Wulin Villain Tyrant

In the first twenty chapters, various debuffs are given to the protagonist, and at critical moments, he is even more impotent, which is depressing. Originally, the image of Guo Fu who was decisive in killing and confident in using strategies was quite good, but gradually various debuffs began to add support. First, the inconvenience of hands and feet caused by a soul that was not fully integrated appeared when fighting with others. I will not go into details about poisoning. Then, the failure of the strategies formulated again and again made people feel that they were completely random in promoting the development of the plot. Among them, the main failure in shaping occurred when I met Duan Yu and had already touched the Beiming Magic. At this time, the pig's feet suddenly became a saint and was inspired. I want Duan Yu to hand it over willingly! Just like a piece of old phlegm in the mouth, the pleasure that was once spat out turned into the depression of swallowing it.

When you travel to Huodu, you have to stand in his shoes and do things

Huo Dou's identity is too embarrassing. I pondered for a long time and couldn't figure out how to write it properly. It might be possible to be black, but reporting is indispensable. I'm most afraid of being half black and not black, swinging left and right, and then it's over.

I take back what I said before. It's not bad. The first Gongsun Lu'e who was with the male protagonist here died. I said, author, do you really want to be popular? I've tolerated being an abusive master, and I've tolerated not being a villain, and then you're going to tell me how to make love disappear? The mountains are high and the roads are far away, never seen again.

Jin Yong's novels have a timeline. They are originally a world. If you forcefully disrupt it, it will end up being a forced piece together.

Many book friends say they don't like mixed martial arts and fusion worlds. I used to write about a single world and it was too short. I don't want to write about the reincarnation of the heavens, but the single Jinwu world is too short in depth, and all the characters will die in the two climaxes, so it doesn't take a million words. Unless you add characters yourself, that would be boring. It would be better not to write a fanfic and just be original. I think the simple Jinshu mixed martial arts is quite good. Think about the scheming Mongolian Zhao Min and the resourceful Song Dynasty defender Huang Rong. What will happen when they fight? Xiao Dawang, who has set up the stereo, and Guo Jing, who has turned on the violent mode, have a tough fight. Who is more powerful? The protagonist gathers various villains to have a K-fight with the upright Guo Jing, Wang Chongyang and a group of people. There are also some conspirators, such as Yue Buqun, Zuo Lengchan and others, as well as some real historical heroes, such as Zhu Yuanzhang, Chen Youliang, and Kublai Khan. It feels more lively and passionate than a single world.

The subject matter at the beginning was not good, and if the butt was crooked, it was destined to fall into the street.

How do you ask the centenarian Zhang Sanfeng to face the unborn Guo Xiang? ? ?

Why is it written very well, but then it is poisoned?

Traveling through Cheng Huodu, this book is over for you. Small details can sometimes be ignored, but big ones cannot be missed!

I don't see anything like a villain at all. He has a God's perspective but doesn't know how to seize opportunities to improve his strength. He catches eagles and walks dogs all day long, laughs and laughs behind women's butts, something like Li Mochou in the late Qing Dynasty...

I chose the wrong protagonist from the beginning. You don't even have to look at it to be fooled.

I have to talk about the shortcomings of this book so far: 1. The protagonist has many subordinates, but he says he only has one or two. Then he will definitely be beaten. 2 Even if the protagonist occasionally brings more good players with him, it is useless, because the protagonist is always alone in danger. 3 The protagonist is usually attacked by a sneak attack, which means that several people who are completely inferior to him in martial arts attack him. The protagonist says that he is not stressed, and then there is a sudden sharp pain in his back. It turns out that he was slashed by the person behind him, a sneak attack! The 4th book is about mixed martial arts, but the protagonist says that he doesn't need more magical skills, and practicing too much is just mixed martial arts but not perfect! You can't imitate Murong Fu, just a Dragon Elephant is enough. After all, Qiao Feng can conquer the world with his Dragon Subduing. Then the protagonist can't beat anyone, and he can't catch up even if he beats him. He has a single attack method, and he is always attacked by surprise and his defense is easily broken. By the way, the protagonist can beat Murong Fu? People didn't have to worry about it and beat him calmly.

What the hell are you writing? It's a mess. Your plot should be written well, not just like a psycho who throws a hammer and a stick here and there.

You've already said that you are a tyrant, why don't you collect troops and control Mongolia and wander around outside every day? What's the difference between you and Murong Fu? Is there any martial arts beauty who controls the army?

The old men in "Eternal Dragon Sword" all went to the Condor Heroes to recognize their relatives. Can they find their childhood self? Just like the Emei sect existed before Guo Xiang was born, do other sects also have to recognize their ancestors? ? ?

Seeing the world of integration, your book will be yellow

Huo Dou was actually defeated by a little guy like Zhong Wanchou. What skills do you have in the future? How can you fight for the throne?

The name of the book should match the content. The villain should be a tyrant, and the protagonist should be a hero, cold-blooded or cruel. To benefit myself at the expense of others, it is better for me to betray the world than for the world to betray me.