Young Emperor Growth Plan

The writing is good, but I disagree with the plot logic. The author wants to create an image of a mature and rational politician, separate from Shuangwen, who kills without thinking, and his intention is excellent. But the situation shown in your plot is so serious. In the face of a life-and-death feud, instead of desperately taking away the gang of regicide ministers, you still sit back and wait to be puppets, thinking about their insignificant growth. If this wasn't the protagonist, he would have died suddenly and inexplicably. The former young emperor was killed even if he said a wrong word. What's more, the ministers murdered you once, aren't they afraid? As long as the emperor is still alive, they will be like a stick in their throats. There is simply no room for change in the opposition between the two. If I were Zhou Bo and Chen Ping, and I still had the power to put the emperor under house arrest, I would definitely kill him first, because it is obvious that if you let the emperor go, he will not let you go.

Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it I saw more than 60 chapters and the three chapters about businessmen were a bit dissuasive to be honest. The whole three chapters were about popularizing historical knowledge and allusions, which made me sleepy. Although this is necessary foreshadowing, it is still a bit unbearable for me to set up three whole chapters without advancing the plot at all. It is recommended that when the author popularizes the necessary background, he can be brief and mention it in two or three paragraphs, so that readers will not be confused when reading the following. To put it bluntly, online writing is just a way for people to kill time in their free time, and it is not a class to study literature and history. ps: I specially subscribed to 20 chapters for the purpose of commenting. I hope the author can be more concise when popularizing the necessary knowledge below. It can be a few paragraphs, but it really doesn't need a few chapters~ ＾＾

After talking about it, I have some opinions after reading it for more than a hundred times: 1. The author overemphasized the historical facts in the historical records when writing the book, and the historical records themselves are records of later generations, not the changed history itself. For example, in terms of the Yuan Dynasty, there is no such thing as the eighth year after Liu Heng came to the throne. It was because Emperor Hui's branch was not orthodox after Liu Heng ascended the throne. In order to continue this period of history, Sima Qian had no choice but to adopt the chronology after the eighth year. Because compared to the fact that the young emperors before and after were not of the blood of Emperor Hui, the legitimacy of Empress Gao was more orthodox. However, Empress Gao did not ascend the throne at all and was only the regent as the empress dowager. Therefore, there is no argument for changing the Yuan Dynasty. Also during the period of history between the Qin Dynasty and the Han Dynasty, Sima Qian also created Xiang Yu's Benji. This was just a weighed approach. 2. The author does not need to refer to the overall practices of the Wenjing period, because relatively speaking, Zhaoxuan Zhongxing is more consistent with this book. The growth of Emperor Zhao is a symbol of a young emperor who grew up to adulthood under the rule of powerful officials, while Emperor Xuan wrote about how an unorthodox (after Emperor Zhao) destroyed powerful officials and the Huns to reach their peak. Moreover, Zhaoxuan Zhongxing was more powerful than Wenjing's rule. During Emperor Wen's period, it was because the ministers promoted it, and they were more stubborn. Whether it was cutting down or maintaining a gentle appearance (Emperor Wen killed four of his sons before he came to the throne), he was afraid that Zhu Lu's incident would happen again. The policy of Wenjing's rule only continued the policy of the early Han Dynasty. Both Gao Hou and Emperor Hui actually did it, but the historical records did not have the concept of a great rule. After all, after Emperor Wen came to the throne, he could not commend Emperor Hui and Empress Gao for their political achievements. Of course, it was possible that they had written them, but they had been deleted. Current historical records have deleted a lot of royal insider information. Although Emperor Wu's attack on the Xiongnu was very powerful, compared to the eradication during Emperor Xuan's period, it was more like military force. Moreover, Emperor Wu squandered a large amount of property accumulated through self-cultivation in the early Han Dynasty, so it is better to Zhaoxuan Zhongxing. 3. As for the protagonist, the author has written more than 100 chapters, and the plot logic is good. However, an 8-year-old emperor is too intelligent to compete with powerful ministers and is very rational. He is as cunning as an old Yinbi but seems to have a far-reaching vision. This feels like forced intelligence, just like the 8-year-old in Naruto who used the kaleidoscope to kick the ninja giant. Even if the protagonist does not grow up to be in his twenties, he must at least wait for a while. After all, as long as he proves that he is orthodox, those powerful ministers will never come back to kill the emperor. He must at least be over thirteen years old. Only after he is married can he be in charge. In ancient times, you must be married or crowned before you can be in charge. Otherwise, you will be treated like a child, especially in the early Han Dynasty, when age was emphasized. For those who are filial, powerful ministers can make you unable to do anything in the name of assisting the government, so the author should not engage in the problem of a child's rationality competing with powerful ministers. Liu He was deposed, and Emperor Xuan went to Huo Guang to disappear and destroy the Huo family. 🤫

Very well written! ! It can be seen that the author has a certain level of literacy and a high IQ. I like this style of writing. Will chase.

The author just writes according to his own ideas and doesn't need to be influenced by others. Come on.

To be honest, I really like it. Although the author's writing style has many flaws, it is undeniable that it has gradually matured from one chapter to the present. The novel is written with great care, and the explanations below the article are all traceable. Not much to say, please take your time and appreciate the beauty of the book.

The author overall wrote very well. Whether it's the storyline, the language, the characters, etc. But for the author, the word "witch doctor" always appears in the article; I feel deeply saddened. In the article, it would be fine if they were civilians (after all, they still exist today). Why would a majestic emperor go to a witch doctor? As early as "Zhou Li·Tian Guan Zhong Zai No. 1", The subjects, quantity, etc. Of doctors were clarified. The original text is as follows: "Physicians, two sergeants, four corporals, two government officials, two historians, and twenty disciples. Food doctors, two sergeants. Disease doctors, eight sergeants. Ulcer disease doctors, eight corporals. Veterinarians, four corporals." There is also a paper "Looking at the Medical Achievements of the Zhou Dynasty from Classical Books" for reference. "Historical Records·Biography of Bian Quecang Gong". Original text: "There are six types of diseases that cannot be cured: one is arrogance and carelessness, and one cannot be cured; one is neglecting one's body and one's wealth, two is not cured; the other is not being able to eat and drink properly, three is not curable; the yin and yang are incompatible, and the qi is stored in an unstable manner, and four are incurable; one is too weak to take medicine, and five is incurable; one believes in witchcraft but not medicine, and six is ​​incurable." The above all illustrate that witchcraft and medicine have been separated for a long time. As for the word "Fangji", in "Hanshu·Yiwenzhi" it is the collective name of the four schools of "Medical Classics, Jingfang, Fangzhong, and Immortals".

I have been reading it for so long, and I feel that the writing is quite good, but it is a bit shorter. I hope there will be more detailed descriptions and character expressions to make it richer. In my senses, the impression of Young Emperor is not deep enough.

It's been 11 hours, and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this

I thought it was Young Emperor Liu Bian, but I didn't expect it was that unlucky boy.

Liu Hong (January 1, 195 BC - November 14, 169 BC) was originally named Liu Shan. He used to be named Liu Yi and called himself Hongxing Erke. The son of Han Hui Emperor Liu Ying, the fourth emperor of the Western Han Dynasty. A native of Chang'an County, Jingzhao County. An outstanding statesman and military strategist in Chinese history. Posthumous title: Emperor Xiaoren Main achievements: Re-established a centralized and stable structural system Constructed several national-level water conservancy projects and nearly a thousand local-level water conservancy projects Reunified the standards for measuring finance and other disciplines Qualified the feudal rebellion internally and dealt with the Opening up borders and expanding territory Building a new education system with diversity and equality etc. etc. Ula Bala It laid a solid foundation for future generations to open up people's wisdom and broaden their horizons to strengthen the connection between the Central Plains and Central Asia and West Asia, thus entering the era of great physical discoveries on land and sea. He has made outstanding contributions to the development of the Han nation and the spread of Han (Chinese) culture. On April 28, the first year of Han Gaohou (187 BC), Liu Shan was granted the title of Marquis of Xiangcheng. In July of the second year after Han Gao (186 BC), after the death of Liu Buyi, the king of Changshan, Liu Shan took over the title of King of Changshan on July 27th and changed his name to Liu Yi. On May 11th, the fourth year after Han Gao (June 15, 184 BC), Empress Lu ordered Changshan King Liu Yi to succeed to the throne and changed his name to Liu Hong, who was known as Emperor Ren of the Han Dynasty in history. In Chinese history, the second year after the emperor ascended the throne was usually renamed the first year. However, because the Empress Dowager Lv Zhi was in charge of the government, it was not renamed the first year. On August 1, the eighth year after Han Gao (September 180 BC), Empress Lu died. At the same time, Zhou Bo, Chen Ping and others launched a conspiracy to eradicate the power of the Lu family. Under the pressure, the courtiers unanimously believed that Liu Hong, King Liu Tai of Jichuan, King Liu Wu of Huaiyang, and King Liu Chao of Changshan were not the biological sons of Emperor Hui of the Han Dynasty and should be deposed. After the courtiers selected Liu Heng, the son of Han Gaozu and his concubine Bo, as the new emperor, they welcomed him to Chang'an. On November 14, the eighth year after Han Gao (180 BC), he wanted to kill Emperor Xiaoren and others. Fortunately, he was spared by God's blessing, and later he was saved. The eunuch Wang Zhong, Northern Army Sima Qin Mu, Anguo Wuhou Wangling, Quchenghou Chongda, Jipuhou Chaiwu and others helped to stabilize the court during the crisis. From then on began the beginning of his legendary career. …… Renmo flourished in Emperor Xiaoren. The well-known bricklayers, historians and archaeologists of later generations commented that he was wise and courageous, vowed to achieve meritorious service, and had a broad mind. He was blah, blah, blah, but it was a pity that he had made great changes and did not come out. He was afraid of harming the remaining evildoers, blah blah blah. The achievements created in a short life are like the morning star guiding the direction of progress for thousands of years to come.

First of all, the capital of the Eastern Han Dynasty was in Luoyang, not Chang'an. You need to understand this first before writing a historical novel.

The book is very interesting. I like the rigorous and retro style of writing. It makes me vomit when I read it. The modern style of writing describes the pre-Qin Han Dynasty and it feels very ridiculous. This book is very good so far. I am looking forward to it. Come on, it will be on the shelf and fully ordered.

It was a cup of poisonous wine, a favor that the emperor once bestowed upon his ministers. Unexpectedly, one day, his ministers would reward him. He knew the recipe of this poisonous wine clearly, and it was the group of people in front of him who were supposed to be loyal ministers who gave him, the emperor, a decent choice. Listening to them discussing the next heir to the throne, he smiled and drank the poisonous wine with despair. The ministers who were supposed to be noisy saw the emperor holding up the wine glass, and the hall became extremely quiet for a moment, watching the wine glass fall to the ground. The eunuch waiting on the side heard the sound of the wine glass falling to the ground, and suddenly knelt on the ground, wailing loudly, his voice trembling. Seeing that everything was as expected by the ministers, a new round of debate began in the repressed hall, but the sound had not yet sounded. Liu Hong, who was sitting on the throne, opened his eyes, looked at the unbelievable expressions of the people below, and laughed heartily. "Gu, I'm back." ……

It's ugly, not pleasant to watch, what's the difference between reading a classical Chinese history book, ah! What you're doing is almost like historical records. Just set up a stall and write novels. It's fun. We're not here to read history books. Wouldn't it be nice to read more exciting articles? I have to watch your torture. You're obviously not an internet writer, okay?

Is the author a scholar of history? It feels like the author has put a lot of effort into writing historical knowledge, more like popular science articles than novels. He has a poor grasp of the rhythm of the novel, the dialogue between the characters, and the description of the atmosphere. For example, the Battle of Mayi should be a climax, but the result is that the author rambles on, making the rhythm slow and confusing, and there is no sense of expectation for the readers. Logically speaking, such a thoughtful author should be encouraged more, but the long-winded style really irritates readers. I hope the author can think about the areas for improvement.

The author has a problem that he likes to lay out the background, and it is smelly, long and unnutritious. He insists on writing a long novel with a few simple explanations. It was better before, but now it is becoming more and more obvious. The short text does not promote the plot and does not do much, and it is like a popular science article. I have said before that there will definitely be limited exemptions under this situation. It may be a problem. Author, please be more careful. 😅

This book is actually entirely supported by the author's writing. In terms of content, the author follows the idea that peace of mind must be settled first when fighting foreign forces. Let's talk about peace first. The author has explained the governance of the country in many aspects. To put it simply, the protagonist has a lot of ideas, but only ideas. I am very confused here as to why I don't start with some trial points and preparations when I have an idea. Personally, I have always believed that ideas are something that should be started before proceeding. It is better to continue thinking. The premise for these ideas is that the surrounding foreign races must not threaten the country. The solution includes compromises on interests and dignity such as marriage and land cession. The internal princes are obedient and obedient. The solution is to use various conspiracies and righteousness to re-educate these princes. Officials must clearly understand and agree with the central government's ideas and guidance. Solve The method is to solve the cultural and educational problems first, and then wait until there is no shortage of officials, and then solve the officials' problems. After all the above are solved, then put your ideas into practice. It can be said that basically governing the country with this idea will never put the idea into practice. The author or the protagonist is a perfectionist, first make other problems perfect, and then in To implement your own ideas or reforms, for example, the author or the protagonist clearly knows that marriage is humiliating, but for the above-mentioned perfect surrounding and domestic environment, he must sit back and watch. Many people don't understand this and think it is just about marrying a woman. In fact, this is not a simple issue of marrying a woman. This is a political issue. Do you really think that the Huns care about your Han women? If it's rare, wouldn't it be nice to grab some at the border, and there are too many ways to get it? The biggest harm of a marriage is that it affects the prestige of the royal family, and there are generally more benefits under the cover of a marriage. Many people think that the Huns are stupid, and they think that after a marriage, they will have the pleasure of taking advantage of and humiliating you, and they will give this pleasure to their family members.

You are writing a story, not an essay! You can write these in separate chapters. Including the previous articles, almost half of them are essays.

I have only read this novel about the world point of the early Han Dynasty. It has detailed research and the writing style also has the flavor of a drama. It is very good. Looking forward to it!

The writing is good. Nowadays, everything written in historical novels is to tease the protagonist. There are few such rigorous novels.

A few words of truth to the author: I think many readers don't like the author's various science popularizations and even extra chapters. In fact, I think this is the advantage of this book. Including the author's explanation and interpretation of the ideologies of the Han Dynasty emperors and civil and military officials, they are all good things that add color to the book (even if they are quite subjective) when the author's writing style and plot/contradiction design are not among the top in the online literature world. For example, this chapter compares the impact of the Mayi Conspiracy on imperial power in history and in this book. But the author's problem is that Che Zulu talks too much and repeats too much - "Wenjing gave Liu Che relevant plans with adequate material preparation and error tolerance". Such a sentence can fill more than half a chapter - and the previous chapters have also written about the difference between Mayi's plot in history and reality many times. The two emperors Wenjing said it more than fifty times about Liu Che's material accumulation of martial arts. Another example is Huang Long's change of origin and forced Zhang Cang to retreat. This example was given ten times if not twenty times, and the angle and depth did not change each time - it is really complete nonsense to readers. I hope the author will learn from excellent authors, make detailed outlines, and master the rhythm of the novel. Don't write the novel as an argumentative essay. Of course, it can be popularized in history, but it should be concise and every point can be explained in one go.

For such a well-written book, the data is a bit low. I don't know if it's the problem with the readers or the problem with the starting point. So, it's a problem with the starting point. Madan, you wouldn't recommend such an excellent novel to your death!

Great, I think! Come on, author. The plot is to my liking! History and TV series are still very different. This book has the feeling of traveling to the real Han Dynasty. I dreamed about traveling through time last night 🤭

It is rare to find a novel about the early Han Dynasty, and the author is very rigorous in writing, making it very comfortable to read. Please subscribe and support it.

After looking around, this book can be considered a book with the flavor of the times. The background of some books has been changed to modern times without any sense of inconsistency. Many people still read the books as they are. I can't understand

Zuoli, I just saw the new book in July. The first order was 7500. When I look back at your book, this one is more suitable for me. After thinking about it, there was a time when you had 7-8 pages of annotations for one chapter a day, so I stopped ordering it. , I suddenly felt filled with emotion, and jumped back to make up those few chapters. Now I can say to you gloriously, I have ordered all of your books. Come on, I believe in you. As long as you keep writing, you will not be worse than them 👍

It's well written, but it's so bad that I feel disgusting.

It's a good author, but why do I feel happy and unhappy about it?

I have collected this book before and started reading it yesterday. I have reached chapter 194 so far. Then I flipped through the table of contents and found that the protagonist Yu Jia went on a personal expedition and pretended to be defeated. I don't understand how this works. Can anyone help me? Otherwise, I won't be able to stand it anymore.