Yuan Valve

I hope the author will work hard and keep writing.

When Dong Bai was kidnapped by his wedding dress, was he suitable?

Author, the Eastern Han Dynasty is different from the Sui and Tang Dynasties. The founders of the Eastern Han Dynasty were the product of compromises with aristocratic families. Do you think Liu Xiu is really the son of destiny? Liu Xiuxin went and learned Wang Mang's lessons. Emperor Yang of the Sui Dynasty united with the Guanlong Group, but what was the result? If the protagonist does not have the desire to dominate the world, it would be courting death to bring out the blank paper. However, the Lord is originally this, interest, a share in the middle. As a result, the protagonist wants to betray this interest group. The best outcome for the protagonist is to be the same as Emperor Sui Yang.

The protagonist's feelings for his father are too poisonous. Why should he be like a princess and be written like an enemy first... Just like now, it is normal to have a generation gap with the elders. In the past, when I was rebellious, I would quarrel with the elders in the family every now and then. But now I understand that there is no need or need to argue with the elders. If they don't understand, they don't understand. Just go in with the left ear and out with the right ear. What's more, the protagonist lives in ancient times where filial piety is very important, and the protagonist is quite old mentally. If he can't even stand this little anger, why do he do anything important?

It's well written, but I'm not satisfied with the setting. You, the Yuan family, are going to replace the Han Dynasty. The author, you arranged for the princess to be the queen after the first wife. What do you think about the child born with the blood of the previous dynasty? Don't tell me that the ancients didn't pay attention to this issue. No one cares about this issue more than the ancients.

A 50-stone bow is also a good one. Huang Zhong needed three stones to hold him to death. A fifty-stone bow couldn't be pulled even if he tried hard enough. Let's be more rigorous.

The plot around Chapter 23 is too bloody. Not to mention where the bows and arrows of a few refugees came from. It is difficult to understand that a few refugees can use bows. And it is even more outrageous to be able to shoot a moving target like the protagonist on horseback from the very beginning. Sanniang helping the protagonist block the arrow is completely a bloody plot

I feel like the protagonist is a bit immature in terms of speech and behavior. My great-uncle and his family must be killed before I can grow up.

The writing is indeed very good. I feel that it can be ranked in the T1 series of Three Kingdoms novels in the past year or two. I have already collected it and ordered it all. Good luck to the author💪. For several female protagonists, although the novice characters are very lovable, Haitang is the best in the world and does not accept refutation (Baitang is awesome)! ! !

The fourth generation and the third prince of the Yuan family, Yuan Xun is the king at the beginning. He is young and heroic, and is expected to be the champion. (I found a few)

I have read too many novels, and like to go to unrealistic places to develop Liaodong, Jiaozhou, and Xiliang. Few generations of hard work can develop Liaodong, Jiaozhou, and Xiliang. Don't laugh me to death. Don't talk about the population problem, just food. The aliens are enough for you to drink a pot. Jizhou, Xuzhou, Jingzhou, the land of dragon prosperity, Yangzhou, Yizhou, and other continents that can be developed depend on luck.

The writing is really good and very real, which moved me very much. I read all the chapters in one day from yesterday afternoon to this morning, and I still have more to say. I have already cast a monthly vote and am looking forward to the next chapter update and the reunion of Yuan and Yu Nu.

The heroic Liu Tong

Without the author, the protagonist is from a noble family and origin, so why are you pretending to be a saint? Pay attention to political stance

I feel these two are the most suitable for Dong Bai's exotic style.

I have read half of it, and it can basically be said that it is a good article about the Three Kingdoms. As the author's first book, it is expected that there will be some problems. I don't understand it. The words and actions of the male protagonist can be seen to some extent that the author has incorporated modern terms into the description when describing it. It can be seen that he wrote it very carefully. The point I personally discovered is that the first Haitang must be the head wife. As the female character with the largest role, the character is also well portrayed, and the identity issue is also difficult to match. This should not be a big change. Second, the previous terms are too modern and violent, but if you think about it carefully, habits and terms used for many years cannot be changed in a short time. Hopefully it will be reduced in the future. From the character of the third protagonist, we can see that the author is deliberately foreshadowing the innocent thoughts of a future person who will change the fate of relatives and friends around him, but will change after experiencing events later. It reminds me of a saying that people are always naive at first, but after experiencing certain things, their minds will become stronger. I'm really looking forward to the male lead in The Army is Awakening. So childishness is something everyone has. Fourth, it is best not to show any gunpowder or anything like that to disrupt the balance of the battlefield, otherwise there will be nothing interesting to watch later. It's like an invincible text. The sixth is my personal thought. I think I can write about the conflict between parents and children and managing their wives well later. The training of the next generation is very important. I also hope that the male protagonist can treat his sons equally. After all, this is a modern idea. The feeling between brothers. Because I have read a book that was very well written but it ended badly because of poor grades. The prince rebelled and the queen committed suicide. The male protagonist never dealt with matters between children, and there were also fights between several wives. I will support all orders later, come on, author. Of course, I am just suggesting that you still have to write according to your own ideas.

If you can't handle the relationship between father and son at home, how can you handle the entire group of ranger merchants? No logic at all

How should I put it? It's not too ugly. I can only say that it all relies on peers to drag the village. Take a look at what the historical classification of Qidian is now. It's more interesting to read the complaints in the book circle than to read novels.

Should Yuan Xun be allowed to fight for hegemony on his own, or should he be assisted by someone else? I always feel that with his status and feelings, it would be a bit wrong not to fight for hegemony on his own.

My personal suggestion is to read "Hongxiongzhi" at the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty twice more. I think the interests of all parties introduced and the development of the thick black era are described well. You can refer to it.

The writing is good. Those who say that the male protagonist, Madonna, is a modern time traveler. He grew up in modern times and received the education that everyone is equal, respects each other, and is friendly. How could it be possible that someone's personality would change after traveling through time? When we read time travel novels, aren't we just watching the male protagonist change the people and things around him with modern ideas? It's really funny not to think of everything as the Holy Mother. I also feel that the starting point of the protagonist is quite high. The status of the Fourth World and the Three Dukes is already a start. If Yuan Shao and Yuan Shu have the same character as Liu Bei, the chance of unification will be much greater.

I don't recommend this book very much, I found it very frustrating. When I wrote this review, I read half of the sixth volume, which is about 1 million words. This is a sadistic novel suitable for those who like to watch a white virgin male protagonist and two or three female characters in the context of the Three Kingdoms. The male protagonist was a liberal arts college student before he traveled through time. Even if he was twenty years old, he was almost 15 years old when the story of the Three Kingdoms World began (it was passed down to a child of one or two years old and grew up). Such a middle-aged man with a mental age of more than 30 years has repeatedly done all kinds of innocent and stupid things. The protagonist repeatedly uses his age as a teenager to say that his previous life was in vain. 2/4 Of the 1 million words are spent on falling in love and entangled with women, 1/4 of the time is spent on entangled with men (various senior brothers) and expressing no less than ten times that he just wants to be a bad boy (meaning that the protagonist just wants to be a playboy, not saving the world); only the last 1/4 is about plotting, describing the plot, holding a meeting, coming up with a plan, and it's over. As soon as I fall in love, it goes on for several chapters. In addition, the protagonist will always be fooled by others like a fool, and will keep moaning about 1⃣️Sanniang is dead, 2⃣️poor people can't afford to eat, 3⃣️big man has finished these three points. I was deceived several times in the first half a million words, but I didn't learn a lesson from it. But then I suddenly understood because of a small thing, and I couldn't understand this book. Another: This book seems to be a eunuch now.

There is a reason for his poor grades. If the eldest son of the Yuan family is written like this, the first two chapters will become unreadable.

There is a slight flaw in the author's historical knowledge, but it can be completely compensated by his own personal interpretation of "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms". One hundred people will have one hundred interpretations of "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms", and I hope the author can boldly innovate. Just a reminder: Huang Zhong's archery skills are not ranked at all in the official history of the Three Kingdoms.

Treasure found! ! ! It's so appetizing QAQ Come on duck

There are less than ten books written about the Yuan family, but half of them are systematic texts. One of the more interesting books is the one written by Yuan Jia with shy eyebrows. Because the Book of the Three Kingdoms, I think it is really meaningless to travel through the literary system. It is purely about numbers and fast food. After all, there are many traditional texts. I have finished reading most of them. Now there is a shortage of books to read online. This book feels quite interesting. If I were to recommend it highly, I think this book has no hope. It won't be able to escape the siege, because I haven't seen this kind of breakthrough come out. There is a book written by Emperor Zhou that is highly recommended. It is important to build a reputation. At least if the popularity of the next book keeps up, it will be no problem. Support support 😊

Are you a eunuch? ? It's the best Three Kingdoms movie I've seen in the past few years.

To be honest, I want to continue writing. I don't know if the author can agree. I wouldn't say that the writing is excellent, but I can still read it.

😅 I really want to be a eunuch after watching it. It's been months.

The writing is quite good, but there are too few, so I'll keep it for now.