The Rise of the Elf Master

I have read more than a dozen chapters, and the writing is quite interesting, but the development is too fast at chapter 12. If the plot were released later, at chapter 180, it would not be so abrupt. Coming out so early, I won't talk about Pichu's evolution just a few days after birth, but it's a bit strange to be able to defeat the Rumble Stone with electric skills and defeat so many people at the same time. The level of Longlong Stone must be over twenty. Even if the author said that the difference in strength is so big that even those who are resistant to electricity can be harmed, a newborn Pichu shouldn't be so strong that he can be killed instantly. It will be more reasonable to arrange this plot after a period of training in dozens of chapters.

Sorry, I haven't signed a contract yet with more than 100,000 words, and my first application for a contract was rejected. There are many problems in the manual. I will revise it as a whole and send it out in another copy. The overall story will not change, but I will polish my writing and make the overall style more distinct. To be honest, it was quite a shock not to be signed. I have always felt good about myself. But looking back at the front, it is indeed not attractive enough, and the overall writing style is not highlighted. Thank you all for your support. I didn't expect that there would still be people following me. 😂 My originally bad mood suddenly improved. Thank you all.