Have Top Kendo Talent at the Start

I finished reading it in one go, it's very good, hurry up and update it, I've already tipped it for more content 🤓

As soon as I saw the concept of Fanjie Shangpin, I immediately thought of it. Heaven and earth are mysterious and yellow. There are 15 levels in total. Then I thought about the math problems in the first semester of first grade and the math problems in the second semester of first grade. A certain genius skipped classes in kindergarten and learned the Secret Code of the Immortal World. High School Mathematics. Crushed. Countless primary and secondary school students. And escaped from college students😰

To be honest, it is unreasonable for a monster with a talent level to have to look for exercises every day. A monster with a talent in swordsmanship must have a direction of his or her own efforts, right? Practicing swordsmanship every day is like doing radio gymnastics, as if it is purely to gain training points. No wonder the talent for practicing templates is not high.

You are so poisonous. You have reached the tenth level of the Soldier Master Realm in just a few chapters, and then the subsequent realms are stuck at a hundred chapters. It would be weird if you didn't get criticized. If you slowly promoted the first level and the next to a hundred chapters, you would not be criticized like this. As for that dirty thing, you have a system to break the game with any reason. For example, a full blow of the centurion realm. It is reasonable to kill the dirty thing and take some injuries. Now it is weird if it doesn't collapse.

The writing is okay. Although there are some minor flaws, they are still within the acceptable range. Keep working hard.

It's a pity to abandon it if it's tasteless. I feel that the author's writing techniques are somewhat similar to Xiao Shu's, but the author's writing lacks emotion in the words, as if it was written for the sake of writing. For example, the plot conflict is reasonable, but it lacks emotion, as if it is introducing why the conflict occurs, and the reader cannot be involved. The advantage is that the reconciliation after the conflict will not make people think of the protagonist as a virgin. It is suggested that the author should read books on female channels when he has time. You cannot imitate the writing style of male channel masters, but you can still learn from the delicate and conflicting ideas of female channels. As long as the author improves, the path of online writing can still be pursued.

The road of chasing books is the most helpless. There is not enough to read, and they are gone.

A good young man wrote an interesting article in a crooked way and turned it into an article of bitterness and deep hatred.

The author has entered the palace and has just arrived to ask me to perform an operation on him. The effect is very good and the sex change has been completed. No need to wait any longer.

Ten Thousand Years Soldier Realm, unlimited equipment, ugh😔 I looked at it and didn't want to watch it, such a good start, but the story developed like this. I would rather crush all the way to the top, constantly suppress the world, and the rise of the sect, it is much more enjoyable than such a brainless pretense.

After writing more than 300,000 words, I am still in the realm of soldiers. Are you planning to write it at 10 million words?

Why keep clinging to the idea of ​​fighting spirit turning into a horse? This meme was originally meant to disgust those fans. It's okay to play a meme once in a while. Why do you keep grabbing this meme and writing about it?

My writing style is poor, and sometimes I write inexplicably.

Oh, Shet, this terrible plot and writing reminds me of the time I wrote a love letter to my teacher in 5th grade.

The contrast is a bit big. I thought it was a cool article after reading the introduction. I quickly reached the level of soldiers and soldiers, set up a restricted area, and then forced myself to complete 9 skills. It took a hundred chapters. I guess it is either a failure or a sudden acceleration to break through the later realms. Is this rhythm good? I am not sure what I think.

Blood energy turns into a horse. . . . Feeling like I'm going to be dismissed

In fact, the plot of the article is quite good, but the writing style is a bit poor.

I'll reward you with 500 starting coins, just a humble request for improvement.

Shangincense

Shangincense

It took only two years to write 460,000 words. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

I'll give you a monthly pass. If it's written well, please give it a try. If it's written well, I guarantee it will be fully booked.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~