Hong Kong Film: the Road to Tycoon Begins with Psychics

It's a mess and feels like a ball of wool. I have to find the beginning myself when reading a novel. It's really tiring to read.

Is it normal to be able to write? What I wrote is the same as that of Nerve C. I wrote it for ghosts to seeAh

I didn't understand it either, I just saw that the protagonist was ugly, and I always emphasized whether the protagonist was handsome or not? The author is also speechless

I didn't want to read the first chapter, but the author's previous book was at least interesting enough to keep reading.

Come on! This novel has a lot of feeling and is well written!

Forget about this book, Eunuch, and go write Sunset over the Xiangjiang River. This book has a future.

Looks tired and gave up

Mrs. Li is the first person to find a channel for the protagonist. At first, Mrs. Li was written as her father, but in the last two sentences, it was changed to her father-in-law, and then she was written as her daughter-in-law. Really awesome.

I hope to gradually write more fine works,

Slowly, slowly I feel nothing. Slowly, slowly I was fooled. It would be better if the author updated

It's good to read a few chapters

It's so messy. There is no main line at all. You have to piece it all together, but you also have to figure out the main line. But you just write whatever comes to mind. There's no way to watch it at all. And there's a lot of nonsense. Since you want to write about the main line of supernatural beings, write more about the theme and don't just write whatever you want randomly.

Viewed separately, it feels a bit like watching a sketch. Update more, come on, I'm optimistic about you.

Can you add the name of the movie?

Seeing now, there is a lot of chaos. At least when a big event is about to end, you can introduce new characters or make some soy sauce in the middle. Such a big mess is too damn messy.