Wan Zai Outside Qingshan

Finished reading. My mood is very complicated, I have a lot to say, but I can't write a single word. All I can say is that this is a really good book. I haven't read such a gripping online article for a long time. The ending is very heavy, the kind that carries a mission that transcends the times. Heavy, yet admirable. As a new author's first book, it's all free. The quality of this book is really surprising. It can be clearly seen from between the lines that the author has a profound writing skills, and many of the descriptions are endlessly memorable. Let me briefly talk about a few characters and fragments in the article that impressed me deeply. First of all, there is the heroine. At the beginning, the heroine's image was not very distinct and she had no characteristics. The first time I realized her difference was her view of this new world. Different from most heroines who travel through ancient times, Jiang Wan is always out of place. She has been caught up in the hunt and the mystery since she woke up; she is scared and lonely, but except for her elderly grandfather, a few young children and careless maids, she has no one she can trust, rely on or love. At the same time, her thoughts collided fiercely with the ancient convention that human life was insignificant and women had a humble status. She was lonely and she hated the world. As she confided in her half-drunk state: she wanted to "go home." What really makes the image of the heroine stand out in the middle and later stages is her incompatibility with the world. In this cold world that was full of malice towards her, she tried her best to warm everyone around her with love. The tragedies she encounters one after another successfully serve as foreshadowing and push the article to its climax, where the heroine makes up her mind to fight against God for the fate of a woman. Such a technique and such a pattern made me applaud the author. One of the highlights of this book is the side description. For example, when writing about the heroine feeling lonely, the author did not let her say it directly, nor did he describe her demeanor or expression. Instead, he described a small movement of Sister Qiao in her arms: "touching her face." Children have pure minds and often feel the feelings of those close to them very directly; although Sister Qing is young and ignorant, she can understand the heroine's feelings, so she touches her face as a comfort. This scene doesn't mention the heroine's panic, loneliness, and worry at all, but it is vividly reflected. A few strokes directly hit the heart. Another example is that before Chun Yuan betrayed the heroine, she wanted to touch the chick's down, but before touching it, her hand seemed to have been burned. This detail not only paved the way for Chunyuan to betray the heroine, but also perfectly reflected her contradictions, guilt, and hatred of herself. The ending of this character is also very interesting. I once thought that she would feel deep regret and finally complete redemption like similar characters in other works. This is indeed foreshadowed in the article. However, after paving the way for redemption, a reversal occurred. Chunyuan transformed all her guilt and uneasiness into inner malice. Unexpected and reasonable. The fickleness of people's hearts is vividly reflected. There are many more details like this. Many of the characterizations and detailed descriptions in the article are extremely wonderful. After reading, it is inevitable that people will feel that there is still more to explore. But there is always a moment when the song comes to an end. In this story, I have laughed, cried, been angry and moved; this is enough, isn't it? I hope the author will produce more exciting works in the future. This article is worthy of being put on the shelves and worthy of being read and appreciated by more people. No subscription allowed, only rewards; limited ability, just express your feelings. Thank you to the author for bringing us such a story.

The author does not need to write about time travel. The heroine has no feeling of time travel at all, only the heart of the Virgin Mary.

The author's writing is very good. But the reading experience can sometimes be uncomfortable for readers. The author is very good at digging holes, but some holes are too big. Even if they haven't been filled in yet, it makes people unable to get up and down. As time goes by, the previous holes have been forgotten.

I don't like it. Since the heroine is in danger, it's better for the heroine to know some martial arts or be extremely powerful to look good.

The book is very good. Although there are some imperfections, it is overall a good book and highly recommended. Come on, author! Support you to produce more high-quality and in-depth books👍👍👍🌹🌹🌹

It looked pretty good at first, but I didn't like the heroine after she went to Beirong. I didn't like it.

This book is really good, the author please update it, ah ah ah ah 🥺

Very good Come on author

I just read the first few chapters and they were good. I hope the rest of the chapters won't be crooked.

This book is so good. I haven't encountered such a good-looking book in a long time. Please keep it up, author! ! ! !

It's really worth spending time to read, a great book👍

I stayed up late and watched it for two days, it was so good! ! ! !

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It's really well written !

There are a lot of things in the middle that feel like the author's imagination has automatically filtered them out (the author didn't write them out!) But then I integrated them all, and I finally liked the image of the heroine The author's writing style is so good, I really like it. Why is it free? (Picked up a treasure)

Why is such a beautiful novel so deserted?

Beautiful, thank you author for giving me this wonderful time of writing

It's so beautiful I didn't expect the first book to be so well written, come on