I Actually Punish

Dear friends, this is Xianyu's first time writing a book, so the writing style and plot may not be to your liking. I hope you guys can give me more valuable opinions. I believe that if you work hard slowly, you will eventually turn around. I hope you enjoy my story.

I don't quite understand some of the rules and regulations of this type of book, so I would like to express my own opinion. The first priority is the issue of punctuation. You can carefully consider whether certain sentences should be added with periods or commas. If there is any unfinished meaning, adding a period after it will make people feel irritated and unable to continue reading. You can go to Baidu to find out more. Then it's about some vocabulary. I won't go into details. If you see some idioms or more advanced words, you can write them down. Whether it is written down in a notebook or a memo on your phone, or in a notepad, it is a good choice. Only when you remember it more will it become your own, which will make the article appear advanced. As for the typo, it should be a typo. I saw it. You can check it carefully. Finally, the introduction feels a bit unable to grasp the key points. The introduction is either a highlight to attract people, or it is a clue to the full text, or something like an introduction. By the way, I have forgotten the introduction, I only remember it is very short. The following are my personal suggestions. How many female protagonists will the male protagonist have? Will you have a harem? Do you have an outline? I have read a suspenseful novel before, and I remember it very deeply. The whole text is coherent. There is a seemingly insignificant person at the beginning, but it is also a thread at the end. Except for the person who is about to die as soon as he appears, no one with a name in it is a passerby. Everyone who is alive must have a story. Therefore, do you have a clear positioning for each character in your works, where they come from, where they go, where they are from, and what they like to eat? These characteristics may not be written in the article, but with this, the characters will be full, three-dimensional, and vivid. It is best not to be evil for the sake of evil, and to be good for the sake of not being good. Each has its own cause and effect. You can use articles to express some positive opinions. Not only can you win applause from readers, but you can also make your articles connotative. Probably so. If there is anything wrong, please correct me. If you really want to write, then go all the way to the end, don't look back, and follow your heart with every word, word, character, and story you write. May you encourage me.