Alien Evolution of All Heavens

I heard from readers that the first part was too bloody and a bit discouraging, so I deleted the first four chapters and did some practice in the fifth chapter. The rest is roughly the same as before, and there should be no more poisonous points. Thank you readers for your tips, votes and support.

Following the suggestions of book friends, the protagonist's name has been changed to Jiang Heng. Everything else remains unchanged and does not affect reading.

Other plots you wrote are acceptable. What makes me feel uncomfortable is that you always push women around the protagonist. Although I am not sure whether they will be together, it is very uncomfortable for a group of women to look around the protagonist. Also, the description of the supporting villain is so brainless. If this book was written three years ago, it would have been okay, but now this routine has been written badly. The author still needs to improve.

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The first chapter is simply an insult to the leopard! The author is advised to take a look at the animal world! Drink the evolution potion when you're about to die? Who are you looking down on? Leopard or reader? But forget it! Writing a book is not easy! Give me a recommendation vote! Slipped away

Nie Xiaoqian, a beautiful woman who is like a demon, a fairy, and a dream. Although he is in a devil's cave, he still retains kindness in his heart. Every time after he hurt someone, he would secretly hide under the moon and cry alone.

After reading the introduction, I wanted to ask: Are humans not aliens? I'm not arguing, but I feel that we humans haven't evolved to a very high level yet. We are aliens, aliens, so what exactly do we count as aliens?

The author himself takes the lead in the comment area

Are you writing this in the first three golden chapters? ?

Lin Yuexi, the heroine who was released in the beginning and the first chapter was offline.

70,000 Words, some people are actually jumping to read it, can't you just watch it?

The protagonist is so gender-killing, just like in the Liao Zhai story, Laoshan who bullied Bai Ling'er felt that he was not very strong and wanted to kill everyone in his family at every turn.

In fact, the front is very important. Many people left after looking bad. Who wants to look behind?

The writing is a bit fast. For example, in the first world, you can save time for digestion, and then describe the evolution and growth of the python. You can also rule the entire group of snakes step by step, and then find the Blood Orchid and swallow the dragon. Then you can cause destruction, and create some storms and tsunamis for the United States, Japan and other countries. Doesn't this gain reputation? In the second world, you can start writing from the time when the violent potion fell, and then find the four beasts and swallow them one by one. If you can't, keep one dragon turtle, which is the crocodile. If you swallow the others, you will definitely become more awesome. The one you keep will be used to increase your reputation in the final battle. If you find three beasts, you can complete a chapter, right?

There is really nothing interesting if the protagonist is not anti-human. Author, you should make the protagonist an alien! Kill all humans. If the system is not fully functional, it is not beautiful.

It's really uncomfortable to read it once a day, and I finished it in less than a minute. 😰

Won't the original wife's body be buried? Just leave it at Ma's house

The fighting in the first four chapters is a bit toxic, so try to correct it. . It's okay later

As soon as I saw the world settings, I didn't want to choose.

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Women, don't write it. I became a cripple in the second chapter just for fun.

Generally speaking, when novels are inserted into novels, it is easy to break the roots.

Has the protagonist's girlfriend been forgotten?

Nie Xiaoqian's script was too dissuasive. It was made clear that she was going to recruit girls.