Silver Duke

Problems with plot design Judging from the writing style, the author should not be a novice, but the plot design is really speechless, and now even the slightest interest in following it has been worn away.       ，，，，，，，？ Then he should be considered a waste and be made things difficult. It's okay to make things difficult, but can the method of selection be less low-level? Wouldn't it be straightforward to let everyone go to heaven? The protagonist is from a top family, and his grandfather is one of the most powerful. Not to mention that he can live for more than ten years, he can do a lot of things in one year. Doesn't that kind of writing bring down all the nobles by several levels? Whether the protagonist has a sense of family status is not the most important, readers will not care, but is it really necessary to spend a lot of pen and ink showing off the feelings of a saint? The forced installation of a shopping plot may have been intended to be funny, but in reality it felt like a bunch of bored retarded children playing house. A group of vampires appeared in the middle, and I wrote several chapters. I really don't know what to say. By the way, the protagonist's grandfather is calling the protagonist to go home

Boring! Foreigners' ways are annoying, no wonder they rush to the streets

Chapter 93 seems to have been swallowed. Repeatedly thereafter. It feels like some content is missing

I can't understand it. The next few pictures repeat the previous chapters, and the latest chapter doesn't connect with the previous ones. Or did I read a fake book?

When will the protagonist's bloodline awaken? Don't say it has to wait until the later stages.

Where should the focus of the novel be?                                                                                                                                                                                                                             " If it weren't for the good writing, most of the characters in it being fairly well-educated, and the chance to save them, I would have given up long ago.        ，，，， The theme of the novel can be closer to the power game genre, but it is best not to have too many protagonists. The stars will shine but will not obscure the brilliance of the sun. Except for the last moment when the aristocratic struggle is exhausted, it is mostly playing with fire, and those who blatantly jump out to cause trouble are either cannon fodder or small characters who cannot be on the stage.        ，，，，，，？

I feel that the author should pay attention when writing the book later The first 20 chapters are golden chapters, important chapters that attract readers to stay But the previous chapters: the main line is not clear and too bland. Good writing can't hide the blandness, but if the writing is bad, it becomes chaos. Furthermore, the protagonists and supporting characters are a bit blurry in the past. There are more than a dozen characters in a few chapters. This is too broad, but it leads to the fact that none of the characters have outstanding characteristics and no one is impressive. The main reason is that the protagonist does nothing, and the author doesn't give any hints to whet the reader's appetite. Then the plot is like a straight line, without any ups and downs, making people have no desire to eagerly read the next chapter. Writing a book is either at the peak of luck or in the climax. This is the rhythm of writing books now.

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I haven't even finished the first chapter and a fiancée is here?