Boudoir

The author's story is well written and his technique is good, but it's too wordy.

A waste of feelings, inexplicably entangled

This work so far has quite a twist and turn, the so-called twists and turns, but when will it end after being twisted for so long? !

Even if you are favored by your grandmother, you are still dependent on others. Is it reasonable to be so arrogant in other people's homes and treat this young lady like this?

It's just a dreamy fairy tale!

I thought it was pretty good. I thought the characters were good at the beginning, but after reading it, it became boring. The plot was too long, and I didn't like the heroine's character. What I said in my mind was completely opposite to her actual actions. I wrote this chapter to be low-key, but the next chapter will steal the show. I can't say this chapter. I love the male protagonist, but I look at him shyly in the next chapter. In this chapter, I say I have low self-esteem and I am not worthy of him. In the next chapter, I start flirting with her. The heroine basically has no ability to resist temptation, and I don't feel that she has her own firm beliefs. She is just an idiot in love. The character design is good, but the character's ability is not very useful. He also forced to use witchcraft, magic formation, Hibiscus flower, bizarre life experience, uh, when it comes to filling in the holes, I went through it in two sentences. I'm really tired of watching it. 😎

It seems that this general is going to be replaced by Xiao Qi?

Bet that there will definitely be a light bulb in the next chapter of a pack of spicy strips!

Passing by recommendation 🤭

It's really going to be two million soon. It's awesome.

It seems that the knot in his heart has not been resolved yet, but could it be that Gu Yi was also psychologically hinted by Ning Qingyu?

Female secret guards!!! Does Li Yue really have female secret guards? Will there be a situation where the heroine is in danger and the female secret guard pretends not to be there?

It seems that as long as General Zhu doesn't die, he will definitely cause trouble for Xiao Qi.

I have written so much, but I just can't feel the twists and turns of the story. Every time I see Ning Qingyu, I want to go through and tear her into pieces.

There are ten captains, so Xiaoqi will fight ten people in a row?

Hahahaha, I just want to say that the guy who blocked the door was awesome🤭🤭

Small pawns like Zhu Zhenxing often ruin the entire game. Although Miao Baoshan was suspicious of Xiao Qi, at least he had no second thoughts, which was very beneficial to Xiao Qi.

It's pretty cool, but can it be updated faster? I'm so anxious.