American Comic: I Have a Big Ball of Light

There's so much mess, the key is chapter n. The protagonist is a fucking ordinary person, and he almost died when he had to use two props for a garbage guy. I guess the record for the lowest time traveler in the most garbage belt system has been refreshed.

Let's change the introduction. I've already started making a lot of money, and then I discovered that there is a Stark Group in this world. I'm a logic freak and can't read this kind of illogical novel.

Your book is unlikely to be popular. There are too many random things to write, and it makes people feel very tired when reading. I have read many books with the same characteristics before, and they are either unfinished or eunuchs. Think carefully about what you want to write.

There is too much nonsense, I keep pushing you and I don't know what to say. Does it have anything to do with Marvel?

To be fair, it's okay. There are too many elements and the theme has entered.

It's very poisonous. Have you written so many chapters? It just doesn't get to the theme. What does your main god do? The protagonist is just an ordinary person. The props are picked up inexplicably. Each picture is the end. The system comes out to the panel to refresh the sense of presence. It's useless at all.

After reading the first four chapters... Why do you say that the protagonist's brain is always in standby mode?

Messy, good subject matter. I'm so tired from watching 😭 Let's go

The writing is a bit messy. How can I say that although Internet articles do not require writing skills, at least I can understand it. What you wrote does not say whether I understand it or not, but it is mainly because it is not fluent.

It's such a mess that I don't even know what to write.

It would be meaningless if the main god stream could not travel to other worlds, and it would be meaningless to write about the Marvel universe alone.