What Happened in the Late Jin Dynasty

Characters are shaped by plot and details, and the characters' thoughts are expressed through language descriptions and detailed descriptions. To put it bluntly, readers need to interpret the plot and details, rather than analyzing and explaining a line followed by a paragraph. Such explanations are feeble and make the novel extremely boring. In addition, the novel is set in the Wei and Jin Dynasties, but the dialogue of the characters and the language and thinking of the narration are very modern and quite awkward. Also, some joking psychological descriptions (bug fixes, development) try to increase the fun of the novel. The idea is good, but the laughter is too vulgar and somewhat ruins the artistic conception. What is worthy of recognition is that the plot of the Xie family and the brothers playing chess in the opening chapter are very brilliant and graphic, and it can be seen that the author has a profound historical background. The above only represents my personal subjective opinion.

Not the first two chapters, Lao Wang? Can't you give me a name? Also, the word "er" cannot always be used. It's up to you, or you may as well not have this word.

Now that I've read it, I feel it's too slow. If I change the subject, it would definitely be a good story about a male and female protagonist. The friendship between masters and brothers is good, but this historical hegemony story is too slow to read.

Some people are so awesome that they all want a single female lead? In ancient times, we didn't talk about wives, but we had to have a few concubines, right? After the founding of the country, if there are no descendants, who will follow you? How can your men pursue you with peace of mind? The heroine can still give birth to 5 and 8 children, right? Once you give birth, you guarantee that you will not die young or have any accidents, right?

The author should not call him Han this time when the country was founded. Your surname is not Liu, so why call him Han? There are so many names, but the country's name still has its own rules and is not called randomly.

I have added it to the bookshelf several times, but every time I pick it up, I am frightened away by words such as "planting the seeds of industry, industrial blueprints, martial arts lecture halls, and attracting investment." 😰

The book is good, but the author explains too much. The plot doesn't advance much after one chapter, and it's just a bunch of analysis and explanations. I'm waiting for you to go down the mountain and have a big fight, but it turns out that it's almost a hundred chapters and you're still fighting in several villages. I hope the plot is a little tighter.

At this time, in AD 354, Huan Wen made his first northern expedition. The male protagonist Du Ying is 17 or 8 years old. Wang Meng is 29 years old, Ren Qun is in his 20s, and Lu Tang is in his 20s. They are the core members of the group. Further down should be Han Yin, Ma Si, Zhou Sui and others. It feels like there are still too few. Don't stick to nationality. Talents from the former Qin and the former Yan can also be absorbed~ The male protagonist's future father-in-law Xie Yi (309-358) was 45 years old and died in office four years later. I wonder if the author will help him survive? If the male protagonist marries Xie Daoyun, and the Eastern Jin Dynasty is destroyed in the future, there will be conflict with the Xie family. Huan Wen, Huan Chong, Xie An, Tuoba Shiyiqian, Murong Ke, Murong Chui and other big guys can live for a long time, but the male protagonist will be under too much pressure in the future. Fu Chang died in 354. He was hit by an arrow while chasing Huan Wen to retreat, and later died of infection. If Huan Wen had not retreated, would Fu Chang have survived? In that case, could Fu Jian still be in charge? Su Hui and Princess Qinghe will not be born for another three years, so they can only be "raised as lolita".

Recommend a few novels about the Jin Dynasty: Many Things Happened at the End of the Jin Dynasty, Le Hu Ma, Conquering the World in the Southern and Northern Dynasties, Rebirth at the End of the Western Jin Dynasty, A Poor Family Becomes the King, King of the Tang Dynasty in the Eastern Jin Dynasty, Crown of Han Dynasty, High-grade Poor Scholars, Liangzhou Ci

There is no need to read the heroine's list of fighting for hegemony. There are more than a thousand sheets without heirs, and your subordinates are too loyal. If you want to write a single heroine, why should you write a hegemony article? Historical hegemony articles also involve rice circles. You can't live without women. No wonder the data in this book is so rubbish.

Don't read it, the main character is impotence, more than 800 chapters, and several years of marriage. He actually doesn't have a son, I admire his subordinates' loyalty

I stayed up all night and watched Chapter 80 of the village fighting weapon, which really made me numb. Because I like Xie Daoyun, I supported it all the way, but when I saw Chapter 80, I couldn't stand it. The characters are too thin and there is a lot of nonsense. Things that can be covered in one sentence and can be completely written in twenty or thirty chapters must be so watery. It's boring. After you finish writing Unify the World, your book will probably be as thick as the four major classics put together. The water mixed in has annihilated the fire. How could the book heat up?

It is best not to write ancient novels when writing single heroines

Here are the issues reported by several book friends: 1. Some book friends said that some chapters in this book introduce too much background. Because this period of history is relatively unpopular, some background introduction is intended to prevent everyone from being confused. The author himself hates Baidu while reading. I will control the length of this aspect in the future. Of course, some of the main forces in this book have also been briefly introduced. There will not be a small half chapter introducing Liangzhou like Chapter 8. If you think there are other inappropriate places, you can point them out, and then I will add a reminder before the chapter to help you read quickly, just like the modification in Chapter 8. 2. Is Wang Meng a traitor? This question... Involves a series of issues such as the emergence of Han national consciousness, such as whether Ran Min is a hero or a speculator? Is Yang Jian a hero or a speculator? Were the emperors of the Tang Dynasty Han heroes or Xianbei traitors? Since I have little talent and knowledge, I will not comment. Everyone is welcome to express their opinions. The protagonist of this article rose from Guanzhong, so Wang Meng must not be able to get around it. What's more, the main line of this work is the same as my previous two books. It must express some thoughts of patriotism and national strength. I want to express my bad butt, but I am helpless. The protagonist makes a group of Han people who originally served the Di people and Xianbei appear national consciousness and strive for the prosperity of the Han people. Isn't it a story worth looking forward to? 3. Some book friends feel that the review section of this book is a bit exaggerated and are worried about deletion of the review I would like to state that the reviews of this book are all published spontaneously by book friends. The author himself does not buy reviews (I have no money, wouldn't it be nice to buy two books with this money?), Does not control reviews (there are not so many book friends to help me), and does not delete reviews (there are not many reviews on this book, even if they are criticized, I am not willing to delete them). Feel free to put forward your criticisms and suggestions, and I will work hard to correct whatever I can. It's not my responsibility to take out the house. 4. Recommendation and listing There will be two more recommendations starting from Sunday, and updates will be added at that time. When will it be put on the shelves? The editor is on a business trip for the past two days. I will discuss it with him on Monday. This set of recommendations should be finished. Please give me recommendation votes and book reviews. This Q&A is over. If you like this format, you are welcome to leave more comments and opinions. If we gather enough, we will do it again N times.

Fighting for hegemony and rebellion! Why do you keep writing female protagonist plots? ? ? Don't you know that your country, your foundation, is your heroine? Is it appropriate for the protagonist to be in love all the time? Xie Daoyun, a talented woman, was written into a slut by you

I have read two hundred chapters, and the dialogue between two people is often interspersed with a long paragraph of psychological or background description, and the words are not coherent. There is a word that is very appropriate, which tastes like nothing.

During the Eastern Jin Dynasty, relying on Guanzhong to conquer the world, I'm afraid I didn't wake up. This setting is not as good as directly uniting the north with the south. Stop watching

Can you please stop writing about flirting with Xie Daoyun while letting the world go by the keyboard, and soon there will be pornographic articles again? I don't see you fighting for hegemony just because you are having sex, otherwise I would still have to spend money to read pornographic articles? It's not like you can just grab a bunch of websites and it's free.

Well. . . I always feel that the author is not that good in writing and still complaining without any reason. This is purely a personal feeling.

The writing style is good, but unfortunately the author is too expressive, a lot of nonsense, character introduction, background introduction, I am speechless, writing a paper 😅

I won't watch the single heroine! What kind of ancient times are you going back to if you don't have three wives and four concubines? Have you read too many female novels?

The shortcoming of this book is its slow pace. No wonder it is not popular.

Damn, it's okay to have a single heroine. As for the children they mentioned in the comment section, I don't understand the heroine's life at first glance. Xie Daoyun is really awesome. She is good at literature and martial arts, and her body is super good. Her husband is such a loser that Xie Daoyun gave birth to so many children. Four sons, not to mention the male protagonist, can't have eight. Xie Daoyun, who is over fifty years old, can pick up a sword to kill thieves and protect his children and grandchildren. To be honest, we are all scum in front of others. We probably peed our pants the moment the thief raised his knife.

It's a historical novel and it wants to establish a constitutional monarchy. Are they all brainwashed by the West? Is constitutional monarchy really suitable for ancient China? Not to mention that constitutional monarchy itself is not a perfect system.

This author really takes things for granted when it comes to politics. Isn't history's lesson enough for letting the harem get involved in politics? As far as the monarchy in ancient China was concerned, the harem could not be allowed to participate in politics. Is this because they were afraid that the battle for the right to inherit the throne would not be fierce enough? Even if you were fine when you were there? What about your son or grandson's generation? Don't take it for granted and copy modern ideas to ancient times.

The heroines include Xie Daoyun, Xi Daomao, Sima Daofu, and the Queen Mother. They are not single heroines. When I was looking back at the old books, I found that a lot of people were commenting on them without even reading them. It's really amazing.

The plot development is actually pretty good, but it's a pity that the writing is so poor

I patiently watched most of it, but I felt like it was a waste of time. The war scenes were like fighting at the entrance of a village, and the plotting was too trivial. Fortunately, a short pornographic novel suddenly appeared.