Hairpin Flower Asking the Sword

After reading the comments, I read the previous chapters The feedback from the book is similar. The author's writing style is very good, better than many so-called great gods nowadays, but the plot is not very satisfactory Just like the author commented on the book in Xue Zhong, the background and atmosphere of this book also have a feeling of love between children in the world But it also has a system of cultivating immortals, and it is even similar to the alchemy system of Dou Po, who I won't say who came first Just looking at the previous chapters, this book covers a lot of things It seems to be more thoughtful and profound, and it feels like a lot of people can be raised, but for the atmosphere of a book, it seems a bit chaotic There are many people complaining about it, and there are more plots about female love Probably most people prefer the love between sons and daughters in Jianghu. It's the kind of person who stays together forever, becomes a double, and has a common experience or hardship Judging from the previous plot of this book, the love between his son and daughter seems too casual, and may not match the whole atmosphere of the book, his plot of rivers and lakes When readers get into it, to a large extent, they will regard this book as a casual work because of this plot Because readers usually get into it, mainly because of the plot. When the protagonist's love, hatred, grievances, and emotional routes are too casual Perhaps for readers, the emotions she embodies are also relatively casual, and even because of such a casual feeling, more readers will not like to read Well, it may be because this type of book, a book with this kind of atmosphere and background, attracts readers who are somewhat picky about writing and plot, and may require both to be indispensable.

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The writing is good, the diction is beautiful, and the author is more attentive. I originally wanted to read it, but was persuaded to back down by the stallion. If you want to read a pure fairy tale, the protagonist can have a woman and talk about relationships as he progresses, but these should only be embellishments and should not overwhelm the protagonist.

The sage said: Everything in the world cannot escape the word love. On the ruthless road of attaining the supreme road, it is rare to have a kindhearted lover walking with you and me.

Following the author's footsteps, the character design is basically quite successful. Each person has a distinct personality, rich and delicate emotional lines, and the psychology of the characters is also very real, except for some typos and individual details. It's a pretty good book.

After reading the first volume, I found the writing to be quite good. It's not like those novice articles that only use a few adjectives. The plot has ups and downs, and the character descriptions are also good. This book likes multi-line narratives, and the branch lines will return to the main line after a long period of time. Although this can stimulate readers' interest in reading, it will inevitably affect the coherence of the reading experience. The author needs to consider the addition or deletion. As far as the first volume is concerned, the protagonist's experience is a bit frustrating to read. There is not much time for the protagonist to be high-spirited. People nowadays generally have greater pressure in life. When reading novels, most people hope that the protagonist will be carefree and unrestrained. This is also the reason why refreshing novels are so popular. Of course, the excellent storytelling of this book prevented me from abandoning the book because of the abusive protagonist, but I still hope that the author can add some interesting points later.

The quality of this book is so high. I basically don't read fairy tale novels, but I still liked it after reading the beginning and decided to pursue it.

In the beginning, I revolve around women every day... The pattern is too small...

So lazy, I don't even have a chapter name

Ah, this... It vilifies the protagonist and makes it extremely easy to persuade him to quit.

Has the main character always been an ugly guy? ? ? What novel setting is this?

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The protagonist has not traveled through time, so why should he use modern gestures? This is very inconsistent, okay?

The novel is okay, the writing and conception are quite good, but after reading it for a while, I found that there are more than a dozen women, and all of them have stories with the male protagonist, which is so annoying.

I read part of it, and it turned out that the stallion story was about a stallion, and I saw the previous one. . The kind who have no emotional foundation yet, and the boundaries of cultivating strength are messed up. They can be killed by several levels, and then they are tortured by low-level people. What the hell.

The writing is okay, but the competition is too fierce and the popularity is not very high, which is a bit of a pity. I can let this book be seen by more readers, Wowei: yaayaa335

Is it a romance novel?

Dear author, could you please reply to me? I just saw this great work!