Mortal Nine Thousand Years

It's time for the author to stop writing here. Your quality has dropped a lot since you started cultivating immortals. Your pace is too fast. Without as much foreshadowing as when you were a mortal, it feels like you just added whatever plot you thought of to the story. The ending... I don't need to say it anymore. It doesn't matter if it's dark or not, the main thing is the quality. I have been short of books for many years, and I don't want to see a book of grain and grass forgotten by me. Haha, I have said too much. Actually, I am here to ask for books. Do you have any good books? I am short of books. Thank you for asking for books.

I don't know why the protagonist only remembers his second uncle after becoming famous, but not his parents. Maybe... He was stupid while practicing martial arts?

Highly recommended! ! ! This book has a unique perspective. It puts aside the conventions of ordinary people, family farming, and brainless cool articles. It is unique. It is indeed a breath of fresh air. Monks are originally an extremely selfish group, as greedy as locusts, so as long as they are used by me, there is no distinction between good and evil. Regarding the pig's trotter character, I feel that there is no sense of inconsistency in it. There are many suspenseful designs in this book and it is quite impressive. I suggest that the writing style be more witty and add a little spoof to make it more perfect. Some plots can be completely expanded and written, and the routines can be deeper. It took me two days to read the entire book. The final conclusion is that it is highly recommended!

There are many people who criticize this book in the comments, but I think this book is good and good, and I hope the author can work hard. Don't be affected by some bad comments. I think your creative writing style is very good. I always look at the writing style and the charm of language when reading books. There are many comments in the comment area about the structure of this book and its many bugs. In fact, if you observe carefully, there will be some bugs in every book. But why everyone can understand some books even if they have bugs, but most people can't understand some books if they have bugs. The main reason is that the writing style and language of this book are not attractive enough and cannot cover up the charm of these bugs. I think your book has these charms. I particularly like the passage in your book about the transition from mortals to immortal cultivators. It reminded me of a sentence: practice your breath internally and your muscles, bones and skin externally. Also, he was grabbed by a zombie and spilled the medicine on the ground. In this section, you can see the inner struggle of the protagonist, as well as various opportunities and coincidences. There is really a feeling of helplessness of a small person wandering around in the big world. It feels like the world described by the author is an amplified reality, making people feel more emotionally involved. It's really great, keep it up 😄

A little suggestion for the author: At this point in writing, I feel like I can make a decision and sublimate this work. The current main plot is to confront the evil cultivator who has obtained the best spiritual root, and also to face his backer. Starting from here, we can ask the question: When evil people have value, can they be protected by the strong, and the evil deeds they have done can be directly written off, and they can even foresee reaching the top in the future and be worshiped by the world. (Write that the evil cultivator has made meritorious deeds and successfully transformed into a righteous path, which is even more contradictory to the protagonist's false accusation of being an evil cultivator) Add an idea: the strong just keep ordinary people in captivity. But does the protagonist with the memory of the earth want to adapt to this environment, or create a different environment. In the end, he became the leader of the demon sect or something... Of course, this is a routine, and it must have been written in other books, but the routine is not afraid of being old, it just depends on the author's skill in writing and whether it is brilliant or not. This book has the opportunity to take it to the next level. So far, it's quite satisfactory. Occasionally it will be a little runny. It feels like it's almost a sublimation of the overall tone. Finally, I wish Europe 🙏

It's boring to just worship a hot chicken master.

This book takes a different path from traditional immortal cultivators. In short, it contains five words: "refining one's breath within". From the initial "martial arts training true energy" to the "fierce sun spiritual energy" after cultivation, it will continue to transform? There is no need to build a foundation or form an elixir. Just keep refining Qi, and the path will be simple. There will be no bottlenecks. The promotion will be faster and faster, pointing directly to the path. Then this breath of "qi" will drive the essence, energy and spirit to progress simultaneously. Others ask pig's feet: Why are you so powerful? Are you an immortal? Pig's Knuckle: No, I'm not, I'm just a mortal at the third thousand level of Qi Refining Realm. Ula Ula Ula, the above cannot happen 😎 Because the golden finger of the pig's foot is composed of multiple parts, [Reading] is only the most basic part. If this golden finger is fully developed and can only refining Qi, it will not be able to keep up with the rhythm. It may be possible to enter other worlds later 🤫

I'm really looking forward to the author being crazy. Is there any other group chat? I've read so many chapters and haven't even noticed the group chat.

There is a clone technique, one is enough. The clone can use reading, plug-ins, high research and development to make money and collect resources. The main body can be a thigh or act as a thigh, but it is better to do it after forming a pill.

I feel like he wrote some things in Yi Nian Eternal.

Jin Dan probably won't go well 🙂

It's an absolute masterpiece, flesh-and-blood, logical, and well-organized. The main line of the story is slowly unfolding, with small climaxes from time to time. The author's writing skills are very strong, making people imagine and fascinating. I look forward to the following stories continuing to maintain this quality.

The writing is pretty good, but the protagonist, who has bad outlook on life, hints that the daughter of a wealthy businessman will marry his second uncle as soon as he becomes famous. It's really vicious.

It was too vicious in the early stage. Even if a stranger adopted you for more than ten days and only carried water, you would kill her in return? The aunt's family is also poor, and even allows the protagonist to take in the protagonist for 10 days. Does the protagonist think that any stranger should help the protagonist for free, and talk to the protagonist like the idiot gang leader? I can accept the protagonist of dark novels repaying kindness with hatred, but it must be based on benefiting oneself at the expense of others, rather than being so naive.

The descendant of a big shot should first seize the soul, get a low-grade spiritual root, practice it to a few levels of Qi training, and then find a high-grade spiritual root to seize the body. This will perfectly allow the cultivating family to always control the best qualifications, the best resources, the best education, and the flying dragon riding face. Tell me why you lose.

The author's writing is great and the plot doesn't drag on. He successfully attracted me who had been doing prostitution for free. Automatic subscription has been turned on. All votes will be given to you, the student party's greatest support, 😭 (poor students have no choice but to eat). Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, I hope you can be a trendsetter and lead Qidian to produce a large number of high-quality articles like this.

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I can't stand it anymore after seeing the second aunt killed. What are your three views? The protagonist lives and eats for nothing for ten and a half months. Your second aunt is in a mood and wants to kill her? Besides, your second uncle barged in the door upside down. Abandon the pit!

This book is not long, not that the author cannot continue writing, but that the readers cannot continue reading. Blinally suppressing and suffering will only make readers pass faster, not to mention you are still a newcomer without any old reader base. After depression and suffering, the protagonist only relies on rare opportunities in thousands of years to face danger, relying on various coincidences and sudden outbreaks I like a sentence very much: Facing an enemy who was in despair even in his heyday, how could you be killed by you with only half your health. With the development of novels, it is no longer a story about desperate situations breaking out and thousands of opportunities coming together.

Chapter 33: Death from poison. Here's the reason: Although the protagonist's aunt doesn't want to see the protagonist, but the protagonist went to join him, she let you live for more than ten days without harming you. But it turns out that you, the protagonist, were better off. When you became the leader of the gang, you turned around and killed your aunt. As a time traveler, if you are really yours, wouldn't you be killed if you don't lick the protagonist's body? I don't deserve to read this kind of novel. I crawled and will never see you again.

The author and the protagonist are in the late stage of foundation building. It's time to make up for those basic skills in the Qi training stage and foundation building stage, such as drawing talismans, making talismans (materials, ink making, talisman pens), basic alchemy skills (cognition of medicinal materials, the relationship between each other, year, growth environment, preservation method) Styles), basic knowledge of weapon refining (the existence and appearance of various basic metals or Five Elements and non-Five Elements materials, and the birth environment of non-Five Elements materials), various basic flame control, geographical knowledge, various miscellaneous studies, a complete collection of medicines, knowledge of various monsters and beasts, and defensive secret treasures.

Although this aunt makes you angry, it is like you giving 10 yuan to a beggar, and then the beggar thinks that the payment is too little and wants to kill you.

I suggest the author write his second uncle to death. Just write about discovering that his nephew and niece have the best spiritual roots. The protagonist is about to seize it and is found by his second uncle and then kills him. His parents find out that he kills his parents. He is seen by the villagers and kills the villagers. The evil must be evil. Don't just kill the second uncle's wife. It's not interesting.

I don't know if the author has ever heard of the four words "poor literature and rich martial arts". The protagonist practices martial arts and eats simple meals. Nothing happened, which is incredible. The plug-in only helps him learn martial arts moves faster, not to help him save energy. It's really ridiculous that he didn't die after practicing like this.

Let me summarize the plot of the story I saw here The pig's trotters went to the second uncle's house because they had no spiritual roots, but the second uncle was the son-in-law! I don't know what kind of son-in-law you have in mind. Personally, I think he is better than a servant or slave at most. When my second uncle got married, it was equivalent to selling himself to the Zhu family. The protagonist came later, and the woman gave him food and shelter, but what about the protagonist? After more than ten days of eating and drinking, who can bear to have a person who eats and drinks at home? An ordinary person should be driven away, right? Besides, he gave him all the face he should have given him at the beginning, but then he just made it public when he couldn't stand it anymore. Does the protagonist think it is an insult to him? Besides, the protagonist later directly arranged a marriage for his second uncle indiscriminately. Isn't it a violation of human rights? Have you asked your second uncle? Have you ever thought about how your second uncle's life will change since then? What's more, the protagonist is a time-traveled soul, and his actions are not important at all, which is completely inconsistent with the image created previously. I can't stand the various personal attacks in the comment area. They are all adults. They have to think ahead of their words and take responsibility for their own words and deeds. Although there is no absolute right or wrong, there are still things that should be done and shouldn't be done. Of course, I welcome anyone who refutes me, but please don't argue and please tell me what you think.

The protagonist's free food, free living and free whoring attributes are really speechless 😓. His character is questionable.

Let me ask, why is this Su Yao so nice to the protagonist? What's the reason? Feeling so weird

Finally updated. I thought that after entering the palace, I would never return.

Does the author have three hobbies? Breaked, unfinished, changing vests Whether it is "Refining Gu", "Nine Thousand Years of Mortals", "Crazy Wings of Death" And "Mysterious Cult" Are you practicing your writing, author? I sincerely hope that the author will treat this vest well and update the book well. You must know that the author of the book "The Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" was not made a god at the beginning. This author is more attractive to me than the writing style of Nasha Wenzhao Gong. It is not even an exaggeration to say that compared with authors such as Go Away and Wandering Toad, this author is probably just lucky and lacks the patience to update a book to the end

I am a monthly ticket financier, and the author has two more updates, New Year's Eve benefits