If Your Business Fails, You Will Marry the Empress

The author should not overstate the word count and should not add factors that affect the reader's mood. It is better to destroy a person's sense of shame. This can easily lead to psychological irritation and disgust. You should write something passionate and exciting that makes readers feel that they are reading a good book instead of making readers think that you are looking for an opportunity to make people zb.

Well, let's take a look, isn't it popular now? I have put a 1 on the title of every chapter starting from chapter 90, but no one has seen it after so long.

Brother, this book is not popular in the first place, but you still criticize it like this!

I've never seen fewer recommendation votes than this

The author can ask for a recommendation vote at the end of each chapter, otherwise he always forgets to vote.

The book has reached over 300 chapters, and the protagonist still doesn't plan to form a force to guide the fallacy? You've been taught so many lessons and you still haven't lost your memory? Why do you have to rely on help from others when you are being slandered? (See my comments in the last paragraph of the second page of Chapter 299 for details)

How do you say, impotence?

I feel very frustrated when I see it now. Please hurry up and let the male protagonist kill those bastards. It's so frustrating. It's like watching some female videos. How do the villains mess with the heroine? After the heroine escapes, she leaves these people behind and never learns her lesson. Please let the protagonist pretend to be awesome. Just be a human being.

I feel that the author should have included a female protagonist or a few confidantes, otherwise it would feel like there would always be a relationship of interest as the book continues to be written. That's no fun. Change your outline to make your work more palatable.

The book is quite good, but it's a pity it's not popular

If you don't want to see the one below, don't read it (ﾉД`)

Speaking of which, I also felt uncomfortable when I saw Princess Minghua die. It would be great if I could give the princess a good ending.

There are more than 230 chapters and I'm dumbfounded. Isn't there anyone in Xin who has an online IQ? The correct answers in the two test papers are the same. One is blank and the questions are not written, and the other is filled in incorrectly. How can it be possible that the first one was copied from the second one... No wonder the country is divided. If I don't stay in this country, I will die unjustly every day.

Low IQ woman, trash, pets are not yours

The climax is too slow, too depressing, and the protagonist is so passive

Relaxed, good, not so brain-burning

Come on, the author writes very well 😃

The protagonist was a bit too frustrated in the previous writing, and it seemed to be a bit broken in the first two chapters. The protagonist suddenly became a bit arrogant, and it was not good to overdo it. It should be much more enjoyable now than before. I like to read cool articles, but I don't like to read mindless cool articles.

Ideological boundaries can be understood as your set view of the universe, but you can break through the inherent thoughts and try to make people more and more solidified. For the author, that means the writing becomes worse and worse, or he is too old and his thoughts cannot enter, or I won't say more. If you don't break, how can you innovate? If you break, then building a larger universe view and setting may be better or worse. But what if you succeed? So be sure not to fixate on your thoughts, otherwise your novel will be worthless! I feel like what I said is right. Please give me a 1 below. Thank you. I hope the author writes better and better!

After you have the golden finger, activating the golden finger function will extract body energy, and the more you use it, the weaker it will become. Since you are in the world of immortality, have you ever thought about practicing this technique to strengthen yourself? I have been repeating the cycle of taking medicine to become weak and taking medicine to become weak. I have read more than a dozen chapters so far, and I don't know if I will practice the exercises later! If you continue to drink medicine and not practice the exercises, it will be a bit poisonous!

I voted for a monthly vote Do you understand?

It's beautiful, why isn't it popular?

Great support for the author, I really like this style of book

1,000 Taels, I don't want to say bad words about this

To be honest, the author should not forcefully create crises for the protagonist just to show off. Some of them are just too childish.

The author doesn't seem to emphasize the power system of cultivating immortals.

It feels like the routines used now are a bit old.

Although the strong regional color does not affect the viewing, it is good if we excerpt the well-known aspects. Some of the slap-in-the-face preludes are better to be mentioned in one go. It is originally a cool article that combines jokes and folk tales, and the whole sadistic plot like the Book of the Dead is a bit broken and inconsistent. You see, Ji and Kang's slap-in-the-face prelude also explains what the protagonist is going to do, which at least gives the audience a reason to make a comeback. It is not so depressing for the audience.

It is written about the world of cultivating immortals, but it is actually more like martial arts. . . .