Create a Small World in the Heavens

Author, I feel like you have a big problem here. The first 100 million people poured into a small country with a population of one million. What do you think? Their supplies were not enough to last an hour. Millions of people. Just a county-level population actually owns a land half the size of China, entering the virtual world. After learning Wing Chun for a day without practicing the basics, I can actually become much stronger. Are you practicing Chinese martial arts or cultivating immortality? The power generated by the will of hundreds of millions of people can only create a dregs of Anjin. There is also dark energy that turns dark. It's all about skills, not state. And you are in Duan (now in the world of martial arts, every force does not have heavy weapons, so Huajin warriors are like human-shaped nuclear bombs, with strong deterrence. If these Huajin warriors assassinate the top leaders of each force, basically no one can escape the assassination), Huajin who cannot even catch one or two shots is like a human-shaped nuclear bomb.

There is something wrong with the direction of the book. Personal opinions, please don't comment. 1: I couldn't hold on after just reading the first chapter. First of all, the protagonist. The created world was created so quickly? There is no need for the protagonist to come up with a background realm. There are also stories about people, big and small countries in various places, branches of the continent, stories, villains and the like, all messy things. Did you come up with these things so quickly? You are afraid that the system did not create it for you. 2: The system suddenly appears on a person. If that person is a normal person, they will be surprised. The protagonist is so calm? 3: Just the beginning of it gave me the feeling that it was too eager to cut into reality. If it were placed in the real world, society would be a little uncomfortable. 4: The first chapter at the beginning has a lot of words, but it felt a bit confusing to me, both in terms of the protagonist's calmness after getting the system and in the story telling. Too fast. 5: Personal complaints. Even some books that seem to resurrect mythological characters don't dare to write like you and finalize everything in one day. For example, the myth is resurrected. The writing is quite good, it's the eunuch. 6: Personally, I would like to give up. Readers who like chronic and slow pace are not recommended to watch. 7: To be honest, your introduction is really good, but I was so disappointed after reading the original version. Attention! The above contents are all personal opinions and complaints, and the trolls and black people are ugly and rejected. No matter how bad this book is, it doesn't deserve to be criticized. At least it proves one person's hard work I want to know how my comment contains illegal information? Is it because the reviewing brother couldn't finish it or is it intentional? Can I write a book review? Is it okay if I mark my personal opinions and comments? I don't understand. Each of my comments is the best of other authors. Either the best one or the most likes. I don't understand. I don't complain. It's my personal opinion and complaint. Didn't you see the beginning and end are marked? Worth reporting for not showing me? Is the reviewer wrong or I am wrong? You don't know from my comments?

The problem of integrating worlds is huge. One or two worlds are not visible. After integrating into hundreds of worlds, the proportion of the population of the main world will be pitifully small, which means that the main world has been completely invaded by the creation world. In the later stage, there may not be even one main world population among tens of thousands of people.

Humanity Red Dust Apprentice Author I feel like you have a big problem. The first 100 million people poured into a small country with a population of one million. What do you think? They don't have enough supplies for an hour's consumption. Millions of people. The population at the county level actually owns land half the size of China, entering the virtual world. After studying Wing Chun for a day without practicing any basics, I can actually become much stronger. Are you practicing Chinese martial arts or cultivating immortality? The power generated by the wishes of hundreds of millions of people can only create a dregs of An Jin. There is also dark energy that turns dark. They are all skills, not realm . And you are in Duan (now in the world of martial arts, every force doesn't have heavy weapons, so Huajin warriors are like human-shaped nuclear bombs, with very strong deterrence. If these Huajin warriors assassinate the top leaders of each force, basically no one can escape the assassination), Huajin who can't even catch two shots is like a human-shaped nuclear bomb.

I'm just a little worried about this! Why are people in the real world so powerful? Even if the time difference is 10 times, it doesn't take many days. Why are there so many bright and dark powers? In just a few days, the king knighted a person without status? Doesn't this king have any political censorship? The world has become reality too quickly!

After reading the introduction, I made a complaint. Why integrate into the modern world?

It is a mistake to first integrate into modern times. You will know this when you think about the time when Europeans first arrived in America.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

How often? ? ? It's been 5 days! I don't want eunuchs. . .