I Become the Supreme God in Konoha

The heroine feels that it is not necessary. If she really becomes the main god, her life level will be different.

This introduction, I just watched the clip of Black Gold on Station B yesterday

Some suggestions can be read by the author. They have been collected. If you have written them, you can continue to follow them. After reading the introduction, it's okay, but don't write about female protagonists. The main divine novels. Look at which of the gods has a female protagonist. Those who failed are written about female protagonists. In the later period, they are all about drinking pig's feet and conquering the world. Of course, if the author has novel ideas, he can give it a try, but it is best not to write a female protagonist. Instead, he can use the power of the main god to create a tool girl, because having a female protagonist will inevitably lead to resource tilt. This is a suggestion to the author, I hope you will adopt it

Guo Degang: If you are like the kind of person who advises people to be ignorant and generous without experiencing other people's suffering, you must stay away and be careful not to hit you with thunder.

I quite like the main style. Can't you just develop quietly? Other hostile force travelers will appear in the middle and later stages! At the beginning, you are on a collision course with other people's main god space. The first world clashed with a time traveler again. Knowing that this world has been invaded by time travelers or the main god space. How do you know that your golden finger is better than others'? The protagonist in the beginning is very cowardly. But he didn't consider the consequences at all. Be careful that as soon as you cross over, others will discover you and follow the network cable to catch you. Would a time traveler still be called a time traveler without a golden finger? It would be better to write about several worlds and accidentally meet a time traveler, only to realize that its golden finger is not as powerful as yours.

This novel is a pity. The author's writing style is very good, but there are only two mistakes: feeling too good about himself and forcibly weakening some parts of the world, especially Dragon Ball. This is a huge trap. I don't know who started it. They used private equipment to cut the Dragon Balls to a level that is worse than the ordinary Xianxia world. A bunch of people followed suit. Now they are really annoyed when they see someone forcibly cutting the Dragon Balls. The expressiveness of the original work is so great, but it still has to be forcibly modified. I am the only one who understands Dragon Ball better than Toriyama. There is actually only one point in writing a novel, which is logically smooth from beginning to end, and the point in writing a fanfic only needs to be based on the fact that it generally does not violate the original design - the fanfic has a basic score of the original work, which can attract fans of the original work, and since it is attracted, if it does not generally violate the original design, this basic score will be reduced. If you write a fan novel, and the total score is 100, the basic score of the original work will account for 40, and the remaining 60 points will be your writing. As for fans with multiple worldviews, it is impossible for different worldviews to collide without destroying part of the original design. What we have to do at this time is to only focus on expressiveness. If you are more expressive, you can't start writing it until later. You can't say that the protagonist doesn't need to be upgraded. I read a single chapter of the author, and they were all talking about why the readers are like this. However, the readers' comments about the author are just that the author destroyed the original design or the author forcibly weakened it. The above is what I felt when I read Chapter 86. I will continue to read this book. The writing is good. If the author can only recognize the expressiveness of the original work when there is a setting conflict in the future, I am sure it will be better. Above.

You deserve this book's failure. When you write about the behind-the-scenes story of the main god, you should know that readers don't like the big boss behind the scenes to end up personally and do serious things. Even if it is for the plot, they should do it quickly, accurately and ruthlessly, and do it directly.

The author's explanation of the single chapter between chapters sixty-four and sixty-five is a bit blind in the strength setting. In the manga, the strength of the three famous workers can be divided according to the Sea of ​​Dead Shadows, with One Piece being the weakest. In Bleach, with the storyline, the strength gradually reached the ceiling of the three major comics. Naruto followed various pits and recalled various conspiracies until finally the strength ceiling of Kaguya Otsutsuki came out. One Piece is different. Except for the early stage, the Grand Line is different from the beginning. The backgrounds of the Four Emperors, Admirals, Celestial Dragons, Hundreds of Years of World Government, Five Old Stars, Yoon Mu, Uranus and Sea King have already limited the upper limit, so let's not say that One Piece is not finished yet. Who knows whether the author will arrange more powerful characters. Book friends, we are not the original authors, but we can speculate based on the original background. If the author abruptly arranges characters beyond the limited background, it will not collapse. The author is not that stupid, unless it extends to hundreds of years before the establishment of the world government, or extends to alien visitors like the Naruto sequel.

To be honest, pirates are the weakest? Pirates have no mystery? Have you ever considered the origin of devil fruits? I remember the time fruits came out, right?

The writing is too messy and feels like a hodgepodge. Mainly because there's nothing interesting to watch. . Kato, the time-traveling Naruto, thought he was writing about his daily fandom with Shou Thou. It turned out not to be. I thought it was an invincible behind-the-scenes article about the plug-in main god system. As a result, this writing really stretched the crotch, and it made me look like a tool man with pig's feet. . When I came out of the chat group, I thought I was going to write daily pretentious and funny articles. It turns out not yet. . . I just want to know what you want to write about. Where to watch. .