I Picked up Everyone's Secrets

The author's writing power is insufficient, and his knowledge reserve is not enough. The setting is good and the imagination is great. However, if it wants to be popular, this book needs to be greatly revised. Many plots are somewhat far-fetched and need to find someone to guide it.

100,000 Words were deleted, and rewriting began at chapter 13 to keep the suspense and horror, without interspersed scenes or double lines. However, one thing to note is that the number of updates may be less, and it will not reach 10,000 words per day, so the outline will need to be rewritten. If you like this type of post, leave a message, just leave it like that and just code it.

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The theme idea is very good, and the beginning of the novel is also fascinating to read. A lot of people are saying that after chapter fourteen, it can be seen that there is a blunt and forced transition from that chapter. To put it bluntly, it is to directly start writing about Su Zhe, which makes the readers confused. At least, we can add some introduction to the plane and environment in front to let others know that what is happening now is related to it, instead of letting people understand it on their own, it will feel disconnected and become another book. The result is that the writing has low fluency and appears rough. Abandon the pit. (There are also some low-level mistakes of inverting people's names, and typos can be tolerated) Come on, don't let the Silver League be blinded, I just feel that good subject matter cannot be wasted, and it is purely my personal opinion, please don't spray it.

55555 Finally a book to read 😭

? ? ? Is this just silver? Still the only one

After reading a few chapters, I feel like the protagonist looks like a zz, or is this just a normal person's reaction?

After reading so many novels, I have seen many supporting characters with missing strings on their heads. This is the first time I have seen the protagonist with missing strings on his head. Yes, it is quite novel. It is a breath of fresh air in the novel world.

Good imagination, poor logic, uncomfortable to watch

To be honest, seeing 60%, it seemed like he hadn't seen other people's secrets for a long time. What's the point of his golden finger?

I felt like I lost my IQ after reading two chapters. A high school girl had four abortions, and a high school boy was a matricide. Coincidentally, one was the protagonist's deskmate and the other was his best friend. What kind of high school is the protagonist in?

It's puzzling that the comment section is filled with positive reviews. The first chapter is about a few poison spots. The body of the person who was bleeding from the seven orifices was checked by the hospital and everything was normal (there was transfer in the middle. If the bleeding from the seven orifices was not low, the amount of bleeding would require a blood transfusion). The notebook (kind of diary) was placed on the desk. Whoever writes a diary for a normal person would also put it on the desk. I don't know that my classmates like to read these the most. I go to school to get the notebook, and then I meet the school beauty, and then we prepare to go out for dinner together. It's the same old style. The secret of the school beauty is that she has had 4 abortions. There is no news about the 4 abortions of the school beauty? Or 4 times, can she still be a school beauty? Also, before, I spent all the money except for the bus ride on ice cream. Is this something a normal person can do?

It was quite interesting. As I looked at it, I didn't know what I was looking at. Is there anyone else like me?

This is really an auspicious number

Chapter 29 has only two female protagonists. . . . .

I would like to give you a suggestion. The author can change the character of the Eight Banners. First of all, I am not discriminating against the author, nor am I engaging in racial discrimination. It's just that the word Eight Banners easily reminds us of the Eight Banners of the Qing Dynasty. I don't think I need to say more about the reputation of the Qing Dynasty in the novel world. The sentence "Putting the Qing Dynasty through the Qing Dynasty does not lead to rebellion, and chrysanthemums set on electric drills" has clearly shown the attitude of book friends towards the Qing Dynasty. I hope the author can consider it.

Is it the vest of a certain boss or... The Silver Alliance is revealed in just a dozen chapters

It's a rare good book. Many places seem to have incorrect views and logic, but in fact there are explanations behind it. Come on, author