Song Dan

I feel like these chapters after the protagonist returns to America are always unpleasant to read. Why was I drawn to this book? I think the author wrote it with great passion and passion. In the opening sea battle at Yashan, the desperate Xing Chao, inspired by the protagonist's righteous speech and leading by example, made great sacrifices to escape. What impressed me the most was that even the dancing girl who had a poem saying "I don't know the hatred of the country's subjugation" could pass on such spirit and will, allowing readers to deeply feel what is the spirit and backbone of the Chinese nation, which is very touching. The plot of the protagonist returning to China in place of his father and leading the movement against the Yuan Dynasty and the Song Dynasty can also reveal the deep emotions between the protagonist and his son. When most of them were lurking, Zhang Yu, who pretended to be crazy and acted stupidly, and used Qin opera to express his will, Wen Tianxiang, who preferred death but regained hope when the protagonist intentionally sent information, someone who endured humiliation and lurked in hiding (no spoilers), the empress dowager who gave up escaping in order to stabilize the exiled court, and the blood-headed army who fought for glory, all left a deep impression on the readers. When entering Sichuan and starting the great cause of restoring the Song Dynasty, the Sichuan people ate pots of pulp and were not afraid of powerful enemies. This is another touching place. I feel like the author may not be performing well recently. Returning to America after a few years, internal construction and conflict resolution should be very interesting. However, I felt that the author's description of this was not very interesting, and even a bit embarrassing. I think the root problem lies in: "too frivolous". From the perspective of the protagonist's setting, he is a "hot-blooded little hooligan" whether in modern times or in ancient times. The "hot blood" aspect is quite successfully created, which is especially reflected in the war plot. The setting of "a hooligan and a playboy" determines his relatively frivolous character. But the image of the characters is not flat, but three-dimensional and flowing. The protagonist has witnessed so many hatreds between countries and families, led the anti-Yuan struggle for a long time, and has a great Confucian as his teacher, so he should have grown up. Although the author mentioned his growth, it is not clearly reflected in the article. His character should be calm, his speaking style should be elegant, his behavior should be wise, and his knowledge reserves should be rich. But the frivolous writing style cannot match such a character at all. When describing the characters' inner monologues, the author often uses vulgar words such as "oh rub". Sometimes such monologues are also used for some important court officials (such as Chen Yizhong recently) to create a special drama. Maybe the author is writing to get excited? In short, I suggest that the author uses such words less in the future. There are many ways to express exclamation, right? Why do you have to use one sentence to get rid of the world? One more point. "So-and-so: '...'" This way of expressing speechlessness is recommended to be used sparingly. Many times, directly deleting this kind of sentence structure has no impact on the understanding of the article, but leaving it there may cause the word count to be inflated. It is said that authors should not randomly change the outline because of readers' comments. I think readers should not use their own ideas to kidnap the plot. Therefore, the suggestions I make are entirely focused on writing and style. I think the plot is good, but the author must not change it randomly. Speaking of writing style, I actually don't dislike relaxed writing style. I particularly like "The Great Husband of the Northern Song Dynasty". It has a relaxed writing style, but because it is set in the heyday of the Northern Song Dynasty, it adopts a tranquil and relaxed style that is more life-like. "Saving the Ming Dynasty" is also in a relaxed and joyful style, but it is set at the end of the Ming Dynasty when the country was in crisis. There were too many constraints from the foolish emperor and the traitorous ministers. Its relaxation is pungent and ironic humor. The era in which this book is set is also facing a national crisis, but there are many loyal ministers and righteous people. If you want to adopt a relaxed writing style, you may have to consider how to be relaxed. To be relaxed but not frivolous, and to grasp the boundary between relaxed and frivolous, I think this is a direction that the author can try. The above is just my personal opinion.

To be honest, the author's description at the beginning is really contagious and picturesque. Later on, it is really a failure and mediocre. I hope the author can improve it and encourage him. This is a half-good book.

I prefer to see the daily life of farming in America😁

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Is there any origin for this Qin opera?

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My surname is Wang, and I am a Taoist priest by profession, but I was not a Taoist priest from the beginning. When I was five years old, there was a famine and war, and my parents took me to Maoshan. I died of illness and I was the only one left in the family. Later on, I became a beggar, leading the homeless orphans to fight with the beggars from the local beggar gang every day to beg for food and work. When I was seven and a half years old, I was alone and surrounded by seven or eight beggars. There was a food shortage that year. The beggars were debating whether to boil me or roast me. I smiled and picked up a sharpened bamboo sword. With a crazy smile, I struck one sword at a time. One by one, I stabbed them down and hit them with sticks, but I felt no pain. On the contrary, I felt a kind of morbid pleasure when stabbing them. Yes, I liked the sound of the sword breaking through the flesh. Later, I also thought that if I wasn't a beggar, maybe I would be a better butcher. When I stabbed the sixth man, my sword was blocked. He is an elegant middle-aged man, dressed casually in a Taoist robe. "Stop it, you come with me, I will support you." "Okay" because I knew I couldn't beat him, so I went to Maoshan and became a direct disciple of the Shangqing Sect. The master said that my talent is high and my murderous intention is serious. I need to cultivate a pure and inactive mind to lock away my thoughts. Well, you are the master and you have the final say. In this way, many years passed in the mountains. The Yuan army is here and the Song Dynasty is dead. The master wants to repay the kindness of the emperor. My brothers and sisters will die with the country. I don't care. I should repay the master and kill a few people by the way. Yashan, King Ning went up, the eunuch went up, and the master also went up. With a simple knife, a small soldier who I could usually fight ten easily cut down the master. At that moment, the monkey broke the chain, the horse dragged the murderous intention, and the Taoist who helped the world died, The killing king of hell is back. I kept killing with a smile and tears of blood from the corner of my eyes. Obviously breaking the flesh is the pleasure that I long for in my heart, but why do I only feel endless sorrow and pain? The master is dead, several senior brothers are dead, and many junior brothers are dead. Later we rushed out, and I followed King Ning to America, Dadu, and Diaoyu City. The deaths of my master and brothers were like a poison that gnawed at my Taoist heart. Maybe I could no longer suppress it, and Yama was about to appear... In the mountain city yizhuang, I never knew that breaking open the flesh was not to take lives, but could even save lives. Breaking, searching, diagnosing, excision, suturing, anti-inflammation... It turns out that this is my Tao! ! At this moment, the heart ape does not need to be restrained by chains, manipulating the sharp knife to break through obstacles and seek ways to save people; the mind is no longer dragging the murderous intention, and is driving the wisdom to push through the clouds and mist to find the cure. Maybe Yama will not come again, I will try to work hard to become the Heavenly Lord of Jishi... For the master and for the common people!

I saw some people saying that ships at that time could not reach America, and I couldn't help but refute it: From the "Chinese Ancient Ship Genealogy", the shipbuilding technology of the Song Dynasty was quite mature. According to Wu Zimu's "Mengliang Lu", the largest seagoing ships in the Song Dynasty had a load capacity of 300 tons, a displacement of 600 tons, and could carry five to six hundred people. Medium-sized ships can carry 150 tons and about 300 people. The sea-going ships of the Song Dynasty had strong hulls and good structures. The hull of the ship is "made of huge logs stacked in all directions". The "Nanhai No. 1" Sunken ship unearthed in 1974 is only 24 meters long and 9 meters wide. The lower part of the ship has 13 watertight compartments separated by 12 partitions. It has a displacement of nearly 400 tons and a load of 200 tons, which is equivalent to the load of 700 camels on the Silk Road. There are various types of ships, which are roughly divided into three categories: sand ships, Fu ships and Guangzhou ships. "Nanhai No. 1" Belongs to the Fu ships. It is said that the Guangzhou ships are even larger, and there is the world-famous "Mulan ship". The technology for long-distance navigation is also basically available. Watertight compartments and compasses are mature and widely used. "Mengxi Bi Tan" records a widely used compass, the "water floating needle", and also records the existence of magnetic declination. It is precisely because of the foundation of the Southern Song Dynasty that the Yuan Dynasty was able to make six voyages to the Western Ocean. Wang Dayuan made several voyages and wrote "Dao Yi Zhi" (it is said that Wang Dayuan also visited Morocco, I don't know whether it is true or not). Having said so much, I just want to show that China was fully capable of discovering America at that time. You know, the flagship of Columbus's fleet was only more than a hundred tons.

There is indeed something remarkable about this book What moved me the most was the love between Wu Song and Diao Chan. In order to save Wang Mang, Zhang Fei turned against his sworn brother, the Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun. Especially when I read that Guo Jing gave up his position as the leader of the Sun Moon God Sect and resolutely wandered around the world with the gentleman Jian Yue Buqun, it made me cry. Linghu Chong joined the anti-Japanese war to avenge his father.

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If I were to go to America, it would take at least fifty years for the population to be born. On average, each Han would marry ten wives and give birth to twenty or thirty children. If everything goes well, there would be more than five million Hans, plus the educated and enslaved Indians, I would be able to establish at least a large empire with a population of tens of millions. By then, Mongolia would have almost declined, and it would be time to send its troops north to regain our territory.

The peace talks with Mongolia at the end were really not that good, especially when I read the first chapter from the beginning, I hated the peace talks even more.

What Song Dan is called Yuan Dan is pretty much the same. Wouldn't it be better for you to just travel through time and become Kublai Khan?

I didn't finish reading this book. I gave it up halfway. I suddenly finished it today and wanted to share my opinion. This book was very interesting and attracted me at the beginning. Later I wrote about entering Dadu and saving people. The storyline and logic are that the protagonist plans everything and everyone knows about it. But if you don't expose it, just play it, the protagonist will definitely succeed, because both the decent and the villain are both good and evil. Helping him secretly, including Kublai Khan, the supreme ruler of the empire. The more I read, the more I doubted myself. Some plots became less and less convincing. I gradually stopped following the updates and gradually gave up. The author's writing is very good and the words are provocative, but the book did not reach a certain level. Historical novels pay attention to the sense of immersion. Maybe this is the reason why most other people like me did not read it.

Please write something about the New World within ten chapters. Originally, I was aiming for the bright spot of the Song Dynasty collectively going to America to farm and then counterattack. However, after not staying long, I hurried back and returned to China at home. It would be better to just write about the protagonist fighting guerrillas in Asia. I was patiently waiting to see the protagonist finally leaving Dadu, but ended up running away to Sichuan again. I really can't stand it anymore. Please understand, the author.

The author could definitely write more about the Americas in more detail. The biggest highlight of this book is the development of the Americas and the land reclamation and farming. It is not difficult to grasp this point and achieve good results.

It's fine to stop like this, but forcing it to continue would be disrespectful to the characters in the story. The high tide is already high where it should be, so there is no need to delay when the tide should ebb. I love this story. In my heart, this Song Dan is higher than the previous books, and it is also higher than most historical novels from the same period. It can be said that this is the historical novel I want.

The protagonist is still influenced by later generations. If we think about the era in which he lived, the Mongolians who killed the Han people into rivers of blood and were displaced by government agencies can integrate into China. Why can't the Japanese, who have no hatred or resentment and are traditional friends, not integrate into China and become outsiders? Isn't it ridiculous?

The Mongol Empire (1206~1635) reached its peak in 1280 (45 million square kilometers), but after it was divided into five relatively independent countries: Ogedai Khanate, Kipchak Khanate, Chagatai Khanate, Ilkhanate, and Dayuan Empire, although they all had large territories. Especially the Great Yuan Empire, which the Chinese people today call the Yuan Dynasty. It covers an area of ​​22 million square kilometers, reaching the Arctic Ocean in the north, Indonesia in the south, Japan in the east, and Nepal in the west. At that time, there were no railways or roads. It was impossible to maintain such a large rule, and it was impossible to defend it even if it was conquered. It takes three years to reach the Mediterranean Sea from Qingdao, Shandong Province. If the weather is bad, I don't know how long it will take. Unless you complete the first industrial revolution, you can almost survive the second industrial revolution!

I have something strange. Do the people in Mongolia speak the same language as Song? There are also many places in the front, and I feel like everyone understands what the other is saying, and the translator didn't translate everything out, right?

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Author, you have a normal Chinese mindset and treat the Indians with kindness and equality. If they don't make trouble, you will give them equal treatment. But to be honest, writing this way disappoints most people. In the minds of ordinary people, Indians are defeated, enslaved, backward, primitive and barbaric. But if you made such a person equal to yourself hundreds of years ago, when fists were used to judge right and wrong, this would make readers feel aggrieved. The author brought the thinking of modern people into hundreds of years ago. It is really outrageous to talk about equal human rights with a group of savages who have not yet put on pants and screamed. What readers want to see most is that you turned yourself into a tyrant. Isn't your character a gangster? Why are you only a gangster to your own people and so polite to outsiders? You must know that in that era, even our own people were divided into masters and servants, and your equal attitude towards the Indians was equivalent to putting them above the Chinese. Not to mention the readers' discomfort, even the 170,000 people at the time could not convince themselves that they were equal to the natives. Generally speaking, extreme authors treat the indigenous people as direct slaves, but I guess the author cannot do this. At least, you must treat the indigenous people as second-class people and reflect it in all aspects. Otherwise, reading your article will be like taking poison. Furthermore, the great thing about historical writing is that it is "difficult to reconcile" and solve the shortcomings in history. It would be nice to lead everyone to solve the cliff and discover the rich America, but it would not be nice to give up the fertile northern wilderness and go to the narrow Panama. The author is thinking that there is a lot of snobbery there, so that a conflict plot can break out, right? Actually, it's not the case. Farming is just as fun. Watching your territory grow a little bit is fun. Occasionally, a few North American tribes can cause trouble and cause plot conflicts. Even if you have to use the three major civilizations to trigger a conflict, you can let the Song Dynasty court stay in the fertile wilderness of the north, and you take your own camp to Panama to conduct trade or conflict plots. In this way, you can avoid picking up the big watermelons from the fertile fields of North America but losing the sesame seeds from Panama.

The Great Plains of North America would be over if we didn't occupy it, but we would be speechless if we left it to the Japanese. In fact, there are more Japanese immigrants in North America than in the Song Dynasty. Can you stop spreading poison all the time?

If the population has not grown in five years, it will still be small. Is this really a farming article? Organize a fleet to immigrate, marry and assimilate with the natives, or give birth to a new child in a few years. You will grow up as long as you write casually, and the fun will come. If the farming article does not continue to grow, the fun will be lost.

I don't know why the author's writing is so good, but it only costs more than 200 monthly tickets. Personally, I don't think it's much more than a thousand.

Finished spreading flowers, for the sake of the old man, and also for the first group I joined, the first author to follow, so the person who voted for all my recommended votes and monthly votes, I am here, I hope you will always be there too, remember to let me know when you open a new book. If I know, I will always be there. If you don't know, I don't know 😐😐😐

The front is fine, but the back is broken. Did you sell the book to someone else?

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The educational reform part and the ending were very uncomfortable to watch. Not that they were unreasonable, but they just felt different from the original tone of the book. . . But I'd better come here and make up the original version of the parts I like, that's it.