This Is How You Become an Immortal

First of all, generally speaking, this book belongs to the novice literature, or in other words, the novice literature in the late advanced stage. The urban plot is very embarrassing. It is disconnected from life in many places and has no sense of immersion. The most important thing in the novel is the reader's sense of immersion. The urban plot routines are very cliche, and the plot has no attractive features, such as casually defeating the villain, pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger, easily defeating the gangster in front of everyone, being resented by a policewoman and then making the policewoman look at her with admiration (I must complain here, I always like to write about policewomen). Something happened to save a powerful old man who was about to die. It just so happened that the old man also had a granddaughter. I don't need to tell you the rest of the plot. This side of the alien world is slightly better than the urban plot, but not that much better. The progress of various authors is very vague, but it is very useful for quickly entering the state of cultivating immortality, eliminating the need for mundane processes. All kinds of typos and wrong sentences made me wonder if the author didn't even read it before he posted it. Finally, the ideas are good and the story is okay. You can try to read it. Who knows that there is a shortage of books now?

The author should read: Big Data Cultivation

This book is really disgusting when I saw the part about treating an old man. . I specifically paid for the reward before typing this. . Protagonist, do you really like being a dog so much? People questioned you once and you said leave, twice you said leave, and three times they said you had committed a crime. . You are still comparing wool with others, oh my bad temper. . . . It's not like you came here on your own. . I asked you several times to come. . . I said go, go, go, say three times but still not go. . . Is it disgusting?

I was ready to give up the book when I saw that the protagonist was looking for that Ying Nan. After all, he was an immortal cultivator. What kind of woman couldn't he find? I really want to find an old woman like a queen. She is really poisonous. Can't I hide from her?

Are all women in the world dead? Liu Yingnan insists on pursuing the old leader. Being rejected once is not enough. He also licks his face 😰

Why take them with you on the road to immortality? You are the master, and their family is the slaves. It feels like you don't even understand what's going on? If they don't obey, just don't let them go.

I can only say that this week's Sanjiang is the worst this year, second only to last week

I feel like writing about the Anti-Japanese War is more suitable for you.

A cultivator was driven crazy by a group of greedy mortal old men and women.

The most poisonous thing is that a rich second generation casually spends three million to buy a birthday gift for his father and works in a small factory like that. This is too poisonous.

Farewell😐. It gets more and more disgusting later on, really annoying. I can't stand it anymore.

When he first came to another world, he resold things and exchanged silver for gold bricks. If this protagonist could not survive more than three chapters in the realm of mortals cultivating immortality. Then the boss of Heshenzhai is so kind. Now because the owner of Jinsha Gold Store wants to kill the protagonist, in the world of immortality, the protagonist is such a big fat sheep, but he still apologizes and gives secret books? Do you think that the social environment of our country, Great China, is not as good as that of the world of immortality?

I have read basically all the books written by the author, and I feel that either the author has changed or the author has regressed too much.

Hmm, why do I feel that cultivating immortality in the city nowadays is always illegal and criminal? I'm not talking about the villain, I'm talking about the protagonist. Is this the society in everyone's eyes?

A piece of writing full of loopholes. After making so much money, I moved my parents to live in the city, but they were still fooling around with some village bully in the countryside.

It was good at first, but then the more I wrote, the less I knew what to do. There is no main line. The rationality is also greatly reduced. There is no spiritual energy in the real world, but the result is still correct in cultivation. Is energy created out of nothing?

Shennong died suddenly. He bought a knife worth 10,000 yuan for a total of 20,000 yuan. This is purely because the author did not check the information. I take it for granted and it is too dissuasive.

When I saw that the main character who had been cheated on bought a bow for 120,000 US dollars, I quit silently. Really, can you check it before buying something? The cost is 10,000 US dollars. What you are buying is an RPG.

I backed away when I saw a machete costing more than 10,000 yuan. For something that can be bought for just a few dozen yuan, an ordinary hatchet in the countryside can last for decades. If the quality is better, it will cost hundreds. Going to a military store to buy a sapper shovel is much more useful than this.

Jack, a professional eunuch! Being a Duke in the previous Ming Dynasty, the career in the previous Ming Dynasty, plus this book, there are three books in total.

No movement for many days, eunuch? A Ding is also a hard worker, just like the Ming Dynasty Duke and his wife were bandits. Well! When can I read a book without worrying about eunuchs? ! !

My career as a warlord, my career in the Republic of China, my wife is a bandit, travels in the late Ming Dynasty, my career in the Ming Dynasty, I have read all these books five times, and I have endless aftertaste every time I read them. I hope A Ding will produce some late Qing Dynasty books, and don't open your golden finger too much 😁😁😁😁

It's not his first time being a eunuch, he just needs to get used to it.

No one likes books written by eunuch authors. Author, please change your vest!

I feel pretty good, just write it according to the big data of cultivating immortals. The style is very good, and both cultivators and women should be indispensable.

Eunuchs don't even give an outline of appendix

There is an end to the break! After having a beginning and an end, write other stories. Who

Why does the protagonist have to have a harem?

Update once a week, the author is not doing his job properly,

Human? Anyone? I'm going crazy