
A Person Starts as a Spearman in Douluo
人在斗罗开局是枪兵
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 162k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I'm so tired of this kind of novel. The first part is fine, but the second part is so messy. I think about that and write that.
In a world where personal force is extremely prominent, the role of the army will really be much smaller. The author might as well try to reduce the number of soldiers in the army, increase their strength, and take the path of elite troops, or distinguish between ordinary soldier troops and soul master troops, describe battles separately, add high-level battles with generals, and reduce the description of low-level soldiers 🤔. I don't know how to describe it, just a personal suggestion.
I hate stallion behavior. Now that I have an affair with Ning Wanyue, I won't be half-hearted anymore. Come on😊
Why not, shining in the final holy spear, or the piercing spear of death, the killing spear of the little sun?
Don't want a heroine 🙏
When you go to the battlefield as a soldier, you still have to go to the academy? Is it necessary? Is it okay to not match it at all? It feels a little naive. The next step is to take the army route and then join something like a convoy as a leader or something. Or be Bibi Dong's guard captain or personal bodyguard or something. It's better than going to college. Why do you have to have relationships with other people? Is it necessary?
To be honest. Shrek Academy is just average. First of all, the teaching staff is second-rate. (Including teacher level, teaching methods, and hardware facilities) The teacher went to Shrek as a late master, and the theory is the highlight. The teaching method, okay. Exercise and cooperate with each other. Bad way of teaching. Hardware facilities: In the school in the village, even the simulated training environment was kindly sponsored by Liu Erlong. There is no Liu Erlong. There is no chance to register for the continent-wide soul master competition, just like this school cannot participate in the college entrance examination. Student Resources: High. To be honest. I can't figure out why a school with such poor conditions requires such high qualifications to admit students. Combined with what Frank said about making his college the best in the continent. It is not difficult to see that Frank is very utilitarian. There is also the so-called soul fighting life and death training. It's just an excuse for the college's lack of funds. . Just like a military academy, it doesn't say that you will be trained to life and death as soon as you enter. Let's take a look at Shrek Academy before the protagonist and his group arrived. Only Qin Ming came forward. Within ten years of running the school, I taught a famous student. Then it kept blowing. . . Moreover, if it were not for meeting the protagonist and his group, the aura would be added. In fact, Shrek was on the verge of bankruptcy. Haven't you seen the dean come out to sell goods? . Add a dog head.
Your martial arts writing is too exaggerated. What is the concept of the Milky Way? More than 200,000 light-years, the entire Douluo World multiplied by 1 trillion cannot condense the first soul ring for him. If the martial soul can condense the soul rings on its own, again, the Douluo World multiplied by 10,000 cannot condense the first soul ring, because the energy is not enough, and you don't look at how big the entire galaxy is. Maybe he sucks it casually, and the entire Douluo World is destroyed.
No, other people's wives are not good gunmen.
Look at Douluo Jiujian, his protagonist's army is going to launch space battleships to bombard the God Realm. The materials of the space battleship are all made from the anatomy of God Shura.
The heroine Qian Renxue will be fine, and the two-person turn will be enough. The subsequent soul skills should be strengthened, right? After all, the technology is there. I think the first soul skill can double the comprehensive value (body strengthening), and the second soul skill is weapon enchantment. Twin martial souls, demon breaking and bleeding are definitely needed. The above only represents my personal opinion. If it bothers me, please contact me to delete it (although I never read private messages)
Entering the palace unexpectedly, disappointment is inevitable. To be honest, this is the first book I have an appetite for.
If there are multiple heroines, add a tear mole, but if there is only one heroine, don't add one. Brother Gun's tear mole has the ability to charm, and he died because of the tear mole.
An army will collapse if its battle losses exceed a certain level. Humans are human beings, not like Zerg. And for an army, commanders account for a large proportion. This is the role of beheading operations. The above is an ordinary world that focuses on collective strength. In an ordinary world like this, which focuses on personal force, will ordinary people fight to the death? How many years will it take for Wuhun Palace to have the power to unify the continent? How will the author develop in the future? Rebellion? Who is the fool to use the power of the empire to develop his own power?
There is no shortage of high-end martial arts among Douluo fans. On the contrary, there are very few authors who can write new ideas about ordinary martial arts. I don't understand why they have to write like this.
The protagonist's goal is to unify Douluo Continent. If you want the soul beast to surrender, you must solve the problem of the soul master's soul ring, and the soul ring is produced by killing the soul beast. Without solving this problem, it is impossible for the protagonist to unify Douluo Continent unless all the soul beasts are killed.
Hey... This, the results are really not good-looking. This subject matter is quite new, and when I looked at the list, I was actually the number one fan (out of respect for copyright, I will subscribe to almost every chapter of any book I read.) Maybe the results of the work are not that ideal, but I also hope that the author can continue to do more. If it's a eunuch, it doesn't really matter. I hope you can write a work that satisfies you.
It's been a month. . . , Should be a eunuch. . .
You can consider the martial soul clone Just like the martial soul of the seventh elder of the Haotian Sect, you can use two hammers
It's been two months, he should have entered the palace by now, right?