when I read it.

What are you writing? It's a mess.

The idea is good, but the writing is not very good. It's too messy and I can't understand what to write. Mainly because I think the first few chapters make it easy for us to not know whether it is a dream, fact or memory. It's so painful to watch

The more I read, the more nonsense I get. Is this where the nonsense comes from?

Did the memory section transition too quickly?

The writing is very messy. . . Don't know what to say

What happened to the bald head? All bald people are powerful! ! ! ! !

Huh? It's amazing, I can actually talk

The writing is messy and incomprehensible. This book is really rubbish.

The sea, you are all water, and you have covered so many golden mountains

When someone says he is a powerful person, he always writes about being a nouveau riche? If a powerful person has no cultivation, if he can meet a powerful person, he is just a rich bumpkin.

Are all novels like that?

Rewrite it! I only ask three questions: Has the outline been written? Has anyone set it up?

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