I Broke Everything in Tokyo

I was a little disappointed when I saw Tamao Serizawa in the title of the chapter. I thought it was a fan of Hot-Blooded High School. In addition, I recently read the brother chapter of Hot-Blooded High School, The Evil King of the Neighborhood. I was immediately attracted to it. As a result, the main character of TM's Hot-Blooded series only appeared in three chapters and disappeared. Negative review 🤫🤫😤

In the early stage, it was only 6 points, but in the middle stage of the ninja battle, just with this ninjutsu setting, golden fingers and fighting, it can directly increase to 9 points. It has already surpassed your imitation object, Blade Tooth Fist Wan, in terms of senses.

It's a book review, just a reference The writing is good, but there is a poisonous point (personal). First of all, it is understandable that the protagonist is afraid of guns, but it is too much to be afraid of guns after fighting for so long. The second is his attitude towards Wu Feng Shui. It was too much to mentally degrade a complete stranger just because of a photo. In other words, the protagonist just doesn't interact with many people. He just makes up his mind and insists on his own opinions, so I can't accept it. Finally, let's talk about the protagonist's behavior, which is that his intelligence sometimes goes up and down (I know many people will use the two states of the protagonist to reply to me, but what I'm talking about is that the protagonist's anger is often much stronger than his sober judgment). And many times, those who make a splash are illogical, and it just... Doesn't make sense. They don't even have a reason to win, but they still win recklessly. But I can see that the author is very attentive, and apart from that, the plot and story are very attractive to me. People who like Boxing Wish can join it.

This novel,,,, since you want to write a fantasy-like boxing world as the background, don't write it in a hot-blooded high school. The style of the painting is too inconsistent. I was thinking that your novel that looks like a transformation myth is written in a bad and hot-blooded high school. It's so embarrassing to read.

The writing is really not good. The character of the protagonist is also contradictory. He is crazy and normal at one time. Guess why martial arts is martial arts, the most basic cultivation of the mind. Of course, it is crazy and crazy. This is the standard of Japanese comics. Basic Japanese comics are so popular. The key is that this is not a Japanese comic. It is a novel. You have already changed it. Why don't you change this wise setting? A martial artist can't even control himself, and he still practices martial arts. Emotional dramas are also about rejecting and welcoming, right? When you are a showman, you have to change it. If you set up an archway, you will live two more lives. Either you will have no desires and desires, be quiet and do nothing, or you will be deeply in love and love deeply. What is your love or not? What are you writing? Are you writing for yourself or for others to read? 🤮, Front You can still watch it, but later on when you talk about getting married, you will be poisoned to death. No, let's just say that if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It's really disgusting. The emotional scenes are just a mess💩. What is your theme? Is it a sad drama or a love movie? Is your horse-riding a fight? I thought this was a good book, but I couldn't stand it anymore.

I shopped for several days and read several books. I think this book is the best.

Updates are too slow. I can't bear it. I saved it for a week and finished it in a few minutes.

I finally came across a book about boxing wishes, and I thought the author was also a fan of boxing wishes. But I was very disappointed after watching it. What is Quan Yuan's style? It's a fight, it's never admitting defeat, it's the kind of plot where fighting takes place in an episode of 20 minutes and 15 minutes. The Ten Demon Snake King Ma in the original work is such a person. When others are taking advantage of Yamashita and looking down on him, he is one of the few people who respects him. Quan Yuan is a pure novel. But what are you writing about? After the start of the game, you immediately enter the emotional scene, write some inexplicable plots, ramble here and there, and force yourself to do it. It feels like any supporting character is mentally stronger than you. What you wrote is not Quan Yuan but Long Aotian, it's just that the world view is in the background of Quan Yuan.

White eyes on black background

No, this is the Kanyuan view

This is a Quan Yuan fanfic, not a youth love story. I would like the author to figure out what he is writing. The previous two chapters could have promoted some plot, but now I don't know what I am reading in the two chapters.

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When I read Chapter 23, the protagonist didn't even have a girlfriend. Pull down the chapter title, for casual readers attracted by the introduction, click ❌ in the upper right corner to read other books. I really have no love for clickbait parties.

The writing is very good, but the title of the book is not very attractive, and the theme is also quite unpopular. This kind of golden finger is set up well. It will not suddenly become invincible but it is still strengthened in small stages. The setting is also good, but the emotional drama is a bit hard to describe (of course, if you are looking for delicate emotional drama in this kind of work, forget it). Come on, author! (I always feel that the author is very malicious towards Takitani Genji →_→)

It feels like the power system has collapsed since Koga. From then on, the plot of Fist Wishes and even the plot of Blade Fang were not enough for the protagonist to fight alone. As long as he opened the demon form, he would be an instant kill. The author probably realized that, so he created the Gold and Silver Dragon Brothers and forcibly increased the difficulty. As a result, he failed to control his cheating heart and gave him a mind-controlling power. This is a little trick, and he can become a god. The enemies and protagonists in these two chapters will soon be immortal and have millions of followers. . .

😰😰I don't know why after reading dozens of chapters, I still feel that I don't have the hearty feeling of Quan Yuan. It feels a bit like urban writing but not (><) an indescribable weird feeling. Every character in Quan Yuan is very charming (I haven't read the manga or anime), but I always feel like there are a lot of things missing in this novel, which gives me a weird feeling of disgust.

Are you writing about Fist Wan Asura or Fist Wan Youth Story? Fifty percent of a book is about love? Would you like to write romance?

One girl after another, the persona cannot be established at all. Harems are nothing, men love them. The problem is that your emotional drama is procrastinating and indecisive. I can accept it on a daily basis, after all, I love watching it. But I refuse Japanese comics with tsundere heroines with stomachaches. Personally, I prefer harem relationships that cut through the mess quickly. Drama, or you just write a shitty novel with a single female protagonist, one female character after another, tsundere, misunderstanding, acceptance or rejection, etc. And all kinds of Japanese comic-style routines, and then you use the whole male-dressing-as-a-female thing to disgust people, I almost vomited.

I laughed, the author is a primary school student? The protagonist who weighs 120 pounds wants to box. Haha, don't ask. Asking is the protagonist's halo?

Please give a thumbs up if you feel that your emotional writing is flattering.

I came here because I wanted to do it, but when I saw the emotional scenes, I really dragged my feet and vomited. I read online novels just to have fun. You can do it if you want to be a literary person, but if your writing skills are not that good, don't do this kind of thing. When I saw Junko Ueno, I didn't want to read it. If it was an anime with an Asashi male protagonist, I might still be able to continue reading it. Forget it from the novel, it's really not decisive at all.

Kannahara Kan!

It's pretty good to watch, and there's nothing wrong with the emotional drama. Why are there so many comments about emotional drama? The most outrageous thing is that this book abuses the protagonist. Doesn't it mean that the brainless Long Aotian King's domineering spirit is so violent that it is not an abuse of the protagonist? 😥

Even if you say you go out to look for inspiration, just say goodbye to the eunuch. I really like this book.

It doesn't feel like the world of Quan Wan at all. There are basically no fighting chapters, and there are basically thirty chapters of urban writing about fighting. Give up, give up.

How can I put it, it is good that the protagonist has a responsibility, but there are too few fights,,, it is okay to write without catering to the readers. If it is just written for love, I think it is very good, but if you are writing a novel... Really, brother, please change it, the boxing wish you wrote is not very good.

Let's put it this way, gangsters always find a corner to kill people, but the protagonist who is a high school student doesn't. He kills people on the street. On the one hand, he says that he has 20 points of intelligence, and on the other hand, he says that his 20 points of intelligence is not equal to IQ. . . . He has the same personality as Yakuza. . . .

I saw the protagonist in the middle, and I took a look at the finale when she was fighting the ninja. Oh my god, later I saw her making a wish in something similar to the conscious world, and then the whole world changed drastically. He became the so-called god. I am a fan of Yabazi, and what I like is Asura and Omega have the passion to fight for their beliefs. Although some of the skills are quite fantasy, they are acceptable. However, in the early stages of this book, the special abilities are normal. You can tell just by looking at the ending. The author wants to attract both the original party and Lu. People, the result was unpalatable to both parties, and there were so many exaggerated things in the ending. This is a fighting fanfic, not a Long Aotian Invincible novel that applies a world view. Among other comments, I also saw the book Boxing Wan Destroy Knockout, and the character description after the start of the game was not good. The description of the flesh-and-blood characters may not be satisfactory. Anyway, I stopped watching it. When I saw the ninja fight, I thought it was quite interesting, but now I really can't watch it anymore Finally, does any book friend recommend a good fanfic boxing competition that should be pure, thank you!

The author has been cheating for a while. How should I put it? I am also a Buddhist reader, so this book has been on the bookshelf for several months and has not been deleted. I continue to read 😁

I don't want a eunuch