Super Dimension Star Card Master

It's not interesting. I suggest the author read The Empress' Super God Card Maker. Your card-making character has no sense of existence at all.

You should not put too much personal will into writing a book, it will look embarrassing, but the plot is very good, except for the writing style.

Up to now, the author has been almost useless. My original suggestion was to keep writing according to this routine. At least according to the predecessors, there is a way to go and it is easy to write. There are many routes he can choose. However, the author said that it is up to me and not the readers. He decisively rejected my proposal and did his own work. He wanted to create a reverse dark style of painting. I called him an expert. Until one day he said that there were fewer people reading and he couldn't write anymore, so he planned to eunuch. I've opened a new book... Hehe, author, in short, everyone can give up. If you want to miss the cute little author who used to be idle, it doesn't matter if you keep it on the bookshelf. Anyway, let's read the next book. You can join the group, and the group will announce the opening time of the new book. (Note: There is everything in the group, everyone is talented, and they speak well. I like it there. There is also the female leader of the group in the file, pretending, taking photos, and laughing.) Please see the top comments for things. Let me tell you my thoughts on this book. First of all, I have been following this book from about chapter 10 to 20. It can be said that I read and signed this book myself. I also gave a dozen yuan in rewards and voted in a few recommendations and monthly votes. From the name and the star card in it, it is not difficult to tell that there are some books. Shadow, you know who it is. This book basically follows all the settings of this type of book, time-travel, game animation special drama characters from the past life, good (gay) friends, pagans, arrogant and arrogant school prodigy who thinks he is awesome, and an expert (gay friend's sister) who is better than hiding around him. There are not many foreshadowings. In general, the future is promising (except for the occasional slaying of demons and demons in school or the frequent slaying of demons and demons, nothing is clear, that is, the future is promising). The author is very attentive. In addition to writing his own design of star cards, he also opened a website to help readers realize their dreams (just in case the inspiration runs out one day, come and have a look). It can be seen from the released star cards that the author has a wide selection of materials for star cards. In a short time or a long time Even after the book is finished, the author's inspiration for the design of star cards will not be exhausted (it does not rule out that the author plagiarizes readers, funny, and dog-headed) The style is basically the style of those old book predecessors. Compared with the star card master, the appearance of my sister makes me feel a little bit like "Nine Star Poisonous Milk" (The author is trying to absorb some things, but it is not recommended to set the elements in it. After all, the essential subject matter of the book is different. Of course, if you use it to force a life extension in the future, treat it as if I didn't say it. If the author creates some novel protagonists, treat it as if I didn't say it) Article Let's not talk about the writing for now. I have read it. The main shortcoming is that the story unfolds too slowly. To put it bluntly, it can be read in one minute to two minutes at the fastest. It is very popular with some old villains (some don't take a minute, just three pages). This is also something that has been criticized by many readers. Generally speaking, it is good (dog head) and can be stored in the bookshelf (dog head), but it is not recommended to pursue it. It can be piled in the corner of the bookshelf until the author has written more and read it all at once (to gain weight) The above are some of my opinions on this book. Please correct me if there are any mistakes or conflicts with your views, but please pay attention to the wording in a civilized manner (I am afraid of being sprayed, dog head). Exceptions, the author has added details (threat. Jpg)

Recommend the star cards you want to see

I've read Chapter 40, let's keep writing. The communication between the male protagonist and Fatty now feels like it is based on Fatty's sister. If Fatty and his sister do anything, it's probably just daily communication. But this kind of male protagonist is tortured, this is a male channel, a male channel. It's not that this kind of plot is impossible, but it's not very good to use this kind of plot link at the beginning. The characters of the three women who appeared were too similar, with no differences or attractions. They should not be the heroines. (Guess: There shouldn't be a female protagonist) I guess the champion of the Hundred Schools must be at least gold or above, and the star card must be at least the best. It's too slow for the male protagonist to develop like this, being led by a fat man and his sister. It's best to practice it yourself. But it's a bit too fast to start Chapter 50. The description given to Ye Tian and the descriptions given to others were too strong, making it seem like the protagonist now belongs to the lower class. Ye Tian and the junior high school monitor can all abuse him (the squad monitor was still a weak girl in junior high school). The fat man is about the same strength as the protagonist, but other people's family backgrounds are so good, and his sister is described in such a naughty way, which is a bit disappointing. If you want the plot to be stable, you can only put the Hundred Schools later. In this way, the foreshadowing will be too early. It depends on how the author writes it. Cards are more important than finesse. Now the main character's purpose of creating cards is to hunt for novelties and do whatever comes to his mind. The camp concept is not reflected. Kamen Riders should not be in one camp, and it is impossible to tie several belts to one body. The camp is a set or a combination, and two combinations can be combined. Four or five, weird. The plot is possible, not too brainless. The protagonist only accepts memories and has a strong sense of substitution for others. The protagonist will be worried about his classmates and teachers, which feels a bit inappropriate. I hope there won't be any bloody plot in the future where the protagonist is worried about his classmates and teachers. In just a few days, it is impossible for ordinary people to do anything for others (except the Holy Mother)

Created a new star card arena. This floor is for everyone to see the order of appearance of star cards. If you want to have star card recommendations, you can go to another floor.

Author, I've read a little bit of your book. To be honest, the female character who appeared in the chapter I read is a fat man's sister, and she seems to be a childhood playmate. It's really disgusting and annoying to the senses... I feel unhappy! Watching the male protagonist being forced to do this and that, and being beaten up every time he disagrees with me, the author... This kind of thing is really frustrating...

The writing is still readable, but the role of Fatty Sister is a big failure. I don't know if the author wanted to write an iceberg beauty or something, but now that I see it, I feel that she is a cold and ruthless person. In my opinion, it is difficult for a world without the crisis of alien beasts to produce such a person again. If it is to show her sense of self-improvement, it is not handled well. In my opinion, there is still a little bit of care in the cards that appear. At least I didn't see the one that said Seer and Kamen Rider. But since Kamen Rider has already appeared, can it be given more scenes? After all, people can still enhance the effect of the card and consume very little. There is also the character of the protagonist. How should I put it? Should I be firmer when choosing cards? What the hell is it that I am writing about Kindred one second and then a Kamen Rider the next? ? ? There is no other meaning. Please don't suddenly come and say that the author writes the book and not the readers. Every time I write a long review, there is such a weird thing and I am drunk.

The plot setting is very interesting, but the twists in the plot are a bit problematic. I always feel like I have missed a few chapters while watching it. The development is too sudden. The most obvious one is the undercover plot. It develops too fast. It can be said that I don't understand it at all. I hope the author can improve it.

Why is it that almost every book on this subject contains any sister, sister, Yishui's peerless genius? Really. . Or I read too few books. .

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I don't know why, but I feel that the two young ladies you wrote about are the biggest failure of your book.

Can Kamen Rider use any card? 😰 (I like it very much)

It always feels good when it feels good. Although I think you want to avoid the old routine, if you don't have a better routine, the old routine is better. Although the routine is old, it just works.

There are roads in the country, trees beside the roads, fruits on the trees, and you and me under the trees. Sitting in rows in front of the stupid tree, each person has a stupid fruit. Picking fruits, cutting down trees and digging graves, people fell asleep in the graves. Where can the confused soul go? How can I go too far on the bridge? You are not lonely on the stupid road, you are surrounded by stupid people. I have no regrets in this life and I will be an ignorant person in the next life. If the sky is sentimental, it would be stupid, but it would be a pity if people are not stupid.

Looking forward to the update, well written!

Come to Zhang Fengmo, come to Ultraman Zhang, let's show off some cool operations 😌😌

The protagonist keeps taking advantage of this fat man, and feels superfluous. The fat man does not need the protagonist, but the protagonist needs the fat man. . . .

Brothers, join the group as soon as possible. The group leader said that when the number of people reaches 100, he will dress as a woman 😏😏😏

. . . . . . Super star card master. . . . . . The Empress' super star card master. . . . . Is there any contact with the Super Dimension Star Card Master? The first two seem to be eunuchs 😂 and I have chased them both 😂😂

Is the first one Ultraman the Giant of Light?

Make star cards, why not make the heroine of Heavenly Things, Super God Kesha, He Xi, Liang Bing, aren't these delicious? What kind of green-skinned monster must I be? The first one, I forgot the name.

No update for 3 days....

I feel that the author still writes well, but I don't know why the writing is too messy. I finished reading the free chapters, and the biggest problem is that there is no beginning or end. The first time was when I was fighting a cultist and I was suddenly knocked unconscious. Then the next day, I didn't explain anything. The protagonist himself was knocked unconscious without asking any questions. Mindless. The biggest problem is that the first two chapters are on the shelves. In the previous chapter, I was still playing a game. I just took a move and didn't say the outcome. Then I went shopping in the next chapter. I feel like I missed two chapters. The thinking is too fast. It's even more uncomfortable than those who say they take off their pants and then skip to the next day by omitting tens of thousands of words here. Subscription not recommended.

It's a bit messy. There are too many cards, but it has no characteristics. The details are not handled well. Some of them have been compared with each other.

This book is suitable for patients with severe secondary disease: I have to shout slogans during fights, which makes me feel ashamed. Am I getting old?

It looks so uncomfortable. . I can't understand anything I read in a foreign language!                   （🐶）

As long as it's not bound to yourself, you can steal anything (ಡωಡ)

The author is awesome. The other protagonists are beating people over the top, but you are beaten over the top by a random villain, cannon fodder. You are really a cannon fodder, not a supporting character.

I want to ask. Let's develop novels and animation here like this. Why can't he develop after rebirth?