The First Fire User Who Started as a Pirate

Vongola

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The first book should not contain eunuchs. After all, it was still conceived.

Now, there are still people who remember their tutor and shed tears

To be honest, if the author keeps updating like this, there may not even be pirated copies on the shelves...

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I've seen Chapter 118. How many chapters do you need to highlight the title of your book "Journey to Dimensions"?

Mobile phone: You have been chosen as the savior! Click here to travel through! Protagonist: My life is unsatisfactory and I want to travel through time. Let's go! (Click to confirm) Seeing that no one questioned this plot, I seemed to have discovered a new telecommunications fraud method~

Writer of sensational headlines? I thought it was about spreading fire?

There is too much nonsense, there are too many meaningless plots, the distracting writing style is not pleasing, and the writing about daily life has no taste. The occasional serious plot is okay, but the writing style of narration and flashbacks is not pleasing. Many times, there is no focus at all, and the line of continuity of reading experience cannot be grasped. In addition, the content often has little to do with the title I can only say that it is okay for practice. There are too many shortcomings. It is not a bad book, but it is too mediocre.

It's been a long time since I went to the world of tutors. I'll watch it again in the world of tutors.

A unified reply, I thought no one would care... The first part was to spend some time in the growth period, and the real third chapter, which was supposed to explain something, has been banned for some reason, so I had to pick up the fourth chapter first, which may lead to a bit of chaos, but there are constant additions and explanations later. So from now on it just depends on your understanding.

I hope I can go to Yanyan Fire Brigade. I haven't seen this fan.

A good fight turned into a brain-burning detective, which made me confused.

Is it too messy in the back? What about the main theme? Branch lines are all😅😅😅

The idea is good, but it feels a bit watery.

I suggest changing the title of the book to The Pirate Journey of the First Fire Lord 🤫🤭🤫🤫