Naruto: The Technology Template

:       ， For example, a group of Africans bought a batch of AK47s, thinking that the bayonets on the guns are sharp and strong, and they can definitely become tribal warriors with this short spear! Do you feel that it is a waste of time, and they used suffocating operations with an efficient killing machine? The author's current operation is very similar to this. It is not much different from the routine a few years ago. Do tasks, change equipment, and when it is worn out, just throw it away and continue to replace it. At most, the equipment inside is "new". Is the strength of a black technology product the product itself? No, it's about the black technological knowledge behind it. If you improve your technological foundation, study these things, and know how to make them, can't you make something better and more convenient at that time? The Death Star is very strong? Can't I make tens of thousands of upgraded versions of it and use them as cannon fodder?                                                                                                                                                               The author still hasn't jumped out of the framework of a few years ago, the imagination is still not big enough, and the operation is still not cool enough. The writing is just like fighting monsters and upgrading the game, relying on the popular products of other works in it to attract readers. Look at Dr. Chen. In a fantasy world, he does not use the same methods as the natives to become stronger, but "scientifically cultivates immortality". He first studies the basis of your strength, and then makes a better one himself. Even the so-called strong one is just a number on the assembly line. And in that novel, do readers like the items or characters that appear in other works? "No! We just want to see Dr. Chen use 'science' to show off!" So as long as the author's operation is cool enough and his imagination is big enough, there is no need to rely on the popularity of other works. Isn't it good to create your own popularity? There are no routines in the world. When there are too many people, they become routines. The author still uses such old routines, and does not reflect any of his own imagination. The above is just what I felt after reading some of the previous chapters, some book reviews and the table of contents at the back. I hope the author can write his own cool operation, and don't pile on popular products. Reading too much will not only be embarrassing but also lead to aesthetic fatigue, and you won't be able to get far...

A chainsaw with shotguns for close combat, a cannon for long-range sniping, and a machine gun for mid-range turrets. Make more batteries, there is no energy, one battery can eliminate hunger!

Can't you just change your hand into a gun? 😒 It's really not easy to change your arm into a gun

After reading Chapter 90, please tell me your thoughts. When I first read this book, I felt pretty good. After all, the idea is really interesting. Then the author gave me a mouthful of poison at the beginning: the protagonist is a time traveler. He traveled to the world of Naruto for 12 years and worked hard to become a genin. Then the third war broke out and the protagonist's parents died on the battlefield. The protagonist was desperate and felt that there was no hope for life. He had never considered that the world of Naruto could actually resurrect the dead. Just like a native who knew nothing, he sold all his family's assets, bought various combat supplies and went to the battlefield to prepare for a deadly battle. In the end, he successfully used the set traps and various methods to trap a bunch of ninjas to death. In the end, he and his pursuers died together with the detonating talisman attached to his body. In this plot, the thoughts displayed by the protagonist are not the thoughts that a time traveler should have, but the completely indigenous thinking mode of Hokage. And because the author has no foreshadowing at all, the readers are not touched at all by the death of the protagonist's parents. But the author wrote it. The protagonist has a very good relationship with his parents. When his parents died, he felt like the sky was falling. He even went to the battlefield without preparing to go back alive. He completely gave up on himself... It's not that you can't write such a plot. The key is that there is no image portrayal of the protagonist's parents. The reader simply cannot empathize with the protagonist. I just find it annoying that the protagonist collapses inexplicably like this. Of course, in addition to this point, the description of the protagonist's later acquisition of the system, and then starting the cheating path, the surge in combat power, and the killing of enemies are still very good. This section continues until Chapter 15. Starting from Chapter 15, the 2nd and 3rd poison points begin. Starting from this chapter, the protagonist returns to the camp and meets people from his family. First of all, the people in the camp and family do not believe that the protagonist has made great achievements and killed so many enemies. Even if the protagonist shows the forehead protectors of more than 200 enemies to prove it, others will not believe it. Later, when they formed a team to perform a mission, Orochimaru had already ordered that the protagonist's instructions should prevail. However, when they came to the battlefield, none of them obeyed the instructions. Crazy questioning of the protagonist. Even if the protagonist proves his strength on the spot, he still refuses to give up. Just because of arguing with these people, the protagonist failed to complete the mission with dozens of ninjas. The third poisonous point is that no matter who it is, when calling the protagonist, he always refers to him as a brat. A bunch of chuunin and genin faced the protagonist, a strong man who had killed hundreds of enemies, and they just called him "sama" instead of "sama", but they all called him "boy". When Kakashi was 12 years old, did those chuunin and genin call him "Kakashi boy"? Later on, these two points also improved. After Chapter 40, the teammates he brought with him were no longer a nuisance. After 50 chapters, no one called the protagonist boy. Except for the clan leader who knew nothing but troubling the protagonist. After the protagonist killed two or three thousand ninjas, even the jounin called the protagonist "sir". The clan leader was still called "boy". To be honest, it felt like he was slapping other jounin in the face. The plot in the latter part looks very good. Putting aside these disturbing things, the author still has some skills. Then. This section continues until Chapter 90. In Chapter 90, the protagonist is confused. The protagonist wonders, are interests really that important? Why are there wars in this world? Are those struggles for interests really more important than the lives of loved ones? The protagonist's thinking mode in this paragraph has once again returned to the indigenous thinking mode, and it feels like those arrogant people in the Naruto world. After all, as a time traveler, as long as I have attended school, taken political classes, and had a little bit of social experience, I will not be confused by such inexplicable things. In the end, the protagonist actually needed the Third Hokage to come out to resolve his knot. I don't see the protagonist from this paragraph. The thinking that a time traveler should have. To be honest, as a time traveler, I have experienced peace and lived in this world for 12 years, and I have also experienced war. There is no need to say that two different lives cannot make the protagonist's soul collide with a brighter spark. Have you been completely assimilated into the world of Naruto? Has it completely changed into an indigenous way of thinking? In this case, why not just design an indigenous protagonist at the beginning, but also design the identity of a time traveler? To be honest, I don't understand. The author has also written other books. This is not his first time writing a novel. Can he make such simple mistakes one after another? To be honest, I can tolerate the previous poisonous points. After all, the quality of this book is still there. But the 100 million points in Chapter 90 completely made me despair of the protagonist's IQ. Come on, author, I can only wish you better and better writing.

Come, stand on the floor and support. 🙂

As long as the protagonist of a book makes us feel a sense of empathy, it is a good protagonist. However, the protagonist of this book cannot give us who have received more than ten years of education any sense of empathy. When we read this book, we feel that we are seeing a fool protagonist and a paranoid protagonist. In the early stage, you can also use the protagonist. Before the time travel, he didn't know that Naruto had resurrection technology. In the later stage, after being reincarnated by Orochimaru, didn't he know that there was resurrection technology in this world? The protagonist has a clone template. When he returns home, he sees a pile of blood on the ground. Collect it! Wouldn't it be enough to use cloning technology and reincarnation from the dirty soil? As a result, the protagonist ran away to Akatsuki! I read the whole book in an hour, and I have never seen such a silly protagonist. At first I thought this book was written by a Japanese author, and I felt that this kind of book could not be written with Chinese thinking. As a result, in the middle period, the author used some magic to go to Japan and destroyed Japan! Which country is this author from? Then let's talk about the magical operation of this protagonist. 1. It is never too late for a gentleman to take revenge after ten years. A man who buried a village detonating talisman in the whole Konoha village will set an example for you. If you don't learn from it, I will be drunk even if you run to the battlefield and die together with the enemy! Even if the protagonist has to die to activate the Goldfinger setting, you can also use other methods to make the protagonist die. This is so stupid that we don't have a sense of immersion. 2. Goldfinger sets the protagonist to be able to collect heat energy. If the protagonist uses the lowest level method to steal electricity from Konoha Power Station, I would be completely confused at that time. With the protagonist's ability at the time, it would be no problem to dig two to three thousand meters underground, not to mention digging deeper than Xin Xin? Two thousand meters underground remains at about 70 degrees all year round, and 3 kilometers underground is about 80 degrees! Isn't it enough for you to collect energy? 3. The protagonist can become a Decepticon. After collecting enough energy, he flies to Sunagakure Village and bombs from the air. Isn't he happy? The protagonist thinks about revenge all day long. Isn't it okay if Sunagakure Village is destroyed? Do you have to kill so many people on the battlefield? 4. There are more protagonists who can collect kinetic energy. Being able to collect kinetic energy means physical immunity! If you can directly push, why can you still fight with others in a lively manner? 5. Orochimaru reincarnated the protagonist through the protagonist's blood? I was full of questions at the time, didn't the protagonist have no blood? All of them have been replaced by nanobots!                                                                                                                                                               . Or the protagonist said that using the planet's magma to recharge himself would waste the life of the planet, but the Decepticons are not internal aircraft of the planet! Is he a spaceship? Can't you fly directly to the sun to bask in the sun? 7. There is still a charging problem: I already have a steel suit, is the energy furnace on the chest just a decoration? First use the ability tool to reveal the steel suit, and then use the energy furnace on the chest to charge yourself. Don't tell me no! Ordinary power stations in Konoha can fill you with energy, and the energy of the steel suit can upgrade you to countless levels. Alas... Goodbye author, I can't stand this book anymore!

The author should not forget the size of the moon in Naruto. There are always authors who design based on the size of the moon in reality. The size of the moon in Naruto, the size of the moon in reality is more than 3,400 kilometers. Even if the moon in Naruto can live in it, it will only be a few thousand people if it reaches the sky. After all, the number of people in the ninja family in Naruto is really small. A town now can accommodate tens of thousands of people. Even if the area for food cultivation and so on are added to the sky, it will only be more than ten kilometers. After all, The moon in Naruto doesn't even leave the atmosphere. After all, the earth's atmosphere is thousands of kilometers high. I don't think the moon in the Naruto world is more than 50 kilometers in the sky. It is more likely to be only more than ten kilometers. After all, it is only more than 200 kilometers from Guang'an, Sichuan to Chongqing. For example, let's talk about a more realistic question. If the moon in the Naruto world is calculated according to the actual size, the moon made by Liudao Sage is a newly made moon, but it is soil. Where did it come from? Of course it is drawn from the ground. How many tons of soil would it take to build a life-size moon? How many percent of the earth will be dug up? Even if the moon is only a few dozen kilometers away, has no one noticed the huge crater left behind? I can't imagine how big the giant crater that is hundreds of kilometers away is? After all, the moon is a sphere. In other words, its diameter is hundreds of kilometers. How much soil is needed? That's why I think the moon in the Naruto world is more than ten kilometers in the sky, and the smaller one may only be a few kilometers.

Don't look at it, it grosses me out. Originally, the free chapters were okay, but when it came to the paid chapters, I immediately ordered all of them. If you are careless, not only will your combat effectiveness be reduced, but you will also travel to World War II while fighting. The key is that new maps collapse faster. Even the novices ten years ago would not dare to write like this. Anyone who says I'm a sailor can take a look at my profile.

I'm convinced, I'm getting more and more boring, I'm broken, the story of Naruto is written as the War of Resistance

Yes, but the protagonist seems to be completely defeated by the magnetic escape. I think the protagonist should continue to upgrade his body.