Immortal Universal Sentient Beings
仙普众生
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 36k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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15Chapters
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You've just finished the book with just a few words. How can I give you some advice?
If you see anything wrong, please give me your opinion I can make corrections. After all, I am a newbie and there are many shortcomings. I hope you can give me more feedback. 😁
Pay attention to the use of punctuation marks. Someone said that colons and quotation marks are usually added after. Also pay attention to the segmentation. Looking at a large section will give you a headache. The sentences don't read smoothly and I always feel awkward...