Build a Black Hole World

I don't think the protagonist's attitude towards women in the past and his attitude towards women in other worlds are the same person. Is this a good way to take photos?

You are already a person with space, you still work part-time, and you are still involved in the blind date plot, so you should write urban articles. It looks uncomfortable. I have tried the poison myself. Is the snake in space still called daddy?

I will just say a few words. First, the deep sea space is a failure. Second, after reading only a few chapters of the book, I saw that a protagonist has three names.

As the mastermind behind the scenes, the protagonist is involved in too many things

I've just read the first dozen chapters and it's hard to say what's going on. I feel like the protagonist is too obscene. It seems like I haven't seen a woman in my life. If it's my first time, forget it. We've known each other for several years and it doesn't make sense! The author should have just started writing novels, so he should use this book as a practice.

I feel like the main character is very incompetent and I can't stand it anymore.

The first world is meaningless. I don't fucking believe that you, a man, can trip over a stone and practice martial arts.

Tsk, tsk, tsk, another author who was beaten to his knees by reality and could not stand up.

The starting point is getting closer and closer, so embarrassing

There are too many typos, the protagonist has several names, the sentences don't make sense in some places, the plot is a bit bloody, and the writing is not good.

The main character is a bit silly and it's hard to bring him in. If you don't change it, no one will watch it.

Now that I have read Chapter 7, I find it quite interesting, but I don't know what will happen next.

Thank you for trying the poison. Fortunately, I have you.

No comments. For the time being, the writing is pretty good😄

Watching Zida's time travel at the beginning was a bit too silly.

This punctuation makes my head hurt. Goodbye.