Old Breeder

How should I put it? This type is really new. As an old breeder, I feel that it is more relaxed, but the more I look at it, the more... As for bugs, this is really not a problem unless it is very serious, but generally it can be completely ignored as long as it is fun to watch. -The atmosphere seems to be poorly rendered, resulting in little feeling during major deaths. It may also be because I watched it too fast. -There are too many inexplicable women around the protagonist. Is this also fate? As long as he is female, no matter whether he is human or weird, he will always be close to the protagonist. Obviously there are many characters that can be replaced with men (or without gender, just monsters), and from time to time using women can expand more (the supporting characters are miserable), but they always have to be used. And the appearance is too... Forget it once or twice, it's always such an embarrassing appearance... -Why do you think women are so confusing? Description. It's too one-sided and the same. If you say it's a paper person, it's really just a one-sided paper. ? With this awkward personality, I dug out two bedrooms and one living room. -This situation should only occur within one or two chapters. I know that the protagonist is very handsome, so there is no need to describe others as nymphomaniacs like this. This is a bit like the childish guardian sweetheart fanfics that were popular a few (ten) years ago and said how good-looking the protagonist is and how nymphomaniac others are. I…. -No comment on the character of the Old Ones, it is a fan creation, feel free to do so. It's better to take it easy. -The servant commits a crime and the master is not guilty? Then the master is taken in as a servant by another master, or is he still innocent? Well, maybe people's understanding is different? -The subject matter is very good and the writing style is very good. . . . . The above is purely for reference. Just a sudden thought and a few comments

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I read this book and thought Touch of Plague was so cute. So I used my immature paintings to draw a picture. Although my painting is mediocre, I really like it! ! ! Housework expert, only 998.

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(There are slight spoilers, read with caution) When I first saw this book, it was amazing. So I spent a day chasing all the updated chapters. The whole article is very good, a good grass. And reading the situation in the chapter, I know that the author really cares about this book, and I feel that the author is trying his best to satisfy the appetite of most readers. Until Harley's line ended hastily, I panicked. Therefore I wrote this long review. Admittedly, I also feel that the author's description of Harley is a bit too much, and I am a bit bored with the character of Harley. I personally think that the author is trying his best to describe the character of Harley, but perhaps the writing style makes these descriptions seem a bit redundant. But I think the author is carefully developing the character of Harley. I have even placed Harley in the heroine and important supporting roles! Until the author began to gradually downplay Harley to cater to the readers, and finally even cut off the line altogether. I was really panicked. Although Harley has been with the protagonist in the early stage and has no interaction with most of the characters, the two lines of Mira, who takes Harley to treat, and Vivian, who sees Harley being treated, will definitely be affected, or may be discontinued. I don't know if Harley is an unimportant supporting character or a more important main character. I now prefer the former. The former is simply because the plot was not well controlled and too much plot was given to a small supporting character. The latter has changed the outline and needs to slowly round out the plot. At least there are loopholes, and at worst the plot is broken and the eunuch is unfinished. Now Feiya feels that this situation is also faintly occurring. I can only hope that the author will try his best to control the plot and practice his writing skills. Don't give too much plot to unimportant characters, and don't cut off characters with too much plot easily. This is a book written by the author himself. Writing a book through crowdfunding is just for fun. It really depends on the author himself to write it well!

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(To be honest, it's not a bargain) I've read a lot of readers saying that Harley is poisonous, and it's not necessary, so they kicked her out. Some even said that after writing a paragraph, Harley can just be thrown away, and there's no need to take it to the Province of Grunt. Some even say that female characters are not needed. As long as it is suppressed and dark, I don't understand this kind of heart at all. I personally feel that the character Harley is not intentionally stupid, nor is she intentionally stupid, so she doesn't do anything. Judging from the character in the book, a little girl was abandoned by her relatives in a desperate town. From the moment she met the protagonist, she just wanted to go to a slightly familiar place to steal something to eat. When I got sick later, I still had a kind heart and didn't drink the blood-stained medicine. Later, even though he was disfigured, he didn't do anything extraordinary. Is this poisonous? ? The protagonist is a doctor who has traveled through this dark era, and he is not a doctor with a sinister heart. The time traveled not long ago, and everyone he knew around him died, and on the premise that he was safe, he took in the little girl Harley, which is what a normal person should do, right? Let alone a doctor with decent moral character? He has saved the townspeople, so it is not inappropriate for him to place a child in such a safe place next to him. Does this also mean that Harley is a poisonous person around you? Later, Harley was disfigured and was taken for treatment. Is this also a poisonous point? Time to abandon it? Think about it when a little girl is disfigured, which is a blow in the first place, and you abandon the child and let her live on her own, do you think she can survive? Especially in these dark times. And the background of the protagonist is that the doctor abandoned him, which is the poisonous point, okay? I saved them all at the beginning, but later abandoned them, and their characters were all ruined, okayヽ(￣д￣;)ノ. And it is said that feeding blood is poisonous. If something happens to someone you have been with for a long time, only your own blood can suppress it, and it has super recovery power. It is normal to feed it a little. Pets become affectionate after being kept for a long time. Furthermore, using depression and darkness to vote, there is no need for the role of Harley, and even female characters cannot have it. If there is, it is said to be poisonous. Who stipulated that there can only be monsters in Crusu? ? ? ?

The settings are okay, but the writing is average. In the part where Feiya's brother loses control, the communication between the protagonist and Feiya, I personally feel that it is too immature, or in other words, it is inconsistent with the original main atmosphere... The article has been trying its best to create the image of a doctor, but it is not natural enough. The despair of the Ke type is too light, but it feels like they are just creatures with certain special powers.

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Touching the main character, it doesn't look very good, I don't know if it's right (~_~;)

Fuck, it's so fucking raw. Feel the elements of the latest chapter Golden Retriever Big Brother

Suddenly I found out that the novel I was reading was almost to death. I was shocked.

In fact, I was quite disappointed. I thought the protagonist was a ruthless boss behind the scenes, but I didn't expect him to be a person who is content with the status quo and meddles in other people's business. But overall it's pretty good.

Although the writing is very good, I am a bit disappointed I know that the high-end evil god cannot be used in the beginning... The evil god of disease in the beginning is really too embarrassing and has no sense of existence, or it is original, but it does not reach the point I expected What I expected was actually: (old clones and the like) (color of stars and the like) Although I can understand the low-end start, I am still a bit disappointed.

The writing is quite good, but why are there so few people? Seeing how pitiful you are, I will give you a monthly pass first, and I will owe you the women's clothing issue first. Of course, if the effect of your women's clothing is similar to that of a certain book friend, then forget it, thank you for not killing me (இωஇ)

Although after reading the author's explanation of the character of Harley, it feels very far-fetched. If there are no follow-up arrangements or foreshadowing, I personally feel it is a bit poisonous. The biggest poisonous point is that the supporting roles are all kinds of women. I am speechless at this point. I can only say that if I continue to write like this, the book will collapse.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Alas, it is obviously very well written. I will burn incense when I come back.

In order to give you a monthly vote for a disciple who is promoted, can you update a few more chapters?

I'll keep it up and find GG, and I'll add some incense to it.

Is it cool? I just jumped into the pit😭

There is a very cool article in the original book of Kessian Mythology, "Dream of the Unknown Kadath", which is highly recommended for everyone to give it a try. This article also provides an overview of the Kessian world view and describes many strange and artistic sights in fantasy dreamland. The most important thing is that compared to other articles, this article is the least dark among the Kessun myths. It is a good entry point for book lovers who do not know Kessun myths. But the translators are different, so I can't guarantee that it will look good.

The writing is okay. If you support it by subscribing, you will automatically subscribe and keep it in the future. Give me another monthly pass

I've read Chapter 50 and it's pretty good. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch∪･ω･∪

Does the author work in Zhu Yiyi's company😐

Is this a eunuch? Do you know anything about it?