Entertainment Biography of a Mercenary

The God of War returned from ten years of fighting and found that his wife and her eight-year-old daughter were living in a brothel and they were worried about competing for the top spot. With an order, one hundred thousand retired soldiers gathered to help his wife.

The introduction persuades you to quit. Isn't this the introduction to Bingou-ryu?

If it were the return of the King of Soldiers, shooting swords, soldier assaults, wolf warriors, and Operation Red Sea would be a bit of a match. The compatibility between your mercenary and the entertainment industry is so bad...

Is there any difference between it and Bingou-ryu? Didn't see it.

Is he still alive when the God of War comes home and finds his daughter sleeping in a pig pen, his wife mistakenly posts the medal for her useless husband online, and eight thousand beautiful bodyguards come overnight?

Rubbish, I don't understand why I have to change the lyrics to show that I can do it.

A mercenary lives on the edge of life and death every day, but he actually sheds tears because of a song? Do you believe it? Anyway, I won't believe it. I'll persuade you to quit after reading one chapter.

What's the relationship between the protagonist and the mercenaries? Didn't you see it?

Also a mercenary, do you think this is a good word? Just a desperado who can sell everything for money.

The introduction is too discouraging, I have no desire to read further.

The first chapter was pretty good, but the rest fell apart.

In the roar of artillery fire, the floating ashes seemed to be the cleansing rain. The houses destroyed by shells and the land plowed by bullets seem to tell the cruelty of war. The fragments of clothing floating with the flames, accompanied by the child's feeble cries, are dancing! The earth is shaking, the house is collapsing, the flames are reborn among the bodies of the shells, and next to the house is a man who is worse than dead. Death is not the end! At least, only for this man. Those like me who have never written a book know that this introduction is difficult to read, and you have to be careful in order to make the right money! Author. By the way, the Qing Dynasty died! ! !

I gave up when I saw "Serving the Country with Loyalty and Serving the Country". What the hell was that written about?

The author's writing style is very good, but taking out the classics and changing them to make them nondescript is not a tribute. And what do you think about using Michael Jackson's songs and dances to participate in variety music competitions? You should also consider the readers' feelings when writing novels. You can't just write how you like. The original introduction was very discouraging. Please ask the author to accept the magical power. The change has no sense of substitution at all. It really dissuades a large number of readers.

I can't stand it anymore. They make random changes and give away classics to others. Does the author lack love?

If you were a soldier king and came back to join the entertainment industry, you would be more interesting than traveling to a parallel world.

I thought he was still a mercenary, but it turns out he was on a sex show and slipped away.

This update is really annoying. When I read the latest chapter today, even the previous plot of the heroine was blurred.

I saw the lyrics about serving the country with loyalty. Keep up the good work, author! The lyrics really dissuaded many people!

Let me tell you, when I saw the word changes in Chapter 26, I couldn't stand it anymore. Entertainment articles place great emphasis on the sense of immersion. If you write your own lyrics, how can you make readers read it? Also, if you have plagiarized, don't feel guilty. This is not your problem alone. Many time-travel and rebirth genres have this bad way of writing. What is the difference between this way of writing and Jiulifang? Just copy it with peace of mind, don't be embarrassed. There are still many questions, so I won't go into details as I type. For the time being, the book will remain on the bookshelf. I will see if there is any improvement in my writing skills in the future.