Rebirth of Spirits

1. The article has outstanding literary talent, gorgeous rhetoric, simple language, fresh writing, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch at the end, which is profound, thought-provoking, and long-lasting. 2. The novel is novel, thought-provoking and moving; the novel is strange, fascinating and captivating; the essence of literature is all in vain if you delete the sentence; the true is true, and the enthusiasm touches stone hearts; 3. The article has a clear theme and rich literary sentiments. It deeply touches people's hearts and arouses resonance; 4. The clouds and moons of eight thousand miles have all entered the depths of my soul during reading; 5. It shows extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary, and every word is precious. Gorgeous rhetoric creates an atmosphere; 6. The concept is novel, the subject matter is original, and the plot is ups and downs and gripping;

Not bad (it's just a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, go away, there is no meaning of ridicule or sarcasm. I apologize if the language is inappropriate, and I'm sorry if any remarks are offensive. I just simply feel that there are seniors and children in my family, please stay away from the trolls. In addition, my parents are still alive, they are not orphans, they are educated, they are neither gangsters nor blacks, and There is no hostility, only the literal meaning is expressed without sarcasm or suggestion. It only represents my personal views and does not intend to cause controversy or occupy public resources. Please forgive me for inappropriate language. I respect everything. If this reply offends you, I sincerely apologize. If you do not agree with my point of view, do not reply to me specifically. If it is not good, please forgive me)

I scanned the first chapter and found that the plot and logic are quite smooth. Great support.

I dare not make random comments, for fear that later someone will use the Qinglong Yanyue Sword to teach me how to comb my hair in the middle, use the Fang Tian Painting Halberd to peel apples for me, use the Chuan Guo Jade Seal to smash walnuts for me to eat, climb high-voltage wires to play Dongfeng Po for me, use the Dinghai Shenzhen to knit a sweater for me, and then call me Xiu'er. But I can tell you clearly that this book is really beautiful. The novel of literature is thought-provoking and touching; the wonder of literature makes people fascinated; the essence of literature is that if you delete the sentence, it will be empty; the truth of literature is the passion that touches stone hearts. Your article has a clear topic and rich writing. It deeply touches people's hearts and resonates. The warm sunshine is shining gently, I brew a pot of fragrant tea, and gently stretch the writing in the freshness. Caressing the words on it, let the beating rhymes lead me to the promised land everywhere, and an indescribable comfort spreads in my heart. When the speed of thought is relaxed, even light cannot run as fast as it; but reading and books are like the most perfect black hole, which can always lead thoughts to it, accumulate in it, and prepare for the most magnificent explosion. The clouds and moons of the eight thousand miles journey all entered the depths of my soul while reading. The extraordinary literary skills are shown in the ordinary, and every word is precious. Gorgeous rhetoric creates an atmosphere. The concept is novel, the subject matter is original, and the plot is ups and downs and gripping. There are two emotional lines, light and dark, one light and one dark. The author's wonderful pen is full of flowers, and the meaning of admiration is like the endless flow of the surging river.

Well written, keep up the good work and keep an eye on you

As a novelist who likes good stories, my goal is to make the whole story unconventional while ensuring a certain level of interest. Due to the nature of my job, I spend a lot of time on business trips, so the number of words in updates may fluctuate greatly. But we can guarantee that there will be updates every day, and we will not use water just for the sake of water - unless there is no other way! Welcome to visit us often.

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