Black Technology at the Beginning, Only I Know the Plot

I have saved a lot of them, and I just saw a copy, and I have a lot to complain about. Trouble 1: Why is the protagonist 4 months old! That's right, why would a girl who had been chasing her for a week without success 4 months ago give this high-tech ring to a complete stranger? Do you have no relatives? The orphanage will also think about giving it to its real friends, right? (The outrageous thing is that the principal of a school is an academician! He is holding a submachine gun...?! Under what circumstances is he holding a submachine gun? Even the woman who brought the protagonist in is holding a Barrett... Academician!!! Damn, there are only more than a thousand in total in the country, including the deceased! It took several generations to make up more than a thousand You're the one who can charge with a submachine gun?! What's wrong with the academician? Is there no one left?) Why can the protagonist's roommates kill the monster from the inside, but the people in the headquarters didn't think of nuclear bombs or weapons of mass destruction? (The ground-penetrating missile penetrates the monster's face or eyes and explodes inside. Isn't that too much?) Slot 3: Why does the novice copy seem so difficult? After two or three years of playing with millions of players, the protection period has ended and no one has survived in the novice level? The protagonist survives immediately upon arrival, and then announces it to the world? Novice death-free copy, novice! Novice dungeons can't survive, but other dungeons that can die can still survive? ! The maximum number of people online is 6 million, which means that including those who died, there are tens of millions of people online, right? Are these more than 10 million people who entered the game two or three years earlier than the protagonist and failed to clear it? It seems that the protagonist's IQ is not very high, right? The plot utilization is not very high either. (It's like tens of millions of people in front of me have been working hard for several years just for fun. The protagonist immediately cleared the level as soon as he came. I was stupid. It was so natural.) Trough 4: What is the concept of 6 million players? There are hundreds of thousands of people left dead, so why not use nuclear bombs? In other words, the headquarters and the NT department will use nuclear bombs to attack the monsters when tens of thousands of people die! Isn't it outrageous that you have to kill millions of players before you think of using nuclear bombs? ! Do you think human life is too low? Millions of people have died, but they are still reluctant to use nuclear bombs, so they really accept it. (The most outrageous thing is that the American continent has been occupied, and they are still reluctant to use nuclear bombs... Doesn't the United States have weapons of mass destruction or single-body destruction weapons? I doubt that any occupied state will immediately use nuclear bombs to take it back. Nothing is more valuable than human life, not to mention the protection period. A master-level player who has been playing for two or three years.) Slot 5: After the dungeon was released, the protagonist brought out the blueprints (don't ask, it's the protagonist's halo) and gave them to the research institute for research. (Do you think of the research institute now? Don't the academicians charge with submachine guns?) We came to the conclusion that it can be made! Then the protagonist became the chief engineer. . . (After seeing this, I stopped reading. It was so disappointing. It seemed like YY in the mind of an adolescent child. He took everything for granted.) Finally, I hope the author can realize his mistakes. I used to really like Super Soldier, so I hoped that the author could write it well. Maybe my expectations were too high, maybe. The book review is over a thousand words long. I feel it is a bit verbose and I am really sorry for causing trouble to everyone.

Toxic, originally the foreplay was fine, the protagonist with the plot advantage of the earth movie went to the parallel universe to save the endangered earth, but because of the urgency, he would not be sneaky, but as soon as he entered the world,,, I thought the technology side was Pacific Rim, EVE and the like. If not, you write Marvel, I have nothing to do with Anti-Hulk, but in the end, there was a magic change to White Snake, White Snake became the technology side, and Heaven became Heaven Co., Ltd.? ? ? What advantages does your plot have? Who gave you the courage to say that you can save the world by experiencing it? ? ?

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What was changed? Magic changed the Legend of White Snake into technology? There is no sense of immersion at all. Has the protagonist seen the revised version of The Legend of White Snake? Know the plot? And it's still cool. I've been nagging at myself. Can you please be more cool and go directly to the topic? It's really three seconds of getting to the point after three hours of foreplay! Please, the author, please stop showing off your imagination and change it. Just make it normal, otherwise it will be very dramatic, okay?

Pacific Rim's mechas are garbage

The one about black technology, I thought it was about Marvel, Star Wars and the like, but it turned out to be The Legend of White Snake. . . Sorry, I can't stand it anymore, so I deleted it.

It turns out that The Legend of White Snake is the author's magical adaptation. I thought it really had a science fiction background like The Legend of White Snake. There was no sense of disobedience and it was particularly science fiction. Unfortunately, I didn't continue writing. Although this is good for the sake of rhythm, I am still quite curious about the plot after that. Is there any old reader who can tell me whether the author likes to have ambiguities or have a harem or have two heroines? . The emotional scenes are not important at all, but they are easily disgusting. (It's not easy for a female character written by a male author to be normal, but it's still normal so far)

Honestly! I really want to write about black technology to fight against invaders! Fight alien behemoths! ! I was so pleasantly surprised when I saw this book! But after seeing more than 50 photos, I really can't stand it anymore 😒😒😒 What's wrong with going to Pacific Rim! Why go to Legend of White Snake! I can't hold on anymore😭😭

I have been fighting behemoths and monsters for three years. I don't know what the most basic monsters and monsters eat. Are hundreds of thousands of people stupid?

Author, you have written well before, why do you have to add a brave heart? Your brave heart is extremely poisonous, and it is getting more and more poisonous. The poison resistance is no longer enough and has been withdrawn. Dear book friends, please take note.

Isn't it Ultraman who can defeat the giant beast? He actually said that the only one who can defeat the giant beast is a mecha. He gave up on it.

After reading the Thor chapter, I really couldn't hold on anymore and was poisoned to death. Alas, I'm still too weak. I really didn't expect that Iron Man would disclose his contact information on the Internet, nor did I expect that the suit was actually rechargeable. Finally, I never expected that Meowth Hammer was not allowed to be taken by Thor because he thought he had no fighting spirit. Well, I didn't expect that it had nothing to do with Odin. There were so many shortcomings in the past that I'm afraid I won't be able to finish them until tomorrow morning, so I won't give examples one by one. Finally, I want to say something to the author, sorry! Because we mortals really can't understand the author's imagination, so goodbye 🙏

Didn't anyone get the curse skill in the past 3 years? It depends on the protagonist to shout 😅 one by one. This book is called the story of the protagonist leading a group of idiots to protect the earth.

The protagonist was eliminated in the first game. He had one-tenth of his attributes and couldn't even stand up. He also had an inexplicable super brave heart, which was too annoying.

It turns out he is the author of Super Soldier System. I used to like reading novels and I still have an impression of the plot.

Everything else is okay! It's that super brave heart that is so jarring and extremely poisonous. The protagonist is directly the slave of this super brave heart. If you ask him to go east, the protagonist will never dare to go west. The missions issued by Super Brave Heart are still so deceptive, and the penalties for mission failure are also very deceptive. The heart rate drops directly to one tenth, which is comparable to the system that wipes out others at every turn when it first became popular.

A brave heart, no matter how brave it is, is still poisoned to death

This article about the Great Wall doesn't have much of a sense of immersion... It's crooked, let's reflect on it. I feel like you are moving into a book as you write. Shouldn't Lake be a novice... He has no growth process at all. In this way, new readers will be confused. Are you directly trying to persuade new readers to quit... At the same time, old readers will also have liver pain? Boring? That's it? Looking at it this way, it seems that he is not as good-looking as Fatty Lei. Okay. For such a boring Qin, my guess is as follows First You want to take the Great Wall and the construction of the later Qin, but at present, the copy of Old Qin really does not have high technology, and the magic modification has not been started, so the plot seems very awkward. Although this escape party is a highlight, everyone will not be satisfied. I know you want to write Qin's foreshadowing. All right. . . Do you still remember the turning point in the last Liao Zhai continuation of Journey to the West, which was the action of the Big Buddha... I was really amazed at that time. In comparison, what is limiting your performance this time. Is it the National Day holiday... Finally Let's talk about a headline-making thing "Why doesn't this author mention the topic?" Your definition of technology, or everyone's definition of technology, is different, and there are hundreds of millions of differences. Although I have written about technology, I just can't feel the power of technology... It's not strong enough... Right? Please come out and share your opinion. Do you feel this way?

I have read more than 40 chapters, and the previous setting is very good. I just don't understand why the devil needs to change the White Snake. There are many science fiction movies, but you really can't stand it. It's really weird.

Bullshit! If the earth is big enough to build three mechas, it will run out of resources. How big is the mecha? One hundred thousand meters high? The Wandering Earth Project can build ten thousand planetary engines several kilometers high. Even if you want to find a reason for invasion, don't talk nonsense like this! Civilizations on different planets are dominated by the weak and the strong. Where do we need a reason for invasion?

Is Gundam considered a science fiction world? Does Pacific Rim count? Does Transformers count? Can Beast Man count as a science fiction world? Can Iron Armor Xiaobao be counted? I feel that if you go to that world and come back, you can save the world without checking.

The people of the Earth Defense Force are like the heroes in the storm, but the authorities are obsessed with it, and the bystanders know clearly. If we are in the game and see the prophecy, we also want to change our destiny. It's a pity that the trajectory of fate can't be changed, hey~

The biggest flaw of this book is that it doesn't cover so much about the world of science and technology, so it insists on writing about The Legend of White Snake.

That's it. Now the main thing is to promote it well. I can't even see the promotion of this book on the homepage.

The protagonist's IQ is worrying. Who told you that you can take off just by being familiar with the plot? If it weren't for the halo of the protagonist, he would have died a long time ago, and he must have a brave heart to persuade many people to quit. The White Snake Legend can resist poison for a while, but now I can only say goodbye. Come on, author.

I've read a few of Big Brother's books and they're all good, and this one is also very fresh.

At first, I never understood what the title of the book meant, and I felt it had nothing to do with the content. It was recommended by an old book, and I felt the meaning of the title as I read it. (Sure enough, I read the right person) I originally thought that this book would be similar to "Global Heavens Online", but gradually I found that the author had changed a lot of settings. Is this right? The settings are the same, so what else is there to see? I look forward to the development of the plot. Come on, author! We, the book club, will always support you. 😁

After I had my heart, I felt it was too poisonous, so I retreated.

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Technology - The Legend of White Snake, a magical adaptation, which makes you feel excited just thinking about it 😠