Live: Opening Review of Mark 1 Armor

Let me first explain that I didn't watch much and only saw the mecha in the third live broadcast, so the review must be one-sided. The previous two live broadcasts were very imaginative and the routines were very interesting to watch. The interspersed daily life and supporting characters (female characters?) Were not very good. Basically, skipping them will not affect the reading. So I decisively skipped the daily routine between the second live broadcast and the third live broadcast, and then found that I could continue reading and the connection was smooth. Finally, let me explain the reason for the negative reviews. It is water. The whole article is full of water. During the live broadcast, one chapter should be 2000+ words. The font I set is relatively large, one chapter has 12 pages, and then the "barrage" takes up five or six pages. This may feel like this when the live broadcast has just appeared or not long ago. Yes, it is not suitable now that the live broadcast articles have reached semi-retirement. For those who have watched more than four or five live broadcast articles, it is like a dream. But for those who rarely watch live broadcast articles, it may be a good attraction. There is also the content of the third live broadcast, which feels a bit strange. , I don't know if the author has a feeling of being unable to let go because he has been locked up in a small dark room. He has a big brain, but he just doesn't dare to write. Then when he writes, it's like piecing it together, here and there. Finally, there is the main plot setting. So far, I can't see it. Here I One suggestion is not to always choose products that are too far away. You can switch between far and near. The far ones can shock and make people yearn for, while the close ones can give people hope, improve "realistic" technology, and at the same time connect daily life, so that people will not feel lonely just watching live broadcasts. Of course, the author also has better ideas of his own, I haven't seen them yet. Here, I also wish the author to write better and better!

Please continue to play normally, I am optimistic about you 👍 I regard every new work as the beginning of a new world. In my opinion, it is not a book but a parallel space. Although this book has many loopholes, I believe they will be filled in later. There is still a lot of room for development of this kind of book.

It's very comfortable to watch. Please update it.

Hurry up and update quickly. It's totally not enough.

Evaluation articles are written about imagination, so never write about reality, let alone emotions. The last popular review article failed to write realistic and emotional dramas well, and it collapsed in the middle and later stages. I hope you won't follow his old path.

The grass jelly in daily detoxification! It's true that this type of book is difficult to write. I've read a lot of this kind of evaluation type of book. In the later period, my attitude towards the country and my own positioning and development will be like a eunuch if I'm not careful. Even if I can finish the book, most of it is still unfinished. I feel that with the current writing style and level, I guess I can write about 300 chapters.

I'm so stupid for not having any sense of confidentiality... I didn't dare to look at it later,,,,

Regarding scientific research, the older generation will also post updates on Weibo and conduct evaluations. I............ Ahbaahbaahba......

Emmm The author's writing style is good and his creativity is also good. It's a pity that this book is difficult to get out of the circle because the author is too good. Because the new author has little support, the first three golden chapters are handled very well. The review at the beginning is very thought-provoking, and I can't help but be curious about the next story. Then I saw Chapter Thirteen... And fell into deep thought. The entire ten chapters are about the protagonist's daily life with his prospective girlfriend or brother. Does the author still want others to raise it? If not, just look at daily life ╮(￣▽￣)╭

It turns out that there is a book called Time and Space Review. The beginning is a routine, and the ending is also a routine.

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Crowdfunding to write a book, book friends with big imagination can leave a message under this post and write down the technology you want As long as it is suitable, the author will write it down Please divide the technology level according to abcd+- behind the idea.

I have seen the same type on other platforms, and I also started testing the Iron Man suit. It's also live broadcast. The next door has four to five hundred chapters.

Apply for sterilization of Mint Cat (1/100)

As soon as I came in, I saw so many sailors, and I was not in the mood to want to see them 😅

Well, I don't want to say anything else, but can you write more review plots? Mainly here for the review

The last evaluation article I read was "Super Dimension Evaluation". I hope this one has better results than him, has more words, and has more interesting content.

It is recommended that authors write according to their own outline. I found that people in the comment area have started to give pointers. I don't know how many authors have seen the tragic situation of the outline collapsing and the novel ending according to the readers' wishes. The poisonous point everyone talks about is to pay attention to it, but don't put the cart before the horse. You must know that some people like a novel and some people can't handle it. It's impossible for everyone to like it. You can't take care of everyone. You have to know that most people just can't stand it and leave. They won't comment in the comment area. If you write according to the comment area and not according to the outline, you will be finished sooner or later.

The author came up with an idea. It would be fun to travel back to the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period with a time machine to watch Confucius teach Confucianism to Rang Zilu. It would definitely be fun 😁

Too watery. . That's it for the live broadcast. .

I didn't want to order all of them, but this number is amazing

I found a Zhangshuo assistant and resumed speaking normally.

Can you please add some details ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

This deserves to be improved. Come on, author, the writing is great.

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Do you dare to update more? It's not enough.

Well written! Come on! Come on! Come on

After reading it in one sitting, I knew I had another book that I wanted to read every day.

Hey, this book is quite innovative. Come on, author, keep writing!

This book is quite good. You can come and read it together.