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Can the heroine not be Shan Shan? There are too many Shan Shan as the heroine in Jiang Ye.

The plot is good, but the writing is not.

It's rare to find more than two hundred chapters that haven't been published yet! ! ! ! !

I don't understand why those who write about Jiang Ye and other people must worship Master as their teacher! Now that the exercises are systematic or you can master them and understand them at a glance, do you still need a teacher? Is worshiping the Master a way to learn how to be a good person? You have already had a previous life, so it is difficult to shape your outlook on life! The main character of Jiang Ye worships his Master because he doesn't know how to practice Kung Fu!

Red wall and white snow, I hope you like it!

I drove a Mercedes-Benz under Mount Tai, snatched a little milk baby's milk, caught a sheep in the wild, cut down a willow tree to make a fire, cooked the sheep in a dark pot, and after eating, used a bone to make a trap, and caught a big black dog to guard the bronze palace I stole 😏

It's not rigorous. It is said in Wu Dong Qian Kun that Dou Qi cannot be cultivated in other worlds. When anti-inflammation soars, you have to change the system!

I don't know why, but the author has never come back from writing about protagonists replacing other people's identities. He clearly wrote Jiang Ye and Zhu Xian quite well, but why is there such a cliff-like collapse from the beginning of Fairy Sword? And since you wrote about the symbiotic relationship between the protagonist and the heroine, then you should write it well. In Fairy Sword, you can actually become a Shushan sword master and a moon-worshiping deputy leader. Hasn't the protagonist already replaced the system flow? Has the heroine become the new host? How can it still be like this? The writing of the subsequent world is also inexplicable. Even the identity of the villain has been arranged. The fate in the deadlock. Even some people in the small world could not do it. Now it is so awesome that the biggest boss has been replaced. Then I can only remove you from the bookshelf.

The biggest failure was taking Mo Shanshan with him

I am invincible in the world. If I don't love mountains, I love Quni.

It is recommended that there be no heroine or multiple heroines, and a single heroine has unlimited flow. If the heroine does not follow suit, she will feel like a tool.

Is this book a single female protagonist? Can there be more female leads? If we only write about Jiang Ye, then one heroine or multiple heroines will be fine, but Zhu Tianwen's single heroine feels weird.

Ye Hongyu, Mo Shanshan and the Goddess seek to accept the gods. It is impossible to have only one female protagonist. What's the point instead?

First advice: I haven't watched World Night, nor the TV series. Maybe fans of the original work won't be affected, but I really can't understand it. Many of the plots are boring. I wonder what the pig's feet are involved in? If you don't see this world, will it affect the viewing experience of the next world?

One chapter a day is too little, at least 2 chapters are needed

There has been no update for 5 days. Please update me. I want to watch the following three lives and three worlds...

The timeline of Sword and Fairy: Sword and Fairy 4 → Sword and Fairy 3 → Sword and Fairy 3 side story·Asking for Love → Sword and Fairy 1 → Sword and Fairy 2 → Sword and Fairy 5 prequel → Sword and Fairy 5 → Sword and Fairy 6

Dahe Sword Intent, such a powerful offensive swordsmanship, was changed by the protagonist into a turtle shell, and he was so proud of it. I was really impressed.

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There is something wrong with being a brother of the underworld and not getting to know each other even if others come to collect protection money.

If the protagonist wants to tamper with the plot of Dou Po, is it possible that Emperor Yan from the future timeline hacked the system and sent him to another world for the sake of fellow villagers?

Why don't you write it down? Why don't you go back to the fight against the world at the beginning?

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He came for Jiang Ye, but in the end he tried his best to suppress Jiang Ye's world view with Doubo World View. Doupo's cultivation system is all about accumulating energy. In the later stage, he saw that he could split mountains and seas with a single move of his hands. The so-called understanding of the law was actually just a pile of numbers, and there was no real ability at all. After entering the night, I still can't write the original characters. I seriously suspect that the author has only watched the Jiang Ye TV series.

Is it over without a fight? ?

It's outrageous, I didn't even return to fight once until the finale.

Jiang Ye purely comprehends spiritual energy to improve his realm, and then controls spiritual energy to fight. The techniques that absorb spiritual energy are considered magic techniques, and most of the techniques in the world absorb spiritual energy. After reading the introduction and looking at the table of contents, there is no mention of this conflict at all.

Two-thirds of it is bullshit.

The beginning of Good Guys is just a fantasy dimension-reducing attack on Gao Wu?