Refining Dao to Kill Heaven

Comments have been waiting for a long time. Is this the end? Or... At first I thought it was about fighting and killing or something with a bit of fantasy, but after reading a few chapters, it was just normal things in school. There is no big problem with the author's writing style. He writes well in many aspects and has a clear picture. But there is a problem with paragraphing. When I see the middle position, the paragraph is too long, so I don't want to read it. As far as the story is concerned, as I wrote in the early stage, it is a bit bland and not very interesting to readers. However, this is not easy to change. Sometimes it needs to be changed drastically. Come on⊙▽⊙