Pei's Immortal Cultivation Road

Dear book friends, I am a sophomore in high school. I will update it every day, but I still focus on my studies. This is because I have read dozens of novels and want to write a novel of my own based on my own feelings. I will tell everyone when there is no update, and I will stick to it.

Come on! Keep updating! Collected🎁🎁

Let me ask you, how many people watched it? 🙂

Very good content, the author's writing is good, and the story pace is exciting. Already collected and followed, please support the author.

I've read some and commented, please wait. First, the problem of paragraphing is the most common mistake made by novices. It will be more refreshing to read it in smaller paragraphs, and readers will seem to be in a better mood. Second, the narration is straightforward. The author likes to write down almost all the information at the beginning. However, in fact, readers cannot remember it and feel dazzled instead. It is recommended that the author focuses on the protagonist in the opening, and then slowly introduces the introduction along the protagonist's route. Using the plot, readers will be more accepting. Third, the writing style. The author's writing style is acceptable. Although it is not the kind of writing style that can attract readers, it is enough for writing a good novel. Fourth, the plot, at first glance, seems quite exciting. Each author has his own creativity, so I won't say more here. Here we go, that's all, come on⊙▽⊙

There are so many sects at the beginning that it's really confusing. I suggest you introduce the protagonist first, and then slowly lay out the background sects 😃

Building a foundation means going through a thunder tribulation. Is this funny?

Why is this book finished? Still unfinished!