Trainer Holding Switch

First of all, congratulations to the author for continuing to update to more than 300 chapters. Then I would like to make a report on my feelings about the current chapter: The writing style of the first 200 chapters is very novel but not exaggerated. I like the imaginary setting of switch very much (maybe because I bought the switch for Sword and Shield and I have a sense of identity), but after 200 chapters, I have no sense of the role of switch and Pokémon in the composition of your article. And later on, many of your words can no longer be said to be off-kilter but excessive. The same goes for the emotional line. Without any foreshadowing, any girl can have a direct physical relationship? I suggest you read your article carefully and think about the meaning of writing it. What exactly do you want to express to our readers? What are the core values? And what is the reason why the more you write, the more you develop in the direction of the three vulgarities? As a reader who loves reading, I sincerely hope that the author can read this comment. Thank you ~

Full subscription + monthly pass + reward, I hope the author will improve it The biggest highlight of this book is that it shows in the form of words what gf failed to do. In other words, it is very good in setting and shaping the Pokémon world, showing a game that is both in line with the game. The Pokémon world is set in a play and has a sense of reality, and it is accompanied by corresponding explanations. The foreshadowing before and after is basically arranged, and even makes up for the plot flaws of gf in Sword and Shield, showing the author's imagination in world shaping and relatively solid writing skills. On the other hand, the plot in terms of characters can be described as lackluster. The first to bear the brunt is the vulgar and lengthy emotional drama in the middle of the work. The author obviously has rich experience in this aspect of cars, but the problem is that there is no necessary connection between the quality of the emotional scenes and the cars. The vulgar and embarrassing rhetoric and cliche emotional plot development really make readers uninterested. Secondly, the rhythm control of the work is quite poor. The important plots are not described in large quantities, and a large number of chapters have no reading value, while the key chapters are only briefly mentioned. Although it seems to be in line with the setting of the protagonist who is so powerful that he cheats and cheats, it actually makes the article lose its due impact, making the car either unable to start or running out of all the fuel very quickly. As a loyal Pokémon fan, the advantages of this book alone have prompted me to order this book, but its shortcomings have greatly reduced my willingness to read. But the flaws do not hide the flaws. I still hope that the author can continue to write elf novels in the future. If the quality can be improved, I will continue to support it.

It's interesting and natural. Although I may not remember every detail, this book still gave me an excellent experience similar to that of Vampire Princess. Before I met the author's book, I had been thinking about what type of book I liked best until I met the author. This kind of map is not big and there are not many people, but the feeling that everyone is closely connected is really good. All plot advancements are just right, very natural and not draggy. The rhythm of the whole book is relaxed and a little serious, so you can pick up various fresh topics very casually. And I happen to be able to understand a large part of the quotes, so I can always smile while reading. I have always liked your books and will continue to follow you in the future. (This month's monthly tickets have all been handed over to you, and there is not a drop left)

About the author saying that the world can still be black and white. There is also the matter of the Frost Milk Fairy. I would like to ask, is it right for us to watch pirated copies? The world is not black and white anyway. What can you do about piracy? I think the author needs to explain this issue. (All I read are genuine anyway)

So what is the author's name and what has he written? I'm a little interested.

Frost Milk Fairy is really trying to persuade you to quit. You can be bad, but you have to be bad in a stylish way. The protagonist is just a little bastard with a bitch.

That loli who used bombs indiscriminately should not be killed and kept for the New Year? And ran to be a parent of naughty children🤭😰

After being put on the shelves, the level plummeted. . .

I can't keep chasing. Not to mention being in the water all the time. Everyone in this novel, especially the protagonist, has been hit by a mental shock. It's tiring to watch all the operations.

The world view always feels strange. The author's description makes me feel that conflict and death are a normal thing in the town. This world seems like the police and the army are just decorations. According to the author's setting, the town where the protagonist lives is not far from where the army is stationed, but it can be such a mess. It is difficult to imagine what other places farther away from the army will be like. It feels like a fantasy world of immortality, where human life is like a piece of grass.

The plot has gone off track recently. I feel like the plot has almost turned into an ordinary urban Long Aotian novel. And if you really want to read this while driving moderately, why don't you just go see Liu Bei?

If the description is not adequate, I have to write more heroines. If you can't write about the harem, don't write about it. It's uncomfortable to watch.

Pokémon fandom turned into urban literature

I would like to recommend you a book on Elf literature that you have been following recently. You can learn from others, "I Am Not a Supporting Role in Elf Literature". His writing is very delicate, especially the bond with the elves and the description of the elves' characteristics are handled very well. This part is missing from your article. If the author is very confident in his writing ability, he can also revise it first to see the effect.

The green head

I just found a book I can read! You gave me another elf that can only use four skills?

The more I write, the more proficient I become, and I gradually become younger.

Who was not a little kid when he was young?

Now I can't follow the plot. It was interesting at first but now it's too different. After it was put on the shelf, it was really a horizontal straight line.

Isn't it Pikachu?

This is too much pretense. It's so uncomfortable. I've subscribed to so many, so I'm going to withdraw it now. Take care, the author.

Let me ask, is this book's pig's knuckles that it doesn't learn anything and doesn't understand anything, and relies entirely on cheating? I know a lot of otakus, but this is the first time I have seen someone who hates his own progress to this extent.

It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage, I was confused and the plot was a bit awkward.

Starting from dozens of chapters, the author has already read more than 400 chapters without realizing it?

Black hole "Kilulian" Kilulian can see the future through distorted space, and this one can create a black hole through distorted space. Elemental "Variety Monster" Can transform into natural elements to form a disembodied elemental form. It cannot be hurt by non-restraining skills, and it does not have the one drop of blood limit of Gui Chan. Technology "Megrom" Beyond the computing power of supercomputers and four brains, the top-level Metagross has unimaginable creativity and wisdom. Factory "Gear Monster" The Gear Monster's auxiliary gear + stand-in + magnetic field control allow the Gear Monster to extract metal on the spot and process it. With reference to the design of Metagross, it can become a factory that manufactures black technology on the go. Nanny "Rotom" Possessed by robots made by Metagross and Gear Monster, she takes care of daily life and can also become a powerful "armored warrior" at critical moments 🤓 Control "Three-in-one Magneto" Three-in-one Magneto has learned and mastered the skills of magnetic field manipulation and gravity. It has mastered and developed the two basic forces of physics. It can use the planet and the world to cause powerful destruction with every move, and can also create some things at will. Poison Master "Double Bomb Gas" Using the ability to mix gas and based on skills such as sludge bombs, he can mix and create various poisons at will, and can also produce substances that stimulate abilities and therapeutic effects. This can be partially based on Fairy Tail's Cyan Pegasus One Night. Casting Star "Rayquaza" Rayquaza guards the atmosphere to prevent external invasion, but if it is not satisfied with this, Rayquaza, who has the ability to physically walk the universe, goes to the universe and casts the planet with the cosmic energy stored in his body, and allows it to absorb the cosmic energy and feed it back to itself. With unlimited life and power, it only needs to wander in the endless void. Multiple "Nine-Tails" A hybrid of the Alola Nine-Tails and the Kanto Nine-Tails, a taboo that should not exist, used dragon teeth to evolve, broke through the restrictions of race, controlled the energy of all attributes, opened up another world outside the main plane in its long life, and became the God of Creation. The Ghost King "Terrible Thought Pot" Uses a large amount of ghost energy and spiritual moves to turn the wonderful space skills into entities and link them to the pot to form the sun and moon in the pot. He constantly uses spiritual moves to awaken the spirituality of all things and throws them into the pot to provide himself with strength and fun. Rune "Unknown Totem" Rune totem group, various rune totems can more or less form rune languages ​​with various wonderful effects, whether it is enchantment or otherwise. By the way, a group of shrunken unknown totems can form various rune languages ​​on the trainer to enhance the trainer's ability, that is, rune warriors, rune mages and the like can control the world with their bodies. I thought of so much at once, I will make up for it later when I am creative.

After reading Chapter 300, I couldn't stand it anymore. Later, the author just watered down the outline of less than 2,000 words into hundreds of thousands of words.

Stop talking, the student party should be careful, author, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

To be honest, I don't know why. Every time I read a novel, I don't want to read it as soon as I see that things are different after traveling through time and space. I feel that the plot suddenly has a strong sense of tearing apart. It feels like reading two novels that were forcibly spliced ​​together. It's very uncomfortable. I click on it and read half a chapter, then leave, ugh

I just want to ask why the fan value requirement for speaking is set so high. No other author has set it so high. I haven't posted this chapter for more than a week. Do you want to suffocate me to death?

It's a very good novel. Why is it not so popular?