Starting with Meatball Attacks in Naruto

It looks alright, but I hope there aren't too many clichéd plot points involving characters getting their comeuppance. After all, the protagonist's "useless" character setting at the beginning is very likely to end up like that. Just a heads-up. Novice readers might like this kind of plot, but most veteran readers absolutely hate it.

The protagonist is a goofball. He gets drunk during battles and only knows how to drink. He goes to the toilet during battles. It sounds like he has traveled to Naruto, but in reality, it is no different from drinking in his own living room.

You might as well have this body become addicted to alcohol, with trembling hands if they don't drink. The protagonist doesn't want that and wants to overcome it; that would be much easier to write.

I've already acquired the Summoner Spell Purify, which can actually remove Orochimaru's curse seal. Could it remove the Caged Bird Seal? If I really remove the Caged Bird Seal, I'm afraid the Hyuga clan will consider me their mortal enemy. Furthermore, I have a particularly brilliant idea: what if the protagonist suggested that the Hyuga branch family give up on getting married and having…

This book took my first... Tip! I must write a good review!

Barrels

Considering the author is still a student, I won't make any irrelevant comments. Instead, I'll offer some advice: the prerequisite for storytelling is learning how to tell a story. Study how other authors write, and absolutely do not let writing online novels interfere with your studies. Once you're in university, you can dedicate more time to writing, as writing a good novel requires a significant amount of time and planning.

The author's writing is really good.

Ah, this batch... This batch is called Meat, Egg, Scallion, and Chicken.

The problem isn't a lack of good works, but rather that he can't find them. I found this one randomly in the light novel category on the web version.