I Became an Evil Spirit

It's dark and shabby, and the protagonist is too bottomless. It may be quite real, but it has no charm. I'm surprised that this book hasn't been criticized. Generally speaking, it's difficult to review this kind of subject.

After reading seven chapters, leave a comment! To see! But the writing, plot, and plot handling... Shouldn't be complained about┐('~`；)┌ Tom? Suning? Law? Well, with all due respect! What did you write? Maybe it's not to my liking! Maybe others will like to see it! I am Shennong...

The work is so tiring and writing the book is so difficult. After complaining, let's talk about the polarizing reviews of this book. Whether it's pornographic, toxic, or uninteresting, I quietly shut my mouth and couldn't refute. I don't want to prove anything and explain more. But I can responsibly say that at the end of the first volume, it will definitely be the beginning of the epic. Of course, the writing is not enough for me to fart.

A psychopath wrote down what he wanted to do, and a group of psychopaths looked at it and cheered to each other, "Everyone, come here to see people of the same kind!"

Friday, September 25, 6 a. M. In this very hurried morning, I received a notification that Chapter 7 entered the dark room. I said to the website: It is being modified, please keep talking. He Xiahui: So good!!!!!! ………………………… This is a day worth remembering, and I sincerely look forward to your care and love in the future. Thank you.

The writing is very good, and the hw is enough S(ಡωಡ) Read it now. This book may disappear at any time.

Let's talk about the results of practicing. The plot is incoherent and the jump is too fast, which can easily lead to drama. This is because I don't have enough writing skills and don't have time to devote myself to writing group portraits. Besides, there are too many plots, and I will be reported sooner or later. I don't want to get into trouble. The ending is okay. No matter how much I write, my protagonist will end up like this. After all, evil is punished. After the last talk, I took a while to summarize and think about writing a Warcraft-type competitive novel.

In fact, this book places too much emphasis on sexual desire. The whole line is devoted to finding women. There are only thirty or forty pictures, but I have no ability. The woman found four, forty pictures, four women. Do you think this looks like a ghost, or a pervert? Of course, the author's writing is good, but the positioning of the book is a bit skewed. My personal opinion should be to focus on scary and weird. Find one or two ghost wives as seasoning, rather than thinking about women all day long. If the positioning is skewed, it will be difficult to score high. After all, where is the title of the book? I hope the author will think more about this aspect.

I endured reading a few of them, and then I vomited. What the hell was written? The point is that I didn't understand what you were writing. I know all the words and you could spit them out for breakfast.

In this subject, you must write about the characteristics of the protagonist. What must be the grudge and Sadako's motive for killing? It's okay to kill, but not indiscriminately. Unless it's a regional killing like Crystal Lake Jason, it's better to have a unique personality.

The author's idea of ​​killing a thug and bringing a daughter with him is simply superfluous. After all, it is the people who hire thugs who let thugs hurt others, including those who persecute the injured and those who hire thugs, as well as the deep social darkness behind it. The protagonist said this to find reasons for himself, which only shows that he is just a hypocrite looking for reasons for himself. The behavior of raising a daughter is just like Cao Cao's, "Your wife, I will raise her" It is either dark and does not mention having a daughter, or it is written off in one stroke. Dealing with it this way makes obsessive-compulsive disorder very uncomfortable

It is indeed difficult for this book to succeed, but the subject matter of this book is good, and it could not have been developed like this. Personally, I think it is better to develop it like a ghost story and a horror story.

Is this an evil spirit? The protagonist said that he only eats bad people

How can I put it? The more I watch, the more I feel that the protagonist has no humanity, a bit like a god aloof, venting his desires wantonly, which is a bit interesting.

... I can't understand it a bit, I feel like I've been looking for a female ghost, and... It really feels like reading a small H book

The author with more than 2,000 recommendation votes is really good at brushing it off

I like rules-based killing, farewell

Author, let me give you a suggestion. You need to have 100 fan points before you can speak. This way, many people will not have the opportunity to criticize. The current Internet is too violent and you can't consider the harm your words will cause to others.

Take advantage of the heat to get in the morning, hurry up and get in the car, you will be towed away before you know it.

Even though the author is so cool, he will enter the palace sooner or later, so read it as early as possible

After seeing the exciting part, I shot a gun to show respect.