Ghost Agent in American Comics

Suggestions and corrections from an old StarCraft player. I started to play StarCraft in junior high school, and it has been 8 years now. Of course, I can't finish it all in one day, but I am a storyteller and have learned a lot about the background of StarCraft. The story of this book obviously took place in the StarCraft 1 period, and the protagonist's memory was erased, so there should be no possibility of changing the direction of history (of course there may be), and it is considered unchanged here. I have read Chapter 12 so far, and there are a few obvious errors that make me uncomfortable and uncomfortable. First: Phoenix fighter. The Phoenix fighter of Protoss appeared in the second generation. Some people would say that this is not a game world. Let's talk about it according to the interstellar plot. The Phoenix fighter was developed during the Council of Light and Shadow, and the Council of Light and Shadow was established after the fall of the Supreme Council. After the fall of the Supreme Council, the establishment of the Council of Light and Shadow was already after Al was stolen by the master. According to the progress written by the author, it was not possible until Kerrigan was sold. Second: The protagonist's battle uniform. Full name: Combat uniform adapted to hostile environment. It is composed of special nanofibers that respond to psychic energy, which can directly enhance the wearer's strength, endurance, etc., And also provide good protection capabilities (of course, it is only good, in fact it is not even comparable to Good Brother's CMC). By absorbing and passivating various high-risk elements, it can provide the wearer with a series of protection including nuclear radiation, chemical, biochemical, etc. The outer layer of the armor is embedded with synthetic cells, which can refract light under the catalysis of psychic energy to achieve a single invisibility effect. At the same time, it can absorb part of the kinetic energy and sound waves as well as the odor emitted by the wearer, etc., To achieve the effect of "disappearing". Its invisibility is so strong that the Zerg can only lock on the ghost agent through the super-powerful sensing organs possessed by some units and by sensing changes in the environment around the ghost agent (dust, air flow). The Protoss is relatively simple. They use special devices to detect the psychic reactions of ghost agents to locate the ghost agents. The human race uses powerful technological scanning to find ghost agents. Ghost agents can easily sneak into various well-defended facilities, but the author describes it as "only optical invisibility." The Tyranids are an interstellar civilization after all, and it is impossible to detect ordinary optical invisibility. The above, after all, I have only read Chapter 12, so I may be arbitrary and the author is digging a hole. My opinions come from the official data of StarCraft, the encyclopedia video of Kazama Ruri, the main star of Station B StarCraft UP (his video is officially targeted by Blizzard and has been certified authoritatively), and my several years of gaming experience. If there are any mistakes, please correct me. At the same time, I hope the author can persist in finishing the book. There are really not many books that can be read in interstellar novels! Either a eunuch or too poisonous in the later period (a book in which the protagonist is P at first, and then his soul is reborn as T after replacing Tasedar and dying with the master, and he is a girl who has sex with Nova! Later, he becomes a mixture of three races, and gets on Lei Yuetian's ship with Nova without shame. I really admire myself for being able to read it!) Finally, come on, author! ! !