A Man Has Just Become the Emperor of Heaven in Heaven

This book is mainly based on the author's own subjective ideas. If the earth's mythology is substituted into it, it will be extremely painful to read. Personally, I think the background of this book is closer to the American comic universe: in order to allow human beings to gain true freedom, the immortals in China launched an uprising war against Destiny (Tiandao). In the end, they successfully defeated Destiny (Tiandao) and cut off the road to heaven, but the immortals were almost completely annihilated. The surviving immortals successfully persuaded Olympus, Asgard, the Egyptian pantheon and the Celts headed by King Arthur to leave the earth, and used their last mana to leave a barrier for the Supreme Mage lineage to continue to protect the earth. Of course, other gods are definitely not willing to give up on the earth, so they all left behind their own dependents. Zeus left behind a family of Amazon female warriors and his daughter Diana (Wonder Woman). Poseidon left Atlantis behind. The sun god Ra left behind the Sphinx (a weird AI system that likes to ask people IQ questions). Aoding left behind a bunch of deserters (he knew that the deserters were in the atrium but did not catch them). You ask me where the gods are? Emmmmm, they are basically dead. Kunlun's Iron Fist, whose fist can be used as a flashlight, is considered a lineage of Chinese gods. The director of the Chinese Divine Spear Bureau should, maybe, seems to be the Jade Emperor. So the author's choice of this subject matter is indeed very promising! Keep up the good work, if you can't continue writing, you can find a ghostwriter, otherwise it will be a waste of this subject.

Just because of this sentence, this book must be read,

If you don't vote and I don't vote, when will Bing-chan come forward? Yes, you, that's you! You who lie on your side on the bed with the lights off and look at your phone! Don't think that just because you are handsome, talented and meaningful, just because others praise you Daniel Wu, you can do whatever you want. Give me your recommendation vote #-#!

The subject matter is good, but the writing style needs to be improved. For other things, it is recommended to talk about system issues in advance, because there are differences between the myths of Fengshen, Journey to the West, and orthodox Taoist myths. For example, although Lingshan in Journey to the West is self-made, it is also part of the heaven. We still have to look at the strength system for the time being. After all, starting from the bottom can only suppress the combat strength In short, it will not collapse in the future. If the writing skills improve, there is a chance to become popular. I look forward to it.

I just complained about one point and watched it for a while. What the hell is Tianbing doing eight hours a day? It can't be exceeded, otherwise it will affect the promotion of the protagonist, what should I write! Even if you become an immortal, you still have to work. A system for cultivating immortals is not a problem in modern times. Normally, you are still pretending to be cool. Is this? Sorry, I can't stand it anymore, so I'm leaving now. .

As the author, I think everyone in China should know what Heaven is, and also let everyone know what kind of god this god is. You can also make up why the earth does not know the existence of Heaven now. It means to popularize science about every Chinese mythological figure.

It's quite boring for the Emperor of Heaven to be a thug, he doesn't look like a boss at all.

I hope it can be a little more rigorous. It's the end of the world, and the gods who come out don't take people's lives seriously. When we see the protagonist fighting with other gods and monsters, they still watch? ? ? Moreover, if it were not for the protagonist, human beings would be close to extinction, but there is no sense of crisis at all, and they are still making fun of it on the Internet. It feels like the protagonist is live broadcasting. When destroying the demon, there are always a lot of netizens making jokes next to him? ? ? ?

The setting is pretty good, but I feel like the characters have negative IQs, and it's too annoying to watch.

Author, I think your setting of grades is very unreasonable. It's like it's unreasonable for you to set the inspector as the lowest level, the ninth grade. As far as the history of our country is concerned, the lowest official position for such patrols is the third rank, and no one is lower than the third rank. This is what I checked on Baidu. You know, if you are patrolling like this, you can't possibly patrol villages, towns, and counties. Such a small place has specially set up this kind of patrol lawsuit. At the lowest level, it is an agency such as a provincial or municipal petition bureau. There is also the Tugong. The Tugong should be the lowest priesthood. After all, only places like the countryside worship the Earth God. You will be under the control of the city god when you go up there, which is the county god and the town god. It's not like mountain gods, water gods, etc. There are also levels of classification like the Five Mountains. The river gods and mountain gods such as the Yellow River and the Yangtze River are obviously very high-level. It is impossible to compare with unknown rivers and hills. Moreover, there are different grades for the God of Day and Night, right? If you put it under the ninth grade, what grade would you classify?

The subject matter is good, but the setting, plot, and writing are not all bad.

Oriental Paradise is set to be a perfect score. After entering, the greater the hope, the greater the disappointment.

If Chinese civilization did not have the heavenly divine system and this traditional culture, would China still be China today?

He has no composure and does everything by himself. The Emperor of Heaven always fights in person, which is funny.

The writing style needs to be improved. It doesn't have a fairy-like feel, neither classical nor modern. Maybe it's too political.

Humanity is about to be exterminated. There are still so many netizens and Internet celebrities who are chatting and spanking if they don't save their lives. They all said that a large number of people can be killed if the God War is affected. As a result, there are so many people who have nothing to do and watch. It feels like a game NPC.

Can I ask for some investment? If I can get it together to 100, I will definitely work hard to get you back your money!

You wrote that the gods and immortals in it feel like mortals with extraordinary powers, without any feeling of gods and immortals at all.

Since the author has written about the Heavenly Court, I hope to collect more information. The levels of One Ancestor, Two Ancestors, Three Pure Ones, Four Imperial Kings, Five Old and Sixth Divisions, Seven Yuans, Eight Extremes, Nine Glory and Ten Capitals, Thousand Trues and Ten Thousand Saints are clearly divided.

Those who talk about working hours in heaven should clarify here. Heaven itself has a work system. There are many types of gods, some of which are canonized by the Gods List, which are similar to workers who go to work. There are time systems and holidays. 😅 There is also a kind of person who becomes an immortal by himself. This kind of person has no restrictions and can do whatever he wants.

Very well written, the author is great 👍

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Heaven is our own ancestors and spirits, and it is normal to protect future generations.

Bing-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

You can write well, please give it a try.