Tianzun Has Demonic Nature

Although there are only two short ones, they are pretty good. Please update soon! ! !

Thank you to several readers for their collections. Your support is my motivation!

The writing is good, but some of the words seem a bit stiff if you think about it a little more.

Well written, keep up the good work

Well written! Collected! Take your time and watch! A little less! Lots of updates! Welcome to visit us again!

It's well written, very interesting, and the story is exciting and smooth. I'll keep following it. I'll save it to my bookshelf and enjoy it carefully. Be sure to update it. Come on, come on, welcome to visit again!

The title of the book is a bit interesting, and players who like to see Xiaobai's antics will probably like it. But the introduction is too rough and not much information can be extracted. Even if it is a refined introduction by a master, readers can extract more information. At least attract readers to read the first chapter. The title and introduction are the readers' first impression of a book. Personally, I don't think the writing is very good (don't blame me). Even if it's a novice, it shouldn't be too rough, otherwise there will be no sense of immersion. At least the worldview and details should be better prepared and unfolded slowly, or the description should be described with a good grasp of the rhythm and passion. Pay attention to punctuation, otherwise the page will look messy. There are also scene changes, segments and turning points of events. If you pay more attention to the detailed description of actions, scenery and characters, it will be more vivid.

The writing is smooth, the language is plain, the details are outstanding, the sense of immersion is good, and the storyline is good

The rhythm must be steady, and if there are no major mistakes, it is a good achievement for a newcomer! Come on!

The writing is good, but there is still a lot of room for improvement. Persistence is victory, come on!

Updates are slow now, but in the future I believe the author will update twice or more every day