Dressed as a Sadistic Girl with a Heavy Weight to Cultivate Immortality

It would be better not to accept the heroine as his apprentice, but to accept her as a cook and tell his apprentice to take precautions.

Just go back to 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 in order.

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Many cuties have misunderstood that Master Shifu is not cannon fodder, nor a villain, but just a supporting role. These things are grouped together, not divided into groups, and the types of characters are different. There is only some friction between Henzhi and his senior brother, but there is no hostile relationship. As for the master, he did not fulfill his responsibility, but he will protect Henzhi and is Henzhi's biggest supporter so far.

This senior brother and master are really disgusting, and it's disgusting to watch. I can't help but comment Can you create a good character image? Even if you make it look like a noob, don't write such a disgusting person. This is the first time I see such a disgusting person among the positive characters. . . .

I woke up in the middle of the night and suddenly thought that I can't fight alone, I need to have a clear direction. The author has no glass heart, even if he is in a mess like now, he is still willing to work hard for perfect attendance😭😭😭. Posting this post, I hope you can provide some writing opinions and know what everyone is thinking. For example, in terms of character creation (this effort), in terms of personality, or whether to set up some characters, the outline has been completed for the most part, and I have tried my best to meet everyone's requirements. In addition, it can also be said that some plot routines are also acceptable.

Most people don't want a male protagonist in fairy tales. They want the female protagonist to be a self-reliant person who works hard to cultivate immortality. There will be male protagonists in my novels, but they rarely appear. The emotional line with the male protagonist is also a part of cultivation, so he won't be stupid.