The Happy Man of the Dragon Clan

It feels like it was written casually. In the previous paragraph, I was still writing about the protagonist. Suddenly, I became a fan of Lu Mingfei. It is actually a chapter and a half long. . Inexplicably, he got 100 million US dollars, inexplicably turned the protagonist into a wealthy man, and then followed up with a series of cool and cool actions to show off his wealth. The timeline seems to be a plaything in the author's writing, jumping greatly, and then feeling that the plot is lacking, and spending a lot of time writing some irrelevant things. For example, the trip to the Three Gorges. It's very embarrassing. They are going to slay a dragon. The goal of this operation is very powerful. In the setting of Jiangnan, Lu Mingfei is allowed to witness the cruelty of the dragon slaying cause! It's not for you to have a party on the deck chatting with professors. As for Senior Sister Dong and Su Xiaoqiang, regardless of the former's financial background, in any case, he is more suitable to be a girlfriend than the outsider Su Xiaoqiang, right? You said that you like the protagonist Su, but there is no plot to prove it, and it seems like a decision was made arbitrarily. From this point of view, it is not as good as Zhao Xiaobai.

I was persuaded to quit once in the first few chapters. Later, Shuhuang saw this book in several book lists, so I came back and read it again. The period from the first battle in the acceptance system to before entering the academy really gave me a big surprise. It really has the flavor of the dragon clan, and it gives me a feeling of being a young man. After earning 100 million U. S. Dollars, I couldn't hold it back anymore, and I really felt the author's immaturity. So after taking in the second female lead, the character of the protagonist completely collapsed, and the power system and emotional route also collapsed. Comparing the protagonist in more than 10 chapters with the protagonist in more than 80 chapters, he didn't seem to be the same person at all. Lu Mingfei's good brother who had similar personalities inexplicably turned into a classic male protagonist with split personality, which directly made me fall to the ground. It's a pity.

Shennong is here... Shennong is dead

Shennong is here... Shennong is dead

From Zhihu, general comment: It is worth watching if you put on the filter of the dragon world view, otherwise, I will just watch it for now. The writing style is very good among newcomers and is very commendable. There may be some problems with the control of the plot's overall framework. The unexpected senior line is an absolute failure. There is no reasonable foreshadowing + no original filter, and it directly leads to changes in the male protagonist's character. I hope the author will consider this in the follow-up. The power system is a little swollen and collapsed, but I am not sure about the author's overall design at the moment, but it seems acceptable at the moment.

I have one thing to say, this is indeed a good book, I will not refute this, but I don't like the cuckold plot. Even the ntr book made me sick. Maybe it's because I have a slight mental mysophobia and I really can't accept it. So bye, I hope the author will not make this mistake in your next book. (Ps: I thought it was a single heroine at first, but I didn't expect that she would cheat on her right after falling in love. What did you think? Why? I've read too many ntr books!!!!!!!!! Fuck)

Personally, it feels very, very strange to write about a harem in Dragon Clan. Dragon Clan is a sad story for me, and I even feel that everyone is innocent, but the protagonist started a harem, which greatly destroyed the sad artistic conception of the original work. Of course, it does not mean that it cannot be written like this. How to write it is the author's right. I am just giving my personal opinion.

Before the senior sister showed up, I thought it was like that, but later I found out that it was just an invincible guy wearing dragon skin, pretending to slap the harem in the face, and a brainless cool novel. It's a pity, Brother Shui's is forced here. I don't have money to go to college, so I can only go to slay dragons. This book made me suspect that it was a trumpet of an old gangster from Jiangnan.

Today is the day when the King of Heaven is here, and Eri must be the heroine.

My wife is awesome

I admire those authors who dare to write about heroines being arrested. And as soon as I grabbed it, I turned the page and said it was from the next day. To be honest, I have read several military novels by Liu Meng. I feel like the heroine was fucked on the same day. For example, ice is sleeping water. My mood exploded when I saw it. The heroine is miserable. There are also wolf teeth. The heroine was killed before the hero could save her. In the novels I read before, the authors more or less wrote about the reasons why kidnappers dare not touch women. You directly said that you were kidnapped, and you also explicitly hinted that the kidnapper had the ability to control minds. Don't tell me anything, what the kidnapper promised the rich boy. 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

Hui Liyi must be with Lu Mingfei! ! ! !

First of all, the author, you must be clear that Yasuo is first and foremost a swordsman. Swordsman is not an ordinary title. Without strength and will, you are not a swordsman. Furthermore, in a world where strength is respected, strength is the prerequisite for happiness. Without strength, it is called death.

Lu Mingfei can consider arranging it for Ling or Nuonuo, and Aso Zhen can arrange it for Caesar. To be honest, Lu Mingfei is not worthy of the little monster 🙂

Author, do you have to write this? Jiangnan has been scolded to death for writing like this. I advise you to change 98 and 99 as soon as possible. Don't commit literary youth disease, okay? You are just impressing yourself. There is no future for disgusting cuckold articles.

Just after explaining the poisonous points in Chapters 98 and 99, another poisonous point comes up? His girlfriend was kidnapped and the kidnapper believed her when he said she was safe? How could there be such a big-hearted person? When you see Eri Yi, you can't walk anymore and go to ask someone for dinner? Su Xiaoqiang is not the hero's girlfriend at all, but a tool to vent her anger.

Let me tell you the truth, don't listen to other people's nonsense. If I give my pear clothes to others, will it still be my pear clothes? To be honest, Zero is indeed a good girl. Aso is such a classic passerby, stop making trouble, I'm really unfamiliar. Don't just think about Xia Mi, doesn't Susie smell good? Again, the curse is not that easy to break.

May I ask if you will buy this book Little Monster? Lu Mingfei, that bad boy, is already bad enough. Stop trying to force those who like him to accept him.

Warning, this book contains cuckold chapters, vomit first as a sign of respect

She started a harem while feeling guilty about her girlfriend, and now she wants another Eri. I'm so stupid, how stupid was I to donate money to support this book? Wow

The author's literary youth disease is a bit serious. Jiangnan's literary youth disease and self-excitement are very serious, but at least he has writing skills. The author is good and does not imitate the bad ones. The writing style can only be said to be so-so. If it is not so literary and young, it can still be read.

I was a little surprised to see Su Xiaoqiang as the heroine. I read the comment section and then directly watched 98 and 99. I'm sorry for being disgusted. You won't learn the good aspects of Jiang Nan, but you will learn some disgusting things. The key is that he doesn't have his powerful plot and writing style. Withdraw, withdraw.

It's so well written, with a sense of youthful impulse

To be honest, this article does not agree with my three views. It is too disgusting.

See Chapter 100. Finally drove me away. I can't stand it anymore.

Actually, I think it's enough for Concubine Ming to have a senior brother 🤭🤭

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I originally thought that the fake corpse was updated, but it turned out to be a eunuch, which was very uncomfortable.

If you are a fan, at least take the original work in a direction that is more enjoyable to watch and avoid cheating. Giving a perfect ending is the most correct way. The big taboo is to disassemble the original pair. You have to write it better and reflect both people better than the original author. As a result, he trampled on people, had a harem, and dismantled CP. What the hell are you kidding about? Do you think you can write something that is more touching than the original work, or do you think you are just a fan of some of the forums you wrote? The right way is like playing a game to get a perfect ending, unlocking blood, and completing all branch lines to get a perfect ending.

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