Super God Battle Pet Master

After reading ten chapters, the protagonist has pretended at least four times, and the class reunion is really poisonous. If you are bored, don't go there. What are you going to do there, and you are not familiar with it? Watch them pretending to be a cup and then slap you in the face? There is no battle pet text at all, only cup filling text, and it is also a very blunt cup. If the war pet is replaced with superpowers and spiritual energy recovery, the story can still continue to work hard, because the whole story is cupping, and it is not fun to pretend, it is awkward.

Brother, just treat this book as a practice, and don't think about getting results or anything like that. I've probably read a few pictures, and your writing skills need to be improved. I was confused after reading the first few pictures, and try not to impose restrictions just to limit your strength. Objectively speaking, it is a bit difficult for your book to get results unless you change the first few pictures and make the later ones more exciting. Think about your outline. Don't be pretentious at all times. Even if you write it a little plainly, it will be fine. Someone will read it

What the hell are you looking at? I can't beat anything. I've been reborn for a year and I like to show off.

The rebirth plus system is mixed like this, it may be the crappiest starting point.

As a reborn person, it is still very important to have a memory gap. The most annoying thing is that people who clearly know that rebirth is a golden finger don't use it. What about those battle pets with good qualifications? As for those people who were awesome and invincible in their previous lives, if they say their teammates will be awesome in the future, then you have to describe it! Anyway, it was unpleasant to watch, and I could tell there was a lot of story behind it, but it was too confusing.

I just found out that the author likes to delete comments. I'm convinced. If I don't delete this article, I would like to advise the latecomers that this book is very poisonous.

The new book sets sail and everyone is welcome to invest. The status should be changed quickly. If you want to invest, hurry up. In addition, I hope everyone will collect more and vote more. The new book issue needs your support!

Battle pets are also relatives and partners, come on.

I liked it very much at first, it was a healing novel, but I didn't expect that there would be battles later on. I thought the protagonist was a big boss, but I didn't expect that he just had some strength.

It started well. As soon as the rich second generation came to cause trouble, the plot immediately became low.

In the world of war pets, one prefers the kind of friendship with one's own beast pet, like brothers, like siblings. Raise first.

Ah, this came from a reader, there are too few pet articles, let's work together.

I didn't believe it when they said it was poisonous and wanted to see it for myself, but it turned out that it was really poisonous to death! Chapter 25 What the hell? It was obviously a very dangerous trap set by someone else, but he actually said that he had to hide his strength and only bring one pet with him? Is your brain full of water?

After reading Chapter 10, I don't know how serious it is. They all emphasize that time is running out and they don't develop and waste time by pretending.

To be honest, the rebirth plus system is either directly invincible, or just beat it if you are unhappy. Or just write one. Also, it would be better to write about the growth history of pets in the early stage. At least it will let us know the information about each pet, and conspiracies and other things can be written later. There is no need to cooperate with those who do bad things. Anyway, the author really needs to improve his writing skills.

I'm very confused. I've read more than 10 chapters, but I still don't understand what's written? The world view is vague, the task relationship is confused, the level is unclear, and I don't know what the plug-in does? No wonder my grades are not good. How can I get good grades if I don't explain everything clearly at first?