I Became a Hole in the World

It's a good novel to read. It's a little bit toxic in the early stages, but just a little bit. It's not too toxic for me, so I can keep reading. The plot at the end is also quite good, the poison is gone, and the few pits dug in the early stage have been filled in. It has all kinds of cheerful pretentiousness, and the world view is quite large. It is very enjoyable to watch.

Specially for scolding after giving rewards, 37 I want to scold after watching it, and I can't bear it until 63. What kind of virgin bitch can come up with such a vicious plot? ? ? Gave 👴 vomiting

This is a good book, come on! Hope to see the ending👍✊

I just spent a dollar to complain. After reading Chapter 37, the more I think about it, the more angry I am. The plot is too poisonous and the main plot is forced to death. It is embarrassing and uncomfortable to watch. Why do you have to let such a cute little girl be abused? You abuse the protagonist. You can just write it. The protagonist is forced to accept the mission of the monk and let the protagonist resurrect the queen concubine. Why do you have to write such a 🌟🌟 plot. I was really happy to watch it at first, but now I am getting more and more angry when I think about it.

I'm just jumping on the street, and I don't know how to build a building. Anyway, I will try my best to keep the minimum of three updates every day, and work hard to add more updates, and strive to achieve the achievement of 10,000 words of updates per day. So, let's add an update on the 100th floor (emm, the requirement for this update should be very high). Supplement: Wow, you can't brush 😢, I blame me for not making it clear, so I will add an update today, and you are not allowed to brush again, the brushed ones will not count. 😭 Additional addition: emm, I forgot that I set the fan value speech limit, I don't blame you. 😥

To be honest, if this book was about a harem, I probably could have read it all the way to the end, but now I'm not sure. While creating ambiguity and various hints, I also established the protagonist's weird personality. To be honest, I don't like the protagonist's personality very much. The harem is great, as long as it is well written and not messed up. That would be much better than now. Don't look at Qidian. There are so many people who say they don't like reading harem novels, but as long as you read more books, you will find that harem novels are popular everywhere, and many authors are famous for this.

I have read Chapter 52 so far, u1s1, and those 3 chapters are really poisonous. I haven't calmed down yet. Now I am waiting to read Chapter 69. If it is not the finishing touch as the book friends said, I will give up. I suggest the author delete those 3 chapters without any modifications before and after. Although there will be an extra Su Yu'er in the book very suddenly, but I haven't read the book in those 3 chapters. Friends will not be so disgusted with this character. If you don't change it, your book will not do well after it is put on the shelves. After reading those 3 chapters, most of them can't stick to the paid chapters. Don't say anything, you have already reminded us to skip those 3 chapters. The more you say that, the more curious we are. 8 Out of 10 people will choose not to skip it. Out of 8 people who have read it, at most 2 will read the original version. You, the author, weigh it yourself.

Damn it, you have to give me a reward first when I spray you? ! ! ! Can we make the protagonist look like a human being? The first part was not bad, and I could just read it as a mindless novel, but in the end, I was force-fed a wave of poison and basically fed the book to death. After feeding, the protagonist becomes mentally ill again, or the kind that cannot be cured. Is it disgusting? Would it be too difficult for you to write a normal protagonist? Author, are you also in the advanced stage of psychosis like the protagonist?

I have read more than 60 chapters without skipping. I feel that what makes me most uncomfortable now is not those three chapters, but the ambiguity with the sister-in-law. While saying no, I am ambiguous at the same time. Why do you think you wrote it like this? If you don't want to just make your attitude clear, or if you want to, just accept it. Is it interesting to offend both sides like this?

I subscribed specifically to scold this sb! Reading this book makes me sick to death! There's a big problem with this fucking outlook!

Why cut? It's not that the writing failed. It is to test the water and then jump directly. I am no longer a novice author. I understand that if I continue to endure it and wait for the day I turn around, the chances are too low. I can't bear it, so I can only cut it and write it again. Until this one. This is the best result I have ever achieved since I started writing a book. Will it be cut? Every time I open the book, I never think about cutting it, but I do it every time, just because I want to test the waters and I have no choice but to cut it. You ask me if I should read this book. My answer is: "I have never thought about it from the beginning to now." Everything depends on the results. As long as the recommendation position is not lost, I will definitely keep working hard and write with all my strength. If you like it and enjoy watching it, please support it, collect it, and vote for recommendation every day. Your support is really, really, really important to an author. Finally, I would like to express my sincere and deep gratitude🙏.

It's nothing like the previous one. After all, the author said that the parents of the sister-in-law, niece and niece are all fake, so okay, I don't hate the harem after all, but the plot design of the copy is really confusing. To be more direct, the design is that the monk wants to sacrifice the little lolita, and is finally blown up by the pig's foot using the invincible blood lock. Then before death, the memory seal is broken, knowing the memory of Bianhua, asking the pig's foot to save this Daji, isn't this a harem +1? It's a bit too white, but this is a cool article, so there's nothing wrong with it, right? In the end, the dungeon was released and I looked for an opportunity to kill or something like this woman in black. Wouldn't the follow-up plot be coming? . You can't persuade so many prostitutes to quit, and you have to design such an unpleasant plot. For every 100 people who quit, there will always be a dozen or so who are willing to see it put on the shelves and subscribe, right? However, they were all persuaded to quit, and those who did not have enough poison resistance were directly killed in chapters 36 and 37! By the way, are there any authors who have trouble with money? Otherwise, it would be okay if your score on this book is more than twice as good, right? The subject matter is quite good, the writing is average, but the requirements for entertaining writing are not so high! It's just that the plot is too blunt, and it's impossible to retain people if it's free, let alone put it on the shelves. Finally, I just want to ask what the ending will be like between this woman and the woman in black... If the harem is really sweet, then I can't say anything.

Congratulations, I picked it up with a 100-point reward, I saw Chapter 14, I'm so disgusted, It's my first battle, Fight a monster Pretend to be cool for two chapters You put your hands in your pockets, You still have 100 dodge, You two sisters-in-law can be pregnant with twins for such a short time, You have the nerve to limit your speech, Hahaha!

The rest is pretty good, but there are problems with combos, and it's an extreme warrior. It's funny to have such high attributes. I wanted to complain about it before, but I couldn't help it when I saw the abyss monster in Chapter 96 writing out the data so fast. Let's talk about it first. You can hit so many combos against almost the same person. Can you be more careful? Such high attributes are like trying to hit level 20 when you are level 70. Have you ever played a game? You die in 1.2 Hits. You still get P hits. It's like you are level 60 in a dungeon and you go to fight level 10 goblins. How can you come up with combos? I saw that it took a few seconds to defeat a few monsters in 95, and I thought it was normal. However, in chapter 96, you hit the abyss monster again, and you hit a monster with 500,000 health for more than 4,000 health in one set. . . You are not a normal level 25 person, your level is just a decoration

I just want to ask, would anyone take in someone who almost killed his sister or daughter and let him watch over him every day? Whatever reason she had.

Last month, I got eight votes a day and still couldn't win the top vote😢

One body and one soul, you can also write exciting articles, write it step by step, write the characters with two souls more fully, readers will also like these two characters, slowly develop the plot to make a little sad, come up with two souls in one body, satisfy your self-interest, literary youth, or plot needs, there is no big problem. But what are you writing about? This book is positioned as a refreshing novel. Suddenly there is an inexplicable two souls in one body. You yourself said it is a bit abusive. Su Yuren and Xiaoya have two souls in one body. Do you think readers will accept it if you spend two or three chapters talking about the character Su Yuren? A character with a full image and personality that readers like does not need dozens or hundreds of chapters to slowly develop. Su Yuren, your writing style in these two or three chapters cannot reflect the depth of this character. It is too abrupt, so no one will like it. If you really want to have two souls in one body, I suggest that the haunted house dungeon be overhauled and the entertainment dungeon be interspersed with the story of Su Yuren, or this is the story memory dungeon of Su Yuren and her friends. Spend dozens of chapters to slowly tell the story of Su Yuren and her friends, and highlight the character of Su Yuren, so that readers have a three-dimensional understanding of this character. It was because of his existence that the villain came just for this soul. During the fight, Gu Xiaoya was in danger, but the kind-hearted Su Yuren tried to save Xiaoya's soul. It was about to dissipate and the copy was almost gone. Then Gu Xiu tried to save her. She triggers the bug, and Gu Xiaoya has two souls in one body. This is not much better than suddenly having two souls in one body. The character image is also full, and you can also write this copy to be bound to Su Yuren's soul, and give Gu Xiaoya a hook by the way. How nice. You are so sudden and so proud of yourself. Of course, it may be that I don't have enough skills to understand what you wrote. And some trolls, please don't criticize me. It's a free chapter now, and I rewarded you with 500 points for posting this. Although it's not much, I should be qualified to talk about it.

It's fine in the front, but in the back it becomes like an urban pretentious man teasing all kinds of women. The pretentious man is still the kind with overwhelming power. He will do it whether you want it or not. . . He vomited blood and died. . . I really can't hold on any longer, so I retreat.

No, why are you having an affair with your sister-in-law? What do you think? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Subscribe to a dedicated chapter of Lao Tucao I have just read Chapter 4. Your brother's daughter calls you uncle? ? ? ? ? Uncle is not a stranger who calls someone older than him uncle. Whose niece calls her father's younger brother uncle? Doesn't everyone call uncle uncle? How can such a close relationship be mistaken? ? If you make a mistake from far away, can you still understand it so close? ? Does the author have no relatives? Even if he didn't, didn't he look it up before writing this? It's outrageous that such basic common sense can be wrong.

Emmmmm, what do you say? It's a bit uncomfortable to watch (T ^ T) Just cheat properly. You fell in love with someone's sister and then ate his brother. You also said that his brother cannibalizes people. Didn't the protagonist also eat people? The key thing is that An Nan was not too touched.

The early part of this book is okay, just at 37. I really don't understand why I wrote it, but it doesn't work in the later part of the book. I suggest you give it up. The more you read, the less interesting it becomes.

I started following you from the book "Bandits in the Movie World" (seems like the name has a similar meaning)! Is that book your first book about "Bandits"? I have read basically every subsequent book, although I rarely leave messages. . . Speaking of which, time flies so fast. I had not graduated from school when you wrote your first book, and I have been working for 3 years now. . . I remember you got a 404 before you finished the book because you were driving 😃

Chapter 56: Poisoned to death... He also wants to kill his sister-in-law and niece, what the hell is this? Although it was said to be fake, I didn't know it at the beginning, so why did I say I didn't want to play with colors? I want to put a series of question marks, especially about that copy, it's so poisonous. I went to subscribe to a chapter just for the purpose of commenting. Farewell.

I came back at 11 o'clock to curse, and I have made it to chapter 42. I can't stand it anymore. I can bear it with my sister-in-law and my niece. In the 37th picture, I can still tell myself that I came to see the subject. In the 41st picture, my niece transforms into a virgin. It's outrageous. The poison resistance is not high enough. Sorry 🙂🙂

This is one of the best recent books

It's poisonous enough to kill you. If you want to read cool stuff, don't read it. It'll disgust you to death.

My niece is only 12 years old and she still wants to do it. She is a perverted pedophile.

The first time I entered the dungeon, I entered with a person who knew he had ulterior motives. After entering, a relative was killed (a relative who traveled through time for a few days), and then the protagonist did all kinds of ruthless things and was extremely poisonous.

Two recommendation votes a day, I'm very impressive 🙂