There Is Light on My Head Too

It's pretty good, but the introduction of the supporting role is too watery

Can you remove part of the inner drama? The plot is moving too slowly. Chapter v is not even interesting

After watching it again, I found that the most exciting part is the plot involving the protagonist's father. Otherwise, the protagonist should be abolished and his father should be the protagonist 😏😏

Brother, why don't you write the current protagonist to death? I think the supporting characters you wrote are better than the protagonist.

For the sake of Agent Ouchi, Asgard and Black and White, I decided to raise one

How can a person who knows nothing about social science have the courage to start thinking that he is right based on a little understanding of modern times? The simplest mistake is that since ancient times, the weapon of criticism cannot replace the weapon of criticism. Only revolutions from the bottom up can succeed. Counting on the help of the rulers has never been possible, no matter whether it is a modern capitalist revolution or a socialist revolution. The so-called reform is either reversing the course of history or finding another way to continue life, which has never been successful.

This Lu Wan is really not suitable to be a heroine, she can be a supporting role

What does this book say? . I always had the feeling that the author was superior to Ben Xuanjingji. But. . I felt that the plot was too rushed and the characters didn't really stand up, only the protagonist did. . To be honest, I still prefer to read the two books by the author: The Earthlings and Attack of the Ouchi Agents

Xiu'er, you should also write a Hong Kong variety show. If you connect all the plots together like Asgard, it will definitely achieve better results than yours. Isn't your strength the blending of different movie plots with your own unique world view?

After reading two chapters, it's not confusing at all. There are trolls downstairs, and the identification is complete.

I can't write anything serious anymore, so I still need a weirder title.

It's a very good book, why don't many people read it?

The whole book lasted for 15 chapters, and I was totally confused and my head was in a mess.

The protagonist is not as interesting as his father 🤫

After writing books for so many years, I still can't keep readers entertained? Or do you want to stand and make money? Literary youth are not allowed to do so.

The author is really bad at this. When writing about feelings, he writes about feelings. Why does he have to emphasize interests so much, but when people watch it, it adds a sense of disappointment. For example, in the scene where Master Su Yan saves the protagonist, as mentioned before, the Nine Escapes Xuanmen is maintained by feelings. When the master saves the disciple, he saves the disciple. I have to write it to actually save my daughter. I write it as if being a disciple is not important at all. At the same time, it emphasizes the importance of love and righteousness of the protagonist. What is this? Forced foil? I have read several books about Wu Xiu. The writing is really good, but his writing about emotions has always been something I personally cannot accept.

The protagonist of this book has not been changed. Don't be misled by the trolls.

This book is getting better now, and it should get better and better in the future.

There is a light on the head, and the green heart is panicked

Low profile version of Disability (눈_눈)

The emotional line in the early stage was not quite right, with Lu Yuan. From what I watched, I felt that the male protagonist Liu Nai had already done his best to Lu Yuan, and he was even talking about life and death and never let go. You must know that Lu Yuan came to kill Liu Nai in the first place. Then let's talk about Lu Yuan. Along the way, Liu Nai almost relied on Liu Nai to run around and save her countless times. In the end, she was betrayed again and again. In order to save her life, she had to use a useless skill to fool people. Later, she was dependent on life and death and betrayed the protagonist's partner. Such a bitch's behavior was based on stupidity and no one blamed her. Isn't this disgusting writing?

? N years old bookworm, I can't understand what the author wrote! The man surnamed Cao in Liuli Xianzong can deliver the message, but Lu Wan can't? If she wasn't important, she would be dead. She wants to be important, but those who are looking for her don't have anyone in charge? Take a hundred steps back, what if there is a misunderstanding? It seems that the protagonist's sect doesn't have any skills that he can use, right? Aren't you going to travel all over the world to find opportunities? Lu Wan didn't even have a supporting role card, so he just wrote dozens of chapters? Just write it well, the plot is the same as a joke?

Ginger Cold Crisp

Qingjie turns out to be the reincarnation of Long Ji. No wonder the title of this book came from it. The truth is revealed.

I haven't watched it since then

After raising forty or fifty chapters, it suddenly becomes free of charge

I don't know what's going on, but this book doesn't look right.

I don't understand why I have to take a woman with me? Can't you run by yourself? Will this woman die without her?

After reading this book for so long, there is no Gu Gu Gu. Surprised face😐

After reading a bunch of comments, I almost died laughing. Everyone is showing off, showing off. I always feel like laughing for no reason. I don't know which movie it came from that affected me. Anyway, when I hear the show, I want to laugh.