Ninth Frost

I am asking for book reviews, both good and bad. Only with criticism can progress be made. I always feel that I have failed to write well, but I can't feel it.

Starting tomorrow, except for special circumstances, there will be double updates every day. By the way, every additional 1,000 tips will add an additional chapter (haha, I know it's impossible)

The more you look at it, the better it looks, come on 🤓

The heroine can be sweet or salty, but the royal sister is untouchable, and the male protagonist is a voluptuous and warm-hearted man who is untouchable; the woman is strong and the man is strong, and they dote on each other.

I'm busy today, I'll update later

[Personal comment, please delete if you don't like it] The plot is very good, but there is a problem with the punctuation. T_T, I really like the torture of the male protagonist.

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This article assumes that people can be reincarnated after death, but when reincarnated, different souls form a new individual, and that is someone else.ヽ(○^㉨^)ﾉ♪

I'm sorry, but I won't give up. I will write when I have time and try to finish it.

The writing is smoother than before, and the setting is also good. One problem is that sometimes the scene changes too quickly or the plot changes not smoothly. If you are not imaginative enough, it may look incoherent. You should also practice the description of the protagonist's language more to see how to highlight the emotions.